明日 ２次試験つまり面接なのですが YES と　OK って何がちがうのですか？？

英検三級のライティングの問題を解いたのですが、どうですか？添削お願いします🙇‍♀️

要約文を50語くらいで書くのですが、何かおかしいところとか どの情報が必要ないのか教えてください

Jath sa fH55. On Angust 6, 1945 ped OVer At least 130,000 pe。 1 Ble 7 an 中 It began Hiroshim 9. Th。 atorniC b destroyed the Gt bom the 7e3r ied by the end of 中wo-year-old Sasaii Sadako survivedi BE class. She wanted to b Si en she greW DP・ mn the sixth grade sh Na ber of the relay team for e d as a mern rvery haPP yas selecte ssports day made he 選 About3a month after th octors thought that he + snddenly becarne sick. Thed “rt wi be fcul sickness carne from the bomb. her to jive for more than one yea5 8 六 フ doctor said for to Sadakos parentS. ア school Sadako could run 令 ! St e sports da Sadak。 * 10 本 。 Jn the hospi cranes. She r PaL Sadako recay き証に emm ed s embered the NN Some paper mfyou make a 中ousand cx aeS, You w get wall> S ・ She made many for good healtb。 EOID 2 sh hospital. Herlife ended when Po NN as only twelve cranes. She made a wish 。 1 n them She didnmt lose her hope, b but 正 。 After Sadi 5 に Pe ed it was 中fficult for h 1 和 Ni 結 They built a statue JRfeni 0 Hirosbima Peace Memoral oh ny people send paper cranes to around the world。 The cranes are for Sadako and for peace L226 words1

教科書の文章の要約文を50語くらいで書くのですが、おかしいところと 必要無い情報を教えてください

Jath sa fH55. On Angust 6, 1945 ped OVer At least 130,000 pe。 1 Ble 7 an 中 It began Hiroshim 9. Th。 atorniC b destroyed the Gt bom the 7e3r ied by the end of 中wo-year-old Sasaii Sadako survivedi BE class. She wanted to b Si en she greW DP・ mn the sixth grade sh Na ber of the relay team for e d as a mern rvery haPP yas selecte ssports day made he 選 About3a month after th octors thought that he + snddenly becarne sick. Thed “rt wi be fcul sickness carne from the bomb. her to jive for more than one yea5 8 六 フ doctor said for to Sadakos parentS. ア school Sadako could run 令 ! St e sports da Sadak。 * 10 本 。 Jn the hospi cranes. She r PaL Sadako recay き証に emm ed s embered the NN Some paper mfyou make a 中ousand cx aeS, You w get wall> S ・ She made many for good healtb。 EOID 2 sh hospital. Herlife ended when Po NN as only twelve cranes. She made a wish 。 1 n them She didnmt lose her hope, b but 正 。 After Sadi 5 に Pe ed it was 中fficult for h 1 和 Ni 結 They built a statue JRfeni 0 Hirosbima Peace Memoral oh ny people send paper cranes to around the world。 The cranes are for Sadako and for peace L226 words1

英検の問題です（準二） この写真の問題で、I think it is good for children to have birthday parties with their friends. と始めに書いたんですが、丸ですか？三角？バツ？ですかね？... Read More

No, 1dont.1have two reasons. First, children cannot invite all their friends, so some of their friends cannot go.This is bad for their friendships. Second, parents have to prepare for the party and then clean after the party. That is very hard work, and many parents are too busy to have children's birthday parties.

これの答えを教えてください。 The Story of Sadako It began with a flash. On August 6, 1945, an atomic bomb was dropped over Hiroshima. The bomb dest... Read More

ET 細かい内容をおさそや 下の質問に答えよう。 7) What happened on August の②) What did Sadako hope to be whe (3) What did Sadako's SickneS8 CO from? 《) Whar was Sadako's wish while she WaS making DaDer CraneS? (5 After Sadako died, what did her friends do? 6, 1945? n she was in elementary school

英語の作文についてなんですが、 写真でおかしいところはありますか？ 直したほうがいいところなど教えて下さい 特に前置詞とかが不安です theってanに変えたほうがいいんですかね？ もうすぐテストで記述でこのような問題が出ると思うので解答お願いします

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