英検準一のライティングの添削お願いします ライティングが本当に苦手で色々な資料を見ながら書いたので、文脈がおかしいところは指摘お願いします

I disagree that small, independent shop and business can survive in modern Society. This essay will explain the math reasons for my argument In term of the and traditional skills. The first reason is there Shop cannor generate huge .. money... "In ..any Cace, economy a small independent amonae of the If they are hot very... rich. they can't exist. And the compare Is [7/0 to ger worse and worse The second reason is show The small shop rond not Teach Traditional skills. Iz z were not good To for traditional 5/7/ls. we can't pronde a .. Oppotuntly... future. To improve Ther employees' life in the For these reasons... 2 hellere har The effect Small. Independere shop and business can survive In modern Socity IS. most certainly negative.

英検準一級のライティング問題です。 添削お願いします。字数稼ぎの表現などがあれば教えて下さると嬉しいです！

Should people trust information on the internet ? 120~150 words 思わない。 1.ネットには、うその情報が多く書かれている。 それは私たちを幸せにすることもあるが、不幸せにすることのほうが多い。 すべての情報に信じすぎてしまうと、何を信じたらよいかわからなくなり、 SNSにうかれてしまう。 2、あまり公式でないネットショッピングサービスを使うと、だまされることがある。 レ例えば、普通の時よりも安く売ったり、 高買う お金だけ払って商品が届かない など 気づかずに個人情報を入力してしまうと、その後も被害を受ける 可能性がある。 I think That people shuld not Trst infomation on the Internet, I have two reasons, First, information on the internet is consisted of us unhappy. And, If we lie information and tmstinformation. If we cannot judge such infinatin information makes T Trust all information we do not understand what we believe. So, SNS made us tired、 Second, when we use unofficial online shopping service, we may deceive. For example, we may buy things expensive price than usually price, we but and Pay money we cant get goods. If we do not realize that we put into personal information, we can laffect damage after. For these two reasons, I think that people ought to trust information on the internet, 」 101 118

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1. It [ (a) is raining (b) was raining 2. John and Mary [ ] each other since 2006. (b) have known 時制総合 1 総合 B [] に入る最も適切なものを選びなさい。 (2点×6=12点) ] all day. I wonder when it will stop. (c) has been raining oldizsoy() vrülesd (d) raining (d) had been (c) were knowing (d) were known ]tomorrow. (a) rains (b) will rain (c) is rain (d) will be rain ] from the U.S. (b) will come (c) comes (d) will have come (a) have been knowing 3. I'll put off my departure if it [ 4. Hiroki will stay in Tokyo until Haruka [ (a) come 5.1 [ at all. ] in China for three years when I was a child, but I can't speak Chinese 's Dog Care Service!! (a) have been (b) have once stayed 6. Ms. Cooper [(20 (a) has 2.00 (b) have had We offer (c) lived dogo@k2 and (d) went 012 G) 00.00£2 (b) ] three car accidents before she was twenty. (c) had had $1(d) have

下線部の和訳をする問題です。 うまく日本語に繋げられなくて困っています。 回答例お願いします。

Some local governments feel that their role is to provide basic services like collecting the trash and maintaining the roads and, of course, collecting the taxes to pay for these things. The Port Phillip city government takes a broader and longer-term view. It wants those who live in the community after the present generation has gone to have the same opportunities for a good quality of life as today's residents have. To protect that quality of life, it has to be able to measure all the varied

緩衝液とはどのようなもののことをいうのですか？教えてください。

4行目の―は前のattributeを指していると予測がつくのですが、下から2行目の―は具体的に挙げた例をさらに説明するものということですか？教えて頂きたいです。

10 ¶6 { ± } To characterize the outside environment of your house, we can do everything from space (and our desktops). With your address in hand, we'll use a range of large, publicly available data 前 sources to describe the outside attributes of your home-climatic conditions, amount of paved surface, density of people living in your neighborhood, and vegetation-each factor we think has the potential to influence the creatures with which you share your home.

2行目のallowはどういった使い方でしょうか...?allow A BでAをBに割り当てるという使い方と考えれば良いでしょうか...？

M The old must place their wisdom and experience at the service of 10 the young, yet allow the vitality, energy and enthusiasm of youth freedom of scope, while the young must respect and honor the achievements and practical sense of their elders and place their physical strength and vigor, while they still possess them, at the service of the continuing community.

写真１枚目の赤下線部のasがよくわかりません。ココではどのようなものとして扱われているんでしょうか？

40 15 Exploring these issues is difficult as no one wants to be perceived (as criticizing patient groups. In particular, researchers say that they owe an immense debt of gratitude to the Hollywood star Christopher Reeve (who was paralysed in a horse-riding accident in 1995/His public determination to recover - and his inspirational support of the science that might help him to-has drawn millions of dollars into research both directly through the Christopher Reeve Paralysis Foundation and indirectly through government budgets. 45 H

この段落の上から5段目のところについてです 。 inspirational というのは 、和訳を参考にすると精神的に、 というような風になると思うのですが、 辞書を引いたところ 、インスピレーションを起こさせるような となっていました。 この違いはなんのんでしょうか？文脈... Read More

15 Exploring these issues is difficult, as no one wants to be perceived as criticizing patient groups. In particular, researchers say that they owe an immense debt of gratitude to the Hollywood star Christopher Reeve, 40 who was paralysed in a horse-riding accident in 1995. His public determination to recover - and his inspirational support of the science that might help him to - has drawn millions of dollars into research, both directly through the Christopher Reeve Paralysis Foundation and indirectly through government budgets.

この文の下から8行目のstream jumping とはどういう訳し方が正解ですか？

B You are reading the following article as you are interested in studying overseas. Summer in Britain Chiaki Suzuki November 2022 This year, I spent two weeks studying English. I chose to stay in a beautiful city, called Punton, and had a wonderful time there. There were many things to do, which was exciting. I was never bored. It can get expensive, but I liked getting student discounts when I showed my student card. Also, I liked window-shopping and using the local library I ate a variety of food from around the world, too, as there were many people from different cultural backgrounds living there. Most of the friends I made were from my English school, so I did not practice speaking English with the locals as much as I had expected. On the other hand, I came to have friends from many different countries/ Lastly, I took public transport/which I found convenient and easy to use as it came frequently. If I had stayed in the countryside, however, I would have seen a different side of life in Britain. My friend who stayed there had a lovely,/relaxing experience. She said farmers sell their produce directly. Also, there are local theatres bands, art and craft shows restaurants, and some unusual activities like stream-jumping. However, getting around is not as easy, so it's harder to keep busy. You need to walk some distance to catch buses or trains, which do not come as often. In fact, she had to keep a copy of the timetables. If I had been in the countryside, I probably would have walked around and chatted with the local people. I had a rich cultural experience and I want to go back to Britain. However, next time I want to connect more with British people and eat more traditional British food. Day 08 2023年度: 共通テスト追試験 第2問B 115