英検準1級ライティングの添削をお願いしたいです！何を書いているか全くわからなければ、言ってもらえると… あと、筆記試験90分の間でライティングを書かないといけないんですけど、本当にライティングが苦手で、少しでも短時間で良い文章を書くコツを教えてください！具体的に言えば、英文... Read More

Write an essay on the given TOPIC. OUse TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer. Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion Suggested length: 120-150 words TOPIC or disagree: More companies will allow employees to work from 情報セキュグ 危ない disag Agree home in the future POINTS ●Information security Communication Recruitment Cost reduction I do 1 仕事の内容の 外部漏れの危険 1 not agree home in the future and I have two reasons to support Day 2 Day 3 ・直接コミュニケーションをとれない一誤解を招くおそれ (記録をしないと) 相手と商談や会議等の連絡をメールや コスト削減。 電話しないといけない手間がかかる。 Day that more companies will allow employees to work from 4 this opinion... on One of the reason is that employees cannot communicate on meet easily. They have to keep in touch with partner about importan things such as meetings the phone or e-mail, so they might take so much time to do this. Also, might make mistakes if they do not communicate on the phones or e-mail without s keep records of communication. Day they Another of the reason is that it companies might need to improve employees houses information security.. If do not do this, documents might be seen by companies many people such as employees' familys, and visitors to them, For these reasons abore, more companies will not allow employees to work from home if these problems are solved. total: 143 words Da 6

英検準1級のライティングです。 どなたでも構いません。添削をお願いしたいです！何を書いているか分からなければ、聞いてもらって全然大丈夫です。ていうか、読んだだけでは、全く理解できないと思います。 近日中に受けるので、明日の夕方頃までにお願いします🙏

Write an essay on the given TOPIC. Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer. Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion Suggested length: 120-150 words TOPIC Do you think that gas-powered cars will be replaced by electric cars in the near future? 電時の排出 POINTS 走行エネルギーの asse). Environment Convenience #1124-Kat #veg Cost Industry 高速産 ・充電せった コストが高い 産業限られた 短いきが しが ・使用者が買いかえようとは 思わない 2:33. 1 充電スペースの 2015 3. cars will be replaced by electric cars I do not think that gas-powered opinion. in the near future, I have two reasons to support this One reason is that it may be not convenient for people to drive electric cars in these days society. For example, electric cars take more time to charge than gas-powered cars. Moreover, electric cars can run few distance. Onother reason is that electric cars cost a lot of money in the many situation. For example, people who use electric, cars usually sex charging places at the each houses, but they have to pay so much cash to do it, Also, they need to prepare too much money every month to charge electric Propte cash, For these reasons above, I believe that gas-powered cars will be replaced by electric cars in the near future. total: 179 words

英検２級のライティングです。 添削をお願いしたいです😿

It is often said that restaurants, and supermarkets should try to reduce the amount of food that they throw away. Do you agree this opinion? I agree the opinion that restaurants and supermarkets should try to reduce the amount of food that they thinw I have two reasons to support this opinion. Firstly, It is bad for the enviroment two throw away the food. To throw away the food lead to global warming Secondly, reducing food waste is one of critical factors Developing contries have a lack of safe food If wealthy countries reduce the amount of food that they throw away, people in developing countries will happy. for these reasons f mentioned above, I believe that we should reduce the amount of food that the restraunts and supermaket's throw away,

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2015 No. Date ライティング 1 agree that all people should be able to enter museums for free. I have two reasons. First of all, It is easy for more much people to visit museums. Because of, Entering museums for free is helpful for poor" people and people who want to save money. ss1 Second, donations of people can support running museums. must donate museums People who want to learn in museums a lot of money"! For these reason, I think that all people should be able to enter museums for free. Do you agree with this opinion? I 92

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英語 Amy: Hey Jake, I was thinking about online shopping this weekend. Do you shop online often? Jake: Yeah, I do it quite a bit. It's so ( house and you can ( ) almost anything online. That's true. I love the convenience, too, especially with a busy schedule. But I've heard there are some downsides to it. What do you think? Well, one obvious downside is not being able to ( ) or try the product before buying. Sometimes, what you see on the website isn't exactly what you get. Amy: Yeah, that's a good point. I've had a couple of instances where the color or size was ) from what I expected. ( Another thing is the shipping time. Even with express shipping, you might have to ( ) a few days for your stuff to arrive. It's not great if you need Amy: Jake: Jake: Amy: Amy: Jake: Jake: Jake: something urgently. True, waiting can be frustrating. But what about the ( that sometimes the prices are higher online. It depends. I've found some great deals online, especially during sales. But you're right; in some cases, the prices can be a bit inflated, and you might end up paying more than if you bought it in-store. Amy: And returns can be a hassle, too. I had to return a shirt once, and the process took forever. It's not as easy as just going to a store and returning it on the spot. Yeah, returns can be a pain. Also, there's the whole security issue. You must be careful about where you're buying from to avoid scams or stealing your ( ). Amy: Oh, definitely. I always make sure the website is secure before entering any payment details. 日本語 L ), you know? No need to leave the On the bright side, online ( ) can be super helpful. I always check them before making a purchase. It gives you an idea of the product's quality and whether it's worth the money. Amy: That's a good point. I do the same. It's like having the opinions of a bunch of friends who've already ( ) the product. Jake: Exactly. So, while there are some drawbacks, I think the ( ) of online shopping, like the convenience and variety, outweigh the ( ) for me. Yeah, I agree. It's all about finding a balance and being cautious about where and what you're buying. )? I've heard

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この英作文を添削していただきたいです。 英検準一級の練習問題です。 問題)Agree or disagree: Japanese companies should hire more foreign workers. ルール)・四つのポイント(aging populatio... Read More

理科 火山 写真の問題の⑶と⑷の解き方が分かりません💦 解説をお願いします🙇‍♀️

②2 次の観察]と[実験] を行った。 これについて、以下の(1)~(5)の各問いに答えなさい。 2種類の火成岩X, Yの表面をルーペで観察した。 図1は､このときのスケッチであ る。 火成岩Xには、カンラン石やキ石などの比較的大きな鉱物の結晶と,そのまわりの 細かな粒の部分Pが見られた。 火成岩Yには、セキエイヤクロウンモなどの大きな鉱物 の結晶だけが見られた。また、鉱物Qは,火成岩X,Yのどちらにも共通して多く見ら れた。 図1 カンラン石 キ石/ ペトリ皿A ミョウバンの 約80℃の湯 水溶液 火成岩Y 火成岩X [実験] 60℃の湯にミョウバンをとかして、濃いミョウバンの水溶液をつくり, ペトリ皿A 〜Cに同量ずつ入れた。 図2のように、 ペトリ皿Aは約80℃の湯につけ. ペトリ皿B は氷水につけて, それぞれ60分間おいた。 ペトリ皿Cは約80℃の湯につけて30分間お いた後、氷水につけて30分間おいた。その後、ペトリ皿A~Cをとり出してミョウバ ンの結晶のようすを調べると, 結晶の粒の大きさにちがいが見られた。 図2 ペトリ皿C ミョウバンの 約80℃の湯 水溶液 ペトリ皿B -3- 氷水 クロウンモ セキエイ ペトリ皿C 氷水 ミョウバンの 水溶液 SUPRAPRO (1) 図1で. 火成岩Xに見られた細かな粒の部分を何というか。 (2) 図1の火成岩X, Yに見られた鉱物について述べた文として最も適切なものを,次のア~エ から1つ選び、記号で答えよ。 ア 鉱物Qはカクセン石で, カクセン石やクロウンモなどは無色鉱物である。 イ鉱物Qはカクセン石で, カクセン石やクロウンモなどは有色鉱物である。 ウ鉱物Qはチョウ石で,チョウ石やセキエイなどは無色鉱物である。 鉱物Qはチョウ石で、チョウ石やセキエイなどは有色鉱物である。 (3) 〔実験〕で,ペトリ皿 A~Cの結晶の粒の大きさにはどのようなちがいがあったか。 A~C を結晶の粒が大きいほうから順に並べ、記号で答えよ。 (4) 図1の火成岩Xのでき方は、[実験] のペトリ皿A~Cのどの結晶のでき方と似ているか。 また、火成岩Yの名称は何か。 その組み合わせとして最も適切なものを、次のアーカから1つ 選び,記号で答えよ。 ア イ ウ エ オ カ 火成岩Xのでき方 ペトリ皿A ペトリ皿A ペトリ皿B ペトリ皿B ペトリ皿 ペトリ皿 火成岩Yの名称 花こう岩 玄武岩 花こう岩 玄武岩 花こう岩 玄武岩 R (5) 図3は、2種類の火山の形を図3 模式的に表したものである。 R. Sの形の火山について述べた次 の文の1にあてはまる言葉 斜のゆるやかな形 を答えよ。 また、2にあてはまる火山の形を、図3のR, Sから1つ選び,記号で答えよ。 火山をつくるマグマのねばりけは、図3のRの形の火山のほうが また、図1の火成 。 岩Xのもとになるマグマがつくる火山の形は、図3の2 のようになる。 おわんをふせたような形 答え (3)A>C>B (4) オ -41

英検準2添削お願いします 質問はDo you think it is good to buy used products? です

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英検2級のライティングの添削お願いします。

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