英作文の添削をどなたかお願いいたします( .. )♡

応用編 20分 書こう! 解答>「解答&解説」P.30~P.31 次の1~4の絵が一連の話になるように【絵の説明】 の中の O に適当な英語 を書きなさい。英語は2文以上になってもかまいません。なお, 文末にはビリオド()また はクエスチョンマーク(?)をつけなさい。また,あとの注を参考にしなさい。 (15点)(17 新 してもかまいません。 (15点×2= 30点) (*17 長崎県B) 【絵の脱明 kick ~ ~を蹴る 上がって~に入る go up in - reach out ~ ~を伸ばす 腕 arm One day Tom ws at home Taro Hs mother sad "Tm ong o make dinneす。 コ Tom answered"An omelette His mother said. "OK. ITI make it Please g to the shop to buy some eggs" He answered. "No problem" Yesterday Taro saw two boys who were playing soccer in the park. 3 (2) 夜のニュース番組で, 明日の千葉県(Chiba)の天気を伝えています。 この場面で、 アナカ ンサーの質問に対して気象予報士は何と答えると思いますか。その言葉を英語で書きなさい。 ただし、語の数は20語程度 (.,?!などの符号は語数に含まない。)とすること。 (15点)(17 千葉県前期) Tom came home one bour later. His mother said "Why did you come bome s0 Late Tomorrow's Weather How will the weather be in Chiba tomorrow? Tom said, "Tm sorry. 1 saw an old woman. His mother said, "You are very kind. Tm happy to hear that. Dinner will be ready S00n (注) omelette オムレツ late 遅く

3番で年賀状をおくるいくつかのひとはもらった友達は心地よくなると英語で作りましたが間違っているところがあるので指摘してください‼︎

メールにまる 拶 (New Year's greetings) について, 話をしているときのものです。 それぞれ1文または2文で書きなさい。 ただし、 の ~の 13 次の英文は、あなたがALT(外国語指導助手)と, 年賀状 (New Year's postcards) やp。 に入 |内に示されている英語で (平成29年 あなたの あなたは、 文は、あな については、それぞれの こと。 3) ただし 信トレイ で m e-mail HAPPY NEW YEAR ALT: Which do you want to use for your New Year's greetings, New Year's postcards or e-mails? You:|0 I ALT:Why do you want to do that AL You:| 2 Because Y ALT: But some people may choose the ot.her way for their New Year's greetings. Please guess why You:3 ALT:I see. There are good things about both ways. Now, what is important-when you give New Year's greetings? You: の Because 2 イ 一)

かっこ3は、年賀状を送るいくつかの人がそれをもらった友達はここちよくなるとやくしたのですが、文法でどこがまちがっているかしてきしてほしいです！

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これの（1）はなぜdidがいらないんですか？ 回答は3枚目です

1 次の英文は, ある新聞の投稿欄に掲載されたものである。 英文を読んで, あとの問いに答 えなさい。 (福 井) We have a lot of problems around us. When the problems are too big, we think we can't solve them. But if we look at the problems from a different view, we can sometimes find the answers. I will tell you about Mexico City. It is not as large as Tokyo, but it has more people than Tokyo. It is ina high place and it has only one big river. So it is difficult to get enough water. About 160 years ago, many people began to use water under the ground. Do you know what happened after a lot of people used too much water under the ground? Yes. The ground went down very much. That was a big problem. Then people in Mexico City looked at this problem from a different view. Some people thought, “How about using the place that went down?”、Other people thought, “Can we use the water we have already used again?” They put the water into the place. Soon it became a kind of lake. People made the water clean and used it again. We have an example in Japan, too. In big cities it is especially hot in summer. There are many reasons, and we know one of them. There are not so many trees in the big cities., If there are many trees, they can give us some shade in many places and the températúre around us will go down. But the big cities have few places for trees because they have a lot of huildinos Some penle thouoht about the problem hard TThen thev 1aorod ota building

私の書いた英文を添削していただきたいです🙇🏻 都立入試に向けての問題です。 (クオリティがとても低いですが…)

次の文章は,英語の授業で Maiが行ったスピーチの内容である。この文章を読んで, あとの各問に答えよ。 She came to Japan with her family from China last year. Her father is Chinese and her mother Last month, she began to work as a volunteer in Japan. She does volunteer work at the hospital Today I'm going to talk about my friend, Lin. is Japanese, so she speaks both Chinese and Japanese. pear here every Saturday. Iasked her, “Whydo vou work as a volunteer at the hospital? She ons 9mon answered, "When Iwas sick in the hospital in China. Italked with someone and I felt happy. She thinks talking can make sick people better sometimes. Last Saturday, I went to the hospital with her and talked with a girl in the hospital, She said to Lin, “Thank you, Lin. Iwant to talk with you again,” Lin looked happy then. Iwas very happy, too. Ofcourse, Lin will go there to see her again. NowI think I should start something, too. I'd liketo do something for other people. How about you? Thank you for listening.

①と②の（）は何が入りますか？

Kate, my next question. Ms. Jones: Japanese anime did. 1 became a big fan of Japanese anime when I was in university. By watching it, I got interested in Japanese culture and started thinking about studying it in Japant was difficult for me to decide to go abroad at that time. w o1 Ayaka: 【 d 】 eTupos ac Ms. Jones: After a while, I had a chance to talk about it with Rvan, my brother. Then, 1 gol goou ) go to Japan. You should go and see Japanese culture with your own eyes.” I thought that I should follow his advice. And I decCided to advice from him. He said, If I were you, I ( come to Japan. Now I think he was right. Ayaka: That's impressive. Well, do you talk about Japanese anime with your students '? Ms. Jones: Of course. I'm learning a lot about it from them. We enjoy talking about it ( )in 120 English and in Japanese. I can practice speaking Japanese, too. T oni Ayaka: 【 e 】 alg owl sta Col wot As. Jones: They often as no slaib k me about Australia. And I tell them about life in my country and culture It gives me good chances to think about our own culture again. I think thinking about your ot ulture is also important when you study foreign languages. ka:Ill remember that. Well. Kate. Thank vou verv much for todav

分からないので教えてください！

問2 [ く問3·問4 4点×4, その他 3点×4> ア [対話文読解] 7 作械は,借りていた CD を返しにビリーの家を訪れています。これを読んで, 後の各 問に答えなさい。 伏は、高校生の香織 (Kaori) と, アメリカ出出身のビリー(Billy)との対話です。 ウ オ Billy : Good! T'm glad to hear that. Which song do you like the best? Kaori : I like the last song. Kaori : Thank you, Billy. This CD is wonderful. I like all the songs on it. 問 Billy : Me, too. It's one of my favorite songs. Kaori:[ A Billy:I have about fifty. Kaori:Oh, really! You have a lot of CDs. By the way, are you free next Sunday? Billy : In the morning I'm going to visit Ms. Sato to learn Japanese. She's my Japanese teacher. But Ill be home about eleven. Kaori :I have two tickets for the baseball game next Sunday. Would you like to go with me? Billy:Sure! [ B Kaori : At two in the afternoon. before the game? Billy : That'sa good idea. Where shall we mee Kaori: There is a hamburger shop near the stadium. Let's eat lunch there. Billy :OK! [ C ] Kaori :By bus or by subway. Billy:I think going by bus is better. Kaori:OK, let's go by bus. Should I come to your house? Billy : No, I'll go to your house at about eleven thirty. Kaori:See you next Sunday. (注) by the way ところで ticket…チケット hamburger…ハンバーガー subway … 地下鉄 問1 部 that が指している内容を, 日本語で答えなさい。

この文だと6点中4点でした何がダメだったのか教えてください！！見にくくてすいません！！

(3) 次の質問に対するあなた自身の答えを,下の条件にしたがっ て30語程度の英語で書きなさい。 ただし,1文は4語以上とし, 記入例 You have nice pen. a 記入例にならうこと。 Want to play soccev, I have two Veasons. Fivst, I practiced SocceV very lavd. when wAS junio high sehool. Sccond. Ploying soccevr is vevy exciting tor me. When you become a high school student, what do you want to do? 1 〈条件)したいことを一つ挙げ, まとまりのある英文を書くこと。 *中学校での経験をふまえた内容にすること。 I

これは何について答えれば良いですか？

Hello, Alice, Thank you for your e-mail. I am happy because you are having good days with your friends. And I'm glad because you found your wallet. I think the man is very kind, too. I have had the *same kind of experience as yours, When I *was in trouble, a kind person helped me. I'll tell you about the experience. 1 was very happy. Now, I think I have to be a kind person, too. Write to me again soon!

英作文の添削をお願いします🙇‍♀️ ①You should visit in summer.②The summer festival is held. You can play games and eat delicious foods.

about Easter ? Easter is an important holiday in the U.S., and its date changes every year. Iil 次は、アメリカ (the U.S.)に住む,あなたの友人である Peter から届いたメールです。こ 以上の英語を書きなさい。 (4点) ) to the center again? MD FUX picture book for them. Miku: That sounds interesting! ( Miku: Oh, I see. Can I see it when you finish ? Joseph: Of course! o 5 を読んで,間1~間3に答えなさい。 *印のついている語には, 本文のあとに[注)があい (12点) Thank you for your e-mail last week. How are you ? Easter. Do you knon Last Saturday, I went out with my family to buy new clothes for 2019, it was on the third Sunday of April. Easter eggs are al On Easter, many families wear new clothes and buy "Easter eggs. symbol of Easter. Many families in the U.S. *prepare Easter eggs, and a lot of children Inm looking for Easter eggs that their families *hide for them. I have a little sister, so this week Im going to prepare some Easter eggs for her. Last year, I put Easter eggs in the garden, bu. this year, I'm going to hide Easter eggs in the house. There are a lot of good places to hide l them. For example, I can hide them under tables, on chairs, or behind doors. My little sister loves looking for Easter eggs. I like spring the best because of Easter. I think spring is a good season to visit the U.S. How about Japan ? If I visit Japan, which. season should I visit in ? hope I can see you soon. 【注) Caster… …イースター(復活祭) Easter egg……イースターエッグ (イースターに贈り物とする彩色した卵, チョコレートで作った卵) 19r symbol…象徴 prepare ~ ~ を準備する hide 開1 Potor t …………….を歴 十 n010 の