教科書の文章の要約文を50語くらいで書くのですが、おかしいところと 必要無い情報を教えてください

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3 炊はきいたま市大各区の中学校に通う Kenta と. ALTのMr Clarkが放課後の教室で行った会話 です。 これを読んで 問1 一問7に符えなさい。 邑のついている員句には, 本文のあとに(〔注 があります。(26上) Kenta Mr.Clark when did you come to Saitama? Mr.Clark : I came to Saitama in 2013. so Tve been here for two years Ilwe herein Kent : Omiya。 Kenta. 1 know you ive im Omiya too 1 have only lived here for six months。 We *moved from Chiba to Omiya this April But 1domtlike this *city so much When T was in Chiba there was a*beach near my house. and I enoyed a lot cf things there。 But in Omiya 1 can see only *buldings and 1 cannot (to/so/things/ fnd / enioy /many)、【 dont think this city js very interesting Mr.Clark : Tm Vsorry to hear that you dont like Omiya For me.is cooll There are Kenm a lot of things to see here For example it has a big shrine near Omiya Park 1 love the beautful jong *approach to the shrine. spd2 and I sometimes walk there in the morning and enioy the *fresh air. Alsowe have a famous "rallway museum, 1 hear alot of people from al over Japan Vit it to see Al the trains ICs ahways *crowded with people 1 hear there is a big raihway museum here. but 1 havemt visited it yet Mr.Clark : 1 like *Bonsai Vilage the best Did you know about the famous Aomsgi vilage in Omiya? 1 sometimes go there and jst walk around 1 viaed the*Bonsai Art Museum near the vilage last month and [-B | avery good dme 』 became friends with a Japaneee man there. and we talked a lot about Aosgf He sid that many foreigm *tourists visit the vilage Kenm Tm *surprised to hear that you Mike 2osgi so much Do many people know about 00Msgi in your country? Mr.Clark : Well I dont think so but 0okwgi are becoming more popular *Anyway.1 think Omiya has alot of interesting things to see. Kenta you need to learm more about your city Kent 1 see. Thank you for teling me so much abour Omiya Mr.Clark () move…引っ超す de御 each次洒 buiding…建物, ビル orry 残念な shroe……神杜 appromchn…針 freeh air新鮮な次所 railway museum……鉄首情物館 crowded with -……ーでにぎやかな Bonssi Vilage……効村 Bonsai Art Museum……稚美術館 touditrew…誠行者 surprieed……臣いて anyway "いずれにしても

動詞のsurpriseの過去分詞はsurprisedで 　　　　　　　　現在分詞はsurprisingですが 形容詞にsurprisedと　　 　　　　surprisingがあります どのように使いわければ良いのでしょうか 教えてください

The news surprised me. のsurprisedは分詞なのか、surpriseという動詞の過去形なのか教えてください。 また、分詞の方では「驚かされた」 　　　動詞の過去形の方では「驚いた」ではなく 　　　　「驚かされた」と訳すこのは何故ですか

The news was surprised to me. は現在進行形ですか。

toのところをatにしてしまったんですけど、to とatの使い分け方を教えてほしいです！！

驚くって単語、現在形、過去形に関わらず be surprised を使うのですか？