英作文の添削をお願いします。 文法の間違いやここを直せばもっと良くなるなどの意見もよろしくお願いします！

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I want to study English when I become a high school student because I want to speak English. My dream is talking with foreign peoples. So... Read More

誰か、これについての英作文を何パターンでも構いません、教えて欲しいです。

(注) Mike マイク(男性の名)

英作文の書き方のコツ教えてください！ いつも点数とれません

この文章で合ってますか？

Sh 六 DI この昌題に対してとのょっ に答えます ききカにならい。 24上の 2 のこのとします で自由に に書きなさい、 ただし. 英文は2文以上e と っグラフは, ある町においで 氷寺 次 | .必た5のでま 3ここにGT また | み として活動することしたら』だの うなことをしますおが: ゃoe つい 司板人 民 |

I have a lot of friend.や What a big lantern.などの a はどうして付くんですか？ aの付く文(例 Satoru is reading a book.) などが本当に苦手なので分かりやすく教えて下さい！m(_ _)m

reading a bookとreading bookの違いはなんですか？

問2はnameじゃダメですか？

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これってどんな感じで英作文書いたほうがいいと思いますか？

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これってどんな英作文を書いたらいいんですかね？

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