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Jath sa fH55. On Angust 6, 1945 ped OVer At least 130,000 pe。 1 Ble 7 an 中 It began Hiroshim 9. Th。 atorniC b destroyed the Gt bom the 7e3r ied by the end of 中wo-year-old Sasaii Sadako survivedi BE class. She wanted to b Si en she greW DP・ mn the sixth grade sh Na ber of the relay team for e d as a mern rvery haPP yas selecte ssports day made he 選 About3a month after th octors thought that he + snddenly becarne sick. Thed “rt wi be fcul sickness carne from the bomb. her to jive for more than one yea5 8 六 フ doctor said for to Sadakos parentS. ア school Sadako could run 令 ! St e sports da Sadak。 * 10 本 。 Jn the hospi cranes. She r PaL Sadako recay き証に emm ed s embered the NN Some paper mfyou make a 中ousand cx aeS, You w get wall> S ・ She made many for good healtb。 EOID 2 sh hospital. Herlife ended when Po NN as only twelve cranes. She made a wish 。 1 n them She didnmt lose her hope, b but 正 。 After Sadi 5 に Pe ed it was 中fficult for h 1 和 Ni 結 They built a statue JRfeni 0 Hirosbima Peace Memoral oh ny people send paper cranes to around the world。 The cranes are for Sadako and for peace L226 words1

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