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I'm going to talk about an experience that changed my life Was when I studied studying abroad in Niseko, Hokkaido. I stayed for a total of 2 months last summer I made a lot of friends. and this summer. Speaking in both Japanese and English deepened our bond. Even after studying abroad we l are still in touch. We are going to have a reunion in Tokyo on Christmas Actually, I hadn't been good at English before I studied abroad. A friend of mine said "Don't be afraid ". Then to me •get rid of my weakness in English. I had a conversation with my I was able to native teacher in English through the activitities. In these activities, had a We did BBQ, cooked, and went sightseeing. It was d again, I would like to go skiing. lot of fun. If I could study abroad in Niseko to Niseko. You can enjoy Niseko's lifestyle Please yo m

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A. Complete the paragraph with words from the box. common The Owl 1 huge recycle Centre is a nonprofit rescue organization in South Africa that is dedicated to the protection of owls. It has also been doing incredible work for the environment. In 2018, the center started a project to collect used plastic bottles and 2 them into owl houses. Plastic bottles are an increasingly sight in our rivers and oceans. By reusing these plastic bottles, the center can build more nesting. boxes for owls and also ensure that less plastic ends up in the ocean. The project has been a 4 success, and the center is now raising money to buy a ship that will collect plastic directly from the ocean.

英語の文法問題です、 問題文：『コンピュータなしでは暮らしていけないと考えている人が増えている。』 解答『More and more people find it impossible to live without a computer.』　　　　　￣￣￣￣￣￣￣￣ なぜ... Read More

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7 次の(1),(2)の英文を読んで、それぞれの問いに答えなさい。 (1) みなみ市 (Minami City) に住むユイ (Yui)とジョン(John) は、 留学について調査し, 英語でプレ ゼンテーション(presentation) を行いました。 ユイがスライド (Ade)を使って発表をしています。 Hello, everyone. Are you interested in studying abroad? Zealand to study English last summer. I went to New It was an amazing experience for me during those ten weeks. I believe that studying abroad is very meaningful for high school students. Now, please look at Slide 1. It shows the number of Japanese high school students studying abroad from 2009 to 2019. The number went down once in 2015, but in 2017, the largest number of students, more than 45,000, studied abroad. In 2019, the number went down a lot because of big international problems, but we believe that more students will study abroad in the future. So, where did many students go? Look at Slide 2. It shows the countries that the high school students in Minami City went to from 2009 to 2019. We can see that more than half of the students went to English-speaking countries This means that many students used English during their stays. I think that we can improve our language skills by communicating with local people a lot. For example, before studying at a English, but my English (Ave school in New Zealand, I wasn't very good at improv after staying there. But studying abroad isn't easy for everyone. Having friends from abroad is good, but not everyone has that chance. So, how should we study English in Japan? We asked 500 students at this high school, "How do you study English at home?" Look at Slide 3. It shows the results. Among these several ways, we recommend watching movies and TV dramas in English. We think so because by watching them, we can also learn about the people living there and their cultures. Learning these things is as important as learning the English language itself. We think that learning English is very useful for high school students. Study hard, and if you have a chance, please go abroad and learn many things. Slide 2 Slide 3 Ways to Study English % 25% 32% Study with textbooks 62 Watch movies 14 10% Watch TV dramas 14 15% Read English books or newspapers 7 U.S. U.K. Australia ☐ others South Korea Keep a diary in English 3 (注) meaningful 意味のある English-speaking 英語を話す not everyone U.S. アメリカ合衆国 South Korea すべての人が〜とは限らない chance U.K. keep a diary 日記をつける itself それ自体

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D ( )内から適切な方を選びなさい。(2点×5=10点) 1. Human beings are the only animals (what that) laugh. • 2. The milk, (that which) was left out in the room for a day, turned sour. 3. A time will come (when where) you will regret what you did. 4. That is (how what) this story was born. 5. Mt. Fuji can be seen from (which ⚫ where) I live. • nd clea And foodba (n)

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H=1.0C=12 N=140=16 基本例題24 気体の溶解度 →問題 238 239 水素は, 0℃, 1.0×10 Pa で, 1Lの水に22mL 溶ける。 次の各問いに答えよ。 (1) 0℃ 5.0×10 Pa で, 1Lの水に溶ける水素は何molか。 DES 第Ⅲ章 物質の状態 (2)0℃, 5.0×10 Pa で, 1Lの水に溶ける水素の体積は,その圧力下で何mL か。 (3) 水素と酸素が1:3の物質量の比で混合された気体を1Lの水に接触させて, 0℃, 1.0×10 Pa に保ったとき, 水素は何mol 溶けるか。 考え方 O ヘンリーの法則を用いる。 (1) 0℃, 1.0 × 105 Pa におけ る溶解度を物質量に換算する。 溶解度は圧力に比例する。 (2) 気体の状態方程式を用い 解答 (1) 0℃ 1.0×10 Paで溶ける水素の物質量は, 2.2×10-2L 22.4L/mol =9.82×10-4 mol TES 気体の溶解度は圧力に比例するので, 5.0×105 Paでは, 5.0×105 1.0×105 9.82×10-4mol x る。 別解 溶解する気体の体 積は,そのときの圧力下では, 圧力が変わっても一定である。 (3) 混合気体の場合,気体の 溶解度は各気体の分圧に比例 する。 -=4.91×10-3mol=4.9×10-3mol (2) 気体の状態方程式 PV =nRT から Vを求める。 4.91×10-3mol×8.3×10°Pa・L/(K・mol)×273K L/(K) 273 K V=OUT 5.0×105 Pa =2.2×10-L=22mL 品番 ■別解 圧力が5倍になると,溶ける気体の物質量も5 倍になる。 しかし、この圧力下で溶ける気体の体積は, ボイ ルの法則から1/5になるので,結局, 同じ体積22mLになる。 (3) 水素の分圧は1.0×10 Pa×1/4=2.5×105 Pa なので, 溶ける水素の物質量は, 9.82×10-4molx (2.5×105/1.0×105) =2.5×10-mol 5×10-3

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31 ) 内から適切なほうを選びなさい。 1. If a war (will break breaks out, what will you do? 2. I (will go/go) fishing in the lake tomorrow. 3 3. The children (was visiting/ will be visiting) the mayor tomorrow morning. 4. I'll take an umbrella with me in case it (will rain/rains). 5. The shop (will close/closes) at eight these days. 6. I (will do / do) my best on the next exam. 7. Nobody knows when he (will return/returns ). ~でき副詞節 ⑧Until he apologizes, we (will not forgive / don't forgive him.

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Grammar 前置詞+関係代名詞 関係代名詞が前置詞の目的語になるとき, 〈先行詞+前置詞+関 係代名詞…〉となることがあります。 I recently went back to the town in which I was born. His team used a camera with which all the details of the painting could be collected. 1.2 CHECK 日本語に合うように, 内に適語を補いましょう。 1. ぼくには何でも話せる友達がたくさんいる。 I have a lot of friends ( ) ( ) I can talk about anything. 2. 彼が以前住んでいた島は,現在は観光地だ。 The island ( ) ( ) he used to live is a tourist site now. 3. 久美は歌をたくさん書いたノートをぼくにくれた。 Kumi gave me the notebook ( ) ( ) she wrote a lot of songs.

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関係代名詞 Grammar 名詞 ... 前置詞〉では、関係代名詞が省略されることもあります。 前置詞 関係代名詞が前置詞の目的語になることがあります。 〈関係代 There were difficulties which Miyasako had to get over. 1.5 The girl who [whom] I spoke to comes from Spain. CHECK 日本語に合うように,( )内に適語を補いましょう。 1. 彼女が昨夜あなたに話した歌手よ。 She is the singer ( ) I told you ( ) last night. 2. 私が本当に影響を受けた音楽を聞いてごらん。 You should listen to the music ( ) I was really influenced ( 3. 昨日、私は10年前にいっしょに働いていた女性と会った。 Yesterday, I met the woman ( ). ) I had worked ( ) ten years before.