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PANOL TOPIC mora alaminG WOR ogra.ioita.org People around the world live longer lives than they did in the past. Do you think people will live even longer lives in the future?

この問題のいい答えがうまく考えられません。出来るだけ簡単な文章でかつ高得点を狙うならどのように書きますか？ 明日英検なので出来るだけ早く答えをいただけると嬉しいです。

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この英作文の添削お願いします🙏 ちなみに、英検3級です。

Eiken grade 3 writing Section practice 5 ●あなたは、外国人 がいこくじんの友達ともだちから以下 いかのQUESTION をされました。 ●QUESTION について、あなたの考えとその理由 りゅうを2つ英文えいぶんで書かきなさい。 語数ごすうの目安めやすは25~35語です。 ●解答かいとうは、 解答 かいとう 用紙 ようしのB面 めんにあるライティング解答欄かいとうらんに書かきなさい。 なお、 解答欄かいとうら んの外もとに書かかれたものは採点さいてんされません。 ■解答 かいどうが QUESTIONに対応していないと判断はんだんされた場合ばあいは、0点てんと採さい点てんされることが あります。 QUESTIONをよく読ょんでから答こたえてください。 QUESTION Which do you like better, Japanese food or western food? I like Japanese food better. I have the reasons. Ⅰ have alot of tavorite toods in Japanese toods. First. Ⅰ have Far example, misa Soop, ose chi and, sushi. Second. Japanese tood is more popular than Western food In Jagurese Deaple. Because, there are alot of Japanese restraurant.

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英検二級の答案です。添削お願いします。また、あと20字程度語数が足りないのですが何を付け足せばいいでしょうか。

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You: ie Bob: Sorry, I have a piano lesson today. How about during recess tomorrow? You: [ (2) ] Bob: Oh, OK... How about after school? You: [ (3) ] 2 Which words fit best? See | Example Bank. b. OK. I have c. Are you free this afternoon? SYBww og joy bib Seterli ob uov bib 18rW.2 1. "This is my email address." "Thanks, I ( am going to / will ) send the pictures later." eest 2. The clouds are going aw clouds are going away. I think it ( is going to clear up / clears up) so soon. 3. "I (attended / will be attending) an international event next month." "That's great. Good luck!" 4. "The first train for Sendai (departs / departed) at 5:31 on Sunday." "Let's catch it." 195. "Are you free this evening?" "Sorry, no. (I'm meeting / I meet) Richard to discuss our Svar project." to abriz vnom 3 In pairs, ask and answer the questions. Ask follow-up questions. 1 What are you going to do during the summer vacation? 12

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TOT BUILT 2016 101N03 ani 21 JuW" (OC) they consume. TOPIC It is often said that restaurants and supermarkets should try to reduce the amount of food that they throw away. Do you agree with this opinion? duoull griqsoo on to invorms SHF 293

英検3級の英文の添削？をお願いしたいです！ 日曜日の朝何をするのが好きですかという質問で、 I like to eat breakfast I have two reasons. First, I can eat breakfast with my family beca... Read More

英検2級の英作文です 文法がおかしいところ、直した方がいいところを教えてください。添削お願いします🙇‍♂️

4 onsdatabolchon e bomol bill ライティング ●以下のTOPICについて, あなたの意見とその理由を2つ書きなさい。 • POINTS は理由を書く際の参考となる観点を示したものです。 ただし,これら 以外の観点から理由を書いてもかまいません。 ●語数の目安は 80 語 ~100語です。 ●解答は, 解答用紙のB面にあるライティング解答欄に書きなさい。なお,解答 ■解答が TOPIC に示された問いの答えになっていない場合や, TOPIC からずれ 欄の外に書かれたものは採点されません。 ていると判断された場合は, 0点と採点されることがあります。 TOPICの内容 201 Satmay A98 をよく読んでから答えてください。 tarkE dinical TOPIC tényen The Slaces It is sometimes said that all people should be able to enter museums for free. Do you agree with this opinion? POINTS ● Donations 52 24 50 ●Learning environment ●Maintenance Tidedo ups Semins IspaunU & at mining of them in lose to the sit agoste w fè)

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Do companies need to improve the noy they treat their workers? and I think that companies need to improve the way they treat their workers and I have two reasons to support my opinion. The first reason is that companies should give same oppotunities to female. Some companies discriminate between male and female. For example, they decrease the number of recruies of female, and employees divided works such as cleaning and dest work between man women so they have to aim the mole female equality. The second reason is that work-life balance is serious issue by employees because they spend too much time to work. Companies should make holiday and decrease overtime work. If they do that, workers will balance work and life 110 for the two reasons mentioned above that companies need to improve the way they treat their workers. 90