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九州大学英語2019年の英作文の添削をお願いします🙇‍♀️ 大問4が要約と英作文、5が和文英訳です!🙇‍♀️🙇‍♀️🙇‍♀️

〔4〕 九州大-理系前期 Read the following newspaper article and follow the instructions below. (36) 16 2019年度 英語 in Engligi taul" According to the Kanagawa Prefectural Police Station, a 20-year-old female university student caused a traffic death. The student was riding on a power- She moved off from an assisted bicycle when the accident happened. intersection and started riding on the sidewalk. At that moment, a 77-year-old lady was walking on the sidewalk and moved toward the bicyclist. The student hit the lady. The collision caused the lady to fall and strike her head. She was transported to hospital, but died of her injuries two days later. At the time of the incident, the student was apparently holding a smartphone in her left hand and a drink in her right while steering the power- assisted bike. Moreover, she had an earphone in her left ear. Therefore, police arrested the student for breaking the new law and riding recklessly. Police are investigating whether the student noticed that the old lady was walking toward her. They suspect that she was not paying sufficient attention because she was operating her smartphone right up until the collision. Her court appearance date has not been decided yet. The Mainichi, December 16, 2017 Instructions: Write two well-developed paragraphs in English. In the first paragraph, summarize the main points of the newspaper article above in lo approximately 100 words. Use different vocabulary and sentence structure from the original passage as much as possible. In the second paragraph, write your opinion about what should be done to reduce accidents like this in approximately 50 words. hosidinlong unich lor, condadnoah

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English Senior High

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UNIT 7 Reading Reading 33点 10点 Grammar /32点 /15 Information Listening Writing /10 TOTAL 100点 全文 音声 なまけ者のトムが望んだ仕事とは何でしょう。 Tom was a very lazy man*. He didn't like hard work. But he needed a job. One day, (his/Tom / a job / asked / uncle / him / find / to ). "What kind of job?" asked the uncle. Tom answered, "I don't want to work. I want meat for lunch every day. I just want to walk around and take naps*. And I want 100 dollars a day." "( )" the uncle sighed*. 2 One day, Tom got a call from his uncle. "Tom, I found the perfect job for you. A tiger at the zoo died recently. They need a new tiger. You can be the tiger. You'll wear a tiger's skin and walk around, eat meat, and sleep in the cage* like a real tiger." "( 3 )" said Tom. "I'll start tomorrow!" 5 3 The next day, Tom was in the cage in tiger's fur. He just walked around, ate meat, 10 and took a nap. Tom was happy. 44 Suddenly, he heard an announcement*. "We'll soon have a special show. It's a fight between a lion and a tiger! Enjoy this exciting show." "( )" He looked around his cage. Then another cage was carried next to his. A fierce-looking* lion was in it. "I'll be killed!" he cried. The doors of both cages were opened. Tom jumped back. "( 6 )" 15 The big lion slowly walked toward him, roared*, and opened its mouth. "Stop! I'm not a tiger! I'm a man!" 5 "Shhh!" Tom heard a small voice from the lion. "( Ⓒ )” (252 words)

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TOEIC・English Undergraduate

英検準1級ライティングの添削をお願いしたいです!何を書いているか全くわからなければ、言ってもらえると… あと、筆記試験90分の間でライティングを書かないといけないんですけど、本当にライティングが苦手で、少しでも短時間で良い文章を書くコツを教えてください!具体的に言えば、英文... Read More

Write an essay on the given TOPIC. OUse TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer. Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion Suggested length: 120-150 words TOPIC or disagree: More companies will allow employees to work from 情報セキュグ 危ない disag Agree home in the future POINTS ●Information security Communication Recruitment Cost reduction I do 1 仕事の内容の 外部漏れの危険 1 not agree home in the future and I have two reasons to support Day 2 Day 3 ・直接コミュニケーションをとれない一誤解を招くおそれ (記録をしないと) 相手と商談や会議等の連絡をメールや コスト削減。 電話しないといけない手間がかかる。 Day that more companies will allow employees to work from 4 this opinion... on One of the reason is that employees cannot communicate on meet easily. They have to keep in touch with partner about importan things such as meetings the phone or e-mail, so they might take so much time to do this. Also, might make mistakes if they do not communicate on the phones or e-mail without s keep records of communication. Day they Another of the reason is that it companies might need to improve employees houses information security.. If do not do this, documents might be seen by companies many people such as employees' familys, and visitors to them, For these reasons abore, more companies will not allow employees to work from home if these problems are solved. total: 143 words Da 6

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TOEIC・English Undergraduate

英検準1級のライティングです。 どなたでも構いません。添削をお願いしたいです!何を書いているか分からなければ、聞いてもらって全然大丈夫です。ていうか、読んだだけでは、全く理解できないと思います。 近日中に受けるので、明日の夕方頃までにお願いします🙏

Write an essay on the given TOPIC. Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer. Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion Suggested length: 120-150 words TOPIC Do you think that gas-powered cars will be replaced by electric cars in the near future? 電時の排出 POINTS 走行エネルギーの asse). Environment Convenience #1124-Kat #veg Cost Industry 高速産 ・充電せった コストが高い 産業限られた 短いきが しが ・使用者が買いかえようとは 思わない 2:33. 1 充電スペースの 2015 3. cars will be replaced by electric cars I do not think that gas-powered opinion. in the near future, I have two reasons to support this One reason is that it may be not convenient for people to drive electric cars in these days society. For example, electric cars take more time to charge than gas-powered cars. Moreover, electric cars can run few distance. Onother reason is that electric cars cost a lot of money in the many situation. For example, people who use electric, cars usually sex charging places at the each houses, but they have to pay so much cash to do it, Also, they need to prepare too much money every month to charge electric Propte cash, For these reasons above, I believe that gas-powered cars will be replaced by electric cars in the near future. total: 179 words

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