英検準1級のライティングの添削をお願いします。 前回のライティングテストでは、構成が1点でした。そして内容 構成 語い 文法のうち1つも満点がありませんでした。 Topic: Should the facilities at train and bus stations i... Read More

英検準1級のライティングの添削をお願いします。 前回のライティングテストでは、構成が1点でした。そして内容 構成 語い 文法のうち1つも満点がありませんでした。 I think that a license should be required to ride a bi... Read More

英検準1級のライティングの添削をお願いします。 前回のライティングテストでは、構成が1点でした。そして内容 構成 語い 文法のうち1つも満点がありませんでした。 次のテストで高得点を取りたいので よろしくお願いします。

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英検準1級のライティングが毎回悪いです。 1回目 内容 3/4 、構成 1/4 、語い 3/4 、文法2/4 2回目 内容 1/4、構成1/4、語い3/4、文法3/4 こんな感じで毎回ライティングの点数が1番低いです。 2回で共通しているのは、構成が... Read More

Will Societies fature? with low birthrites face. Prents: Workforce, Foodshortige, Technological Innovation, Environment problem. I disagree with the idea. I have two reasons to my opinion. to get on important to First of all, it doesn't cause a foodshortage If the number of people increased, Some people who Live ChrA Parthe popularity decreased, it with bat country can't get the food enough. if food. That is Cause food problem. a Crisis in the not cause Płoblem Second of all,. it doesn't cause an environmental problem. These days, many trash is in ocean and on the ground. This kind of problem is Caused by the people decreased, the number of trash will inclined. foo Support In conducian, I think that low birth raten twon't food shortage and an enviroment a Is marraige becoming less important today than it was in the past ?! I agree with the idea. I have two reasons to support my opinion... university. ability of their studying, their much First of all, having children cost much money. It goes saying Therefore, to support their that these days many students parents must pay money. Secord of all, some women wants to live alone. (Vowadays, the number of women is who is working increasing. As a result, they can have enough money to live by themself so they don't think it is necessary to marry. increasing is is becoming less important. In conclusion, I think that their money problem and the number of people who want to be independent the problem that the marraige is

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22D1S SAT OF 応用 llow) MOLIET 問1 地図を見て、次の対話文の空欄に入れるのに最も適当なものを、 ア~エのうちから選び,記号で答えなさ い｡ 対話をしている2人は★印のところにいるものとします。 A: Excuse me. Could you (地図) tell me the to the post office? One wa B: A: I see. Thank you very much. 7 Go down this street to the bank and turn right at that corner. You'll find it right across the street from the bank. 1 Go along this street to the end of the street. Then turn left. It'll be on your right. Go down this street and turn left at the second corner. Soon you'll find it on the left. I Go along this street to the bank and turn left at that corner. You'll find it on the right. park book- store post office way bank super market TH (I) station

英検の英作文添削をお願いします。 1行5語に合わせたり、削ったりしているので、段落や空間等は気にせずに添削をして頂きたいです。

I don't think scare people's salaries should be based on their job performance. I have two reasons. In the first place, It should be changed from their performance to age. As they get older, many people will have their family, so they need a lot. of money. If their salavies base on age, they can live in peace. In the Second place, some people don't have the skills. For example, people who have disability may not have enough skills. If their salaries be based on r their age, they can't get enough money. Last of all I think people's salaries had better be based on their age. It has a lot of benefit than being based on their job performance. Mary people can live in peace

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21年度第2回 I 61 -74. agree with the idea that it is beneficial for workers to change jobs often for the following two reasons. The first reason is that it can change working conditions. I often hear that workers want to take a Vacation after their children borned, but it is difficult by company.. Therefore, the idea enables workers to forme working environment. The second reason is that workers are able to get motivation by changing their workplace. I think that The more the time passed, the less workers passion for their tast: I think that everyone should have motivation for new things. It is increasing their quality of life. For these reasons I mentioned above, I think that it is good effect for working people to change jobs often. Tot

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In my opinion, people should not trist information on the Internet. I have two reasons to support this based on news and socil media, In the first place, Internet news may contain fake news. I don't know whether information is true because it don't have evidence. However, many people don't know it and believe it. It is very dangerous In the second place, many people post take information on social media, and people who belive it twe pout it, too. It's bad a cycle / Therefore, I think people should be careful about I Internet Intamation.

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英語 6 次のグラフ及び英文を読み、1から3の質問の答えとして最も適当なものを,それぞれ①~④ 23 のうちから一つずつ選びなさい｡ 解答番号は Not very familiar 18% Somewhat familiar 25% Not familiar 7% 21 Survey on Esports - 7 - Very familiar 50% Kazuhiro's dream is to be a professional esports player in the future. Esports stands for electronic sports. It is a form of video game competition. Sometimes tournaments for money are held and many people watch them online. Kazuhiro's friends introduced him to esports a few years ago, and he quickly became one of the best players among his friends. He has also participated in many local esports tournaments with them, and their team always won first or second place. Because of this experience, he started thinking of becoming a professional esports player. In one of his classes, Kazuhiro had to make a newsletter for his assignment. He decided to do a survey on esports. He found that some of his classmates were not familiar with esports. So, he thought he would try promoting it in his high school. He held an esports event for his classmates at school. He was not sure whether anyone would come to this event, but to his surprise, many students attended and enjoyed his workshop. He showed them some of the most famous video games in esports. He also gave them some advice on how to win. Finally, he did a live esports demonstration and played against a friend in another country. After this, a lot of his classmates asked Kazuhiro about esports. He felt pleased and satisfied with what he did. Now, he not only wants to be a professional esports player, but also be a person who can promote it. Through esports, he has been able to make friends all over the world, and he wants to spread the joy to other people. 2023KN1A-14-008 1 According to the pie chart, which of the following is true? 0 Less than 50% of the students are familiar with esports. 2 More than 90% of the students are not familiar with esports. 3 Twenty-five percent of the students are not familiar at all with esports. 4 Seventy-five percent of the students are familiar with esports. 2 According to the passage, which of the following is true about Kazuhiro? He wants to be a professional esports player. He wants to create a new video game in esports. He has a negative image of esports. 4 He has already won a lot of money from playing esports. 2 3 3 According to the passage, which of the following is true about Kazuhiro? He got confused when his friends asked him questions about esports. 2 He held an event to teach his classmates about esports at his school. 3 He was disappointed because not many people came to his workshop. 4 He learned about a professional esports player from his classmates. - 8 21 英語 22 23 2023KN1A-14-00