英検一級のライティングの添削をお願いしたいです。 Should the Japanese government encourage more immigration? というトピックで書きました。よろしくお願いします。

The Japanese government should encourage more immigration Problems such as lack of diversity, Japanese companies retreating from the world declining birth rate 39 there is a because market, and aging population with a can be solved by increasing immigration. Japan, although it is one of the advanced countries, lack of diversity. Except of big cities like Tokyo, there are only few foreigners. I think this is a set back to Japan while other countries are stepping foward by changing its own system, Japan is refusing to make a change to its old style, and I believe this is because Japan doesn't have abundant. perspectives. foreign countries to. By encouraging more immigration, they can provide many different views and stimulate Jahanese people. as of what does other countries. a image Japanese companies are retreating from the world market. Many Companies in Japan are producing overeng ineered expensive products that only targets Japanese customers and it is losing its power in other countries : If Japan accepts more immigrants Japanese companies. will be able to get detailed regire to their product and stay in the world market. Aging population and a declining birth rate is a huge problem in Japan right now. Because of it, companies are losing workers and young people will have to saffer with a lot of taxes in the future. Encouraging immigration can increase population and solve. these problems more By encouraging more immigrations, many problems that Japan is facing can be solved.

問題が英語ですみません。あるイオン(mg/kg=ppm)が海（1.027 g/mL）にある時のの密度（M）の求め方がわかりません。 chlorideの場合、0.531や 0.546Mなど試しているうちに答えが複数出てきてしまいどうやるのが正解か分からなくなってしまいました。... Read More

TAKE-HOME QUIZ: Solutions 1. The table below gives concentrations of ions in natural waters. a) Given the densities indicated, determine the molarity of each of the ions. Attach work. [9.750 1950 OCEAN: 1.027-1022 10.7768 mL ion name chloride sodium sulfate magnesium calcium potassium bicarbonate bromide strontium average OCEAN concentration mg/kg (ppm) molarity (M) 19350 (9.3514A 10760 2710 1290 411 399 142 0.14 67 0.067g 8008 7 Nat 7+ 10 ( 39+ L 16 Ca²+ 32+ M = mo RIVER: 1.003 b) All solutions must be CHARGE BALANCED, meaning the total number of positive charges must equal the total number of negative charges. Here's an example: average RIVER concentration mg/kg (ppm) molarity (M) 5.750.0575 5.15 0.0515 8.250.0825 3.350003 13.400134 1.30001 520.052g N/A N/A mL 13 SO4²- 26- total charge: balance: Demonstrate that seawater is charge balanced based on the information in the table. 39- 13 Cr 13-

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添削お願いします。 【質問】あなたは夏にお祭りに行くのが好きですか。 Yes, I do. Because we can play Syateki, Kingyosukui, Kujibiki, and so on. Also we able to see a lot of... Read More

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一枚目　長文 二枚目　問題 三枚目　答え 二つ聞きたいことがあります ①写真全部使います！えっと…なんでこの記述が答えになるのか写真の問題について解説お願いしたいです。 ②長文の写真についてです。上にある付箋のところらへんにserve themselvesと書いてありま... Read More

14 I of Po To themselve) serve 名訳 詞 AND INFRASTRUCTURE Reading 目標 20分 速読問題 次の英文を2.5分で読んで、 1. の問いに答えなさい dran. (the) A new *retail concept was introduced in the United States when the first self-service *grocery store named Piggly Wiggly/opened in 1916 cenfiones bring a shopping list to a neighborhood store and wait while a store clerk collected the containers. items they wanted and measured out products like *flour and rice from large (一方で)⇒新しい (2) On the other hand, Piggly Wiggly gave customers baskets and asked <食べ物の状態で) them to serve themselves. They filled their baskets with packets of flour and rice, The shelf ASSA 複数形 JSBURCTC- DRESS K (食料品) cans of vegetables, and other groceries from the store's shelves. 1916/ Before that, customers used to (3Sales at Piggly Wiggly were higher than at other stores, I& 190 19901990 Jasty & eaim 'no sow owi Jasl lliw elaz odT (一般的に) typically bought more when they *made their own selections. th in order to draw customers to their products EI 19dmsvol JU (棚) Soon Piggly Wiggly AMDES (まねする) (42) anel hiny-1sque euiq esment zasip sms hoomal (Copy) 10 expanded to become a chain of stores, and other markets copied the self-service (拡張する) (4) 1 retail [rí:teil]: 9 make a selection : 2 grocery store : 12 aspect [æspekt]: 15 a mibns2 vol (製造会社) business. For example, food manufacturers started using more attractive (魅力的に) 29anol yuleup-dyid bemoqm) model. The modern supermarket was born.) 02.0re of beinuoseid Jo labom Jestal erit of egnerlaxe ens] It influenced not only the way people shopped but also (5 other *aspects of the food *** s. because customers 100-yabirt no quitate ahoge tol esment Iripiew-trip packaging Seunitnoo elsa ari lliw gnal woH dolo to bas sdi is gaini (168 words zabiy zon lunu 4 flour [fláuǝr]: yo larw zranal modił w 250l baroqul

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Animal Reading 目標 20分 速読問題 次の英文を2.5分で読んで, 1. の問いに答えなさい。 コー One day I was walking with my dog on a mountain. It was a fine day, and I felt good. eventext neblo My dog was running here and there around me. Suddenly he stopped and began to (突然) (Pol) move very carefully. When I looked toward him, I saw a baby *sparrow behind a tree. Tvom 20 tohside.] & (nton) (a3e312) nibes biqui It was so young that it couldn't yet move. My dog was going to catch it. (Just then brid yded a qls Or Leuten zi nirvoy bruodino (otain) 5 the mother sparrow cried out, came down 970519 nose. (fly from the tree, and flew just under the dog's od com toiltom all gainst) ni od zem hid (2)She wanted to help her baby. She did not think about herself. To the sparrow the dog was a monster. How large the dog looked to the sparrow! eirit to seura The mother sparrow was not afraid of anything, so she was able to fly down from 1979woll the tree to the dog. Then my dog stopped moving, and watched the bird for a lemins vigoud syd bodontie od lliw ibrid yded or qu diq j'aob vozli s 10 while. Soon he began to move back. He felt that the sparrow was not afraid at all. mod bridded surgi (原艇) slil z vez lliw toq s26 92157 07 I was impressed by how brave the mother bird was I knew she loved her baby impressed deeply I called my dog back and left the place. 14 (4 3 sparrow [spárou] : ^^^ Wel CAN-DO List □ 1. この <知識・技能〉 第2文型について理解できる。 <思考力・判断力・表現力〉 動物の親子の愛情について的確に理解できる。 a. (189 words) b d. 精読 2. 下 3. 4. 5. 6