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[4] Read the instructions and write a well-organized answer in English. (50 points) Virtual reality (VR)* refers to a high-quality simulation of reality created by a computer. Probably the most famous use for VR so far is gaming. But VR has also been used to improve society in various fields such as education, medicine, and engineering. Describe a single specific way that virtual reality can be used to improve society. Explain your idea in detail in about 100 English words. Notes: Virtual reality (VR)*: VR systems use special glasses that completely cover the user's eyes. These glasses show a very realistic picture of a world created by the computer. In addition, the systems can tell when the user moves their head, arms, and sometimes other body parts. So users can control the action by natural movement. Some systems even let users feel like they are touching things. Thus, VR systems can make users feel like they are really in another world. 〔答案〕 I suggest you to simulation with VR. For example, doctors can practice operation. I have the three reasons. First, VR's display is very real. So doctors can do as if real simulation. Second, every one can make simulation software. If you want add patients information to VR and study how to make software, you can make VR software to yourself. Third, medical professors can use VR simulation in lecture. If they do this, Students who want be surgeon in the future will reduce about operation's anxiety. In this way, VR have a lot of possibilities that useful of medical field. For these reasons, I suggest VR simulations.

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STRESEMO SI In many cases, *cyber-bullying can be even more painful than face-to-face bullying. A lot of cyber-bullying can be done without using a real name, (1)( ) you may not be sure who is targeting you. This can make you feel even more threatened and can encourage bullies, (2)( ) they believe online secrecy means they're less likely to 秘密にすること おどされる いじめをする人 get caught. Since cyber-bullies can't see your reaction, they will often go much further in 〜ので ) they would do face-to-face with you. farate their harassment or ridicule (3)( 冷やかし (Adapted from Dealing with Bullying and Cyber-bullying by HelpGuide.org) (注)*cyber-bullying: コンピュータや携帯電話, ソーシャルネットワークなどを利用したいじめ ameldorg Inanitouha a'cijama Jarít (1) Ⓡ still (2) 1 as (3) 1 so that and pas 2 nevertheless 3 otherwise にもかかわらず さもなければ 5 but 2 though Kithet 2 such that 3 but however 3 than MTU 3 because 4 before when s vous diely you? Hosely odi otai genom gnigned Jaemmourvne yaibanorve adi bas orent page 4 4 unless 2 mnib sa roue olil magitom robom ~ように Sound travels in the same way as water waves (1) 2 still pond. The water is perfectly still (2)( O the stone falls in, waves are sent out in all directions. ) the stone hits the water. But once travels in all directions It is important to realize that sound spreads out (3) from its source. You can, (4)( 6 ), direct some sounds, for example, the human voice by using a megaphone. This makes the voice seem louder, (5)( is pointing the sound in one direction rather than letting it spread out (6) Ⓡ ) in fact it ) it would normally. ~ない限り 4 when 文章問題 Diw ob of saidton syar ns of alushur n (大阪医科大) noun at vide ) a stone is thrown into a (名古屋工業大)

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実戦問題 以下のTOPICについて, あなたの意見とその理由を2つ書きなさい。 ●POINTSは理由を書く際の参考となる観点を示したものです。 ただし,これら以 外の観点から理由を書いてもかまいません。 語数の目安は80語~ 100語です。 HA TOPIC 2 Today, many people simply throw things away if they are broken. Do you ataubo think this trend will increase in the future? POINTS ●Recycling ●Quality ●Repair 718

至急 ！！ aとdがわかりません 豆電球の明るさってながれる電流が大きいほど明るいのではないのですか？？

SECONI 8 道の 32 回路に流れる電流 p.110 トレーニング 「電流計・電圧計」 ステップ A 基本をおさえよう 1 回路に流れる電流 [結果] 11 豆電球アのほうが明るかった。 IA IB 180 180 実験1 回路に流れる電流 | 方法 豆電球ア,イを使って図の1.2の回路をつくり, 豆電球の明るさと, 回路の各点の電流の大きさを調べた。 直列回路 B Ic 180 整理 ⑤ 2の並列回路で,ID は [ ID は [ ②2 並列回路 G 教科書 p. 221~226 8F ※点A~Gに流れる電流の大きさをそれぞれIA〜IG で表す。 2豆電球イのほうが明るかった。 電流 [mA] 電流 [mA] 考察①の直列回路で,豆電球の明るさは,ア. 流れる電流が大きいほど明るい イ. 流れる電流の大きさと関係がない 考察 ② 1の直列回路で,各点を流れる電流 In, IB, Icの大きさにはどんな関係が b まとめ ⑦並列回路では,枝分かれした電流の大きさの[ 分かれる前や合流した後の電流の大きさと等しい。 端子につなぐ。 あるか。 式で表しなさい。 まとめ ③ 直列回路では、電流の大きさは回路の [Cア.どの点でも等しい イ. 各点でちがう ] 。 考察 ④ 2の並列回路で, 豆電球の明るさは、[ア 流れる電流が大きいほど明るい イ. 流れる電流の大きさと関係がない]。 ]と等しい。 ]と[ 考察 ⑥ 2の並列回路で,各点を流れる電流 Io, IE, IF, Ic の大きさにはどんな関係 があるか。 式で表しなさい。 h ]は, 基本操作 電流計の使い方 ① 電流計は電流をはかる部分に [ ② 電源の+極側からの導線を電流計の[b 側からの導線を[ ③ 電流の大きさが予想できないときは,はじめに [d の端子につなぐ指針の振れが小さすぎるときは につなぐ。 第1章 電流の性質 教科書 p.221~225 ID IE IF IG 240 80 |160 240 ほかの TEI マイナス 端子に極 注意 電流計を電源に直 接つないだり、 回 ]の和に等しい。路に並列につない だりすると、電流 計に大量の電流が 流れ こわれるこ とがある｡ ステップ B 確かめよう ①回路を流れる電流 図のような回路の 点A~Dを流れる 電流の大きさを,そ れぞれ求めなさい。 JA -端子 50mA 教科書 p.222 + 端子 500 mA 5 A C 図3 ② 直列回路を流れる電流 2つの豆電球を図1のように直列に を入れて,点Aを流れる電流の大きさ 図2 図 1 B 0.1 30mA A (1) 作図 図1の点Aを流れる電流を つなげばよいか。 図2に導線をか あやま Z② 記述電流計のつなぎ方を誤ると、 ことがある。このようなことを起 を2つ書きなさい。 (3) 点 B C を流れる電流の大きさ (4) 図1で, 乾電池の向きを逆にす かんでんち うなるか｡ ③ 並列回路を流れる電流 2種類の豆電球を使って、図の な回路をつくり, スイッチを入れ 流を流した。 (1) 点Aを流れる電流の大きこ 420mAだった。これは何か。

共テ模試物理 丸が付いていますが、適当に解いたので理解していません。 分からないので教えてください。

問3 図3のように, 単スリットAと複スリットBおよびスクリーンを互いに平行 物理 に置き, 単スリットAの左側に単色光の光源を置いた。 破線は複スリットの垂 直二等分線であり,単スリットとスクリーン上の点を通る。複スリットBの スリット間隔をd, 複スリットBとスクリーンの距離をLとする。この装置を 用いてスクリーン上に生じる干渉縞を観察した。 このとき, 生じる干渉縞につい ての記述として最も適当なものを,後の①~④のうちから一つ選べ。ただし, d はLに比べて十分小さく,またスリットの幅も十分小さいものとする。 4 THESE 光源 ME 単スリットA 複スリットB ↑(ア) d 図 3 スクリーン (イ) ↑ 0 ① 単スリットA (ア)の向きにゆっくりと移動させると,スクリーン上の干渉 縞は (イ)の向きへ移動する。 ② 複スリットBをスクリーン側にゆっくりと移動させると, 点0の明るさは 明暗を繰り返す。 ③ 複スリット B をスクリーン側にゆっくりと移動させても, スクリーン上の 点 0付近の干渉縞の間隔は変化しない。 ④ 単スリットAをスクリーン側にゆっくりと移動させても、スクリーン上の 干渉縞の位置は変化しない。

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Read the passage and answer the questions that follow. (1). „Why do batteries matter? Look at all your electronic devices: from laptops to smartphones to Kindles or iPads, even your watch. Those electronics are getting more energy-efficient and require less energy than they used to. But as they do, people get greedy and want their capabilities to increase. The battery, or how much energy you can 05 store in a given volume and weight, is the defining factor in this whole field. Then there are electric cars. If we can make batteries with double the "energy TR2Z density of today's and drive the price below $200 per "kilowatt-hour (versus $300 to $800 today, depending on type and weight), we could have a car with a 300-mile range, even with the air conditioner or heater turned up, that would sell for $25,000 to $30,000. The 10 Department of Energy's goal is to get batteries to $150 per kilowatt-hour by the year 2020. 01 Finally, there are the "utility-scale batteries, which are very important for renewable TR28 energy. Wind and solar power are going to become more common. Wind is already the second-cheapest form of new energy, after shale gas, and it will become the cheapest 15 15 within a decade. Right now "utility companies get about 4 percent of their power from renewable sources other than "hydro- and that 4 percent is roughly all from wind. We may see a day when renewables make up 50, 60, 70 percent of the total supply of energy. Utility companies will need batteries to stabilize the flow of renewable energy into the *grid, and also require a better electrical control system to (3)do the switching. People 20 may have these batteries at their homes instead of generators. All of this would create a huge market. But the effects would be more profound. T There are mountainous places even in the U.S., like western Alaska, that will never be connected to the electric grid. There aren't enough people, and the distances are too great. There are many parts of South Asia like this, too. But they will have solar and 25 wind power - which, in 10 or 15 years, are going to be as cheap as any other form of energy, or cheaper. Once you have "storage systems, you can put a little "solar installation on your roof or "a plot of land, and then you will have your electric supply! It will be like cellphones' "leapfrogging the "land-line era. It will transform the prosperity of the world. 【Notes】 energy density エネルギー密度 (ここでは電池の容量を意味する) kilowatt-hour キロワット時 (1キロワットの機器を1時間使ったときの消費電力量) utility-scale 電力供給に使う規模の hydro utility company t storage 貯蔵 (ここでは電気を蓄えておくことを意味する) grid solar installation a plot of land 一画の土地 land-line 地上 (の電話) 線 by a factor of two (増減の幅が)2倍で (50pts.) leapfrog 〜を一足跳びにする

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Date people I agree with more should become vegetarians in the future. I have two reasons. Firstly, it is bad for the environment to have live stocks. Having live-stacks have many bad prints For instance, farmer have to use large water. By using whater too much, gloval. warming will be increasing. Also, farmer have to make food for animals, so they will use large gas or electric.. Secondly, metabora they eat a • because th lot of wents or fishs. Meat and fish contain ail, so they attect our health badly. Vegitable have less oil, and enough nutrients. Many people will protect their health, and Can live longer. Therefore, it is good for us to become vegetarians. I think we should eat only vegetable.