英作文の添削をしてほしいです。文法的なところとか、スペルだけでもいいので、お願いします！何を書いているかわからなければ、言ってもらって全然大丈夫です！

4 POINTS TOPIC Agree or disagree: Japanese companies should require employees to use English in their workplace al ●Write an essay on the given TOPIC. Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer. Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion Suggested length: 120-150 words 18 ●Write your essay in the space provided on Side B of your answer sheet. Any writing outside the space will not be graded. ■Communication barriers 言語の壁 LExpansion of market 市場の拡大 ●Labor shortage 人員不足 Stress b ストレス 日本語は難しい と言われている。 total:128 words 英語を使えば、日本語を話せないが、 日本で働きたい外国人の雇用につながる ―海外進出商品のに人知度叩かも、 ・海外のニーズに応じた 商品づくりもできる Galaxy A54.5Gの解しょう もし社員が英語を話せたら。 外国人の雇用につながる ・経済が

最後の一文の分構造についてなのですがto itは何を指しているのでしょうか？thatがgreatnessなのはわかるのですが元の形に戻すとgive greatness to itとなってしまってわからなくなってしまいました。

A 12 So intimate is the relation between a language and the people who speak it that the two can scarcely be thought of apart. A language ~として 接 lives only so long as there are people who speak it and use it as their native tongue, and its greatness is only that given to it by these people. give to a 指示代名詞 Such

thatかwitchどっちでもいいんでしょうか？

ル(メキシコ) Rand ポイントの確認 I found Un that [which]1 これは私がインターネットで見つけた写真ださ 目標 (thol/which] + 主語+) 名詞を修飾する言い方が使えるようにして 関係代名詞の thal[which]は目的 の代わりの働き もするよ。この場 合 thai [which]の とは 〈主語+動詞> の話だよ 基本文 This is a picture internet. 名詞 + that [which] +主語+動詞...〉 (目的格) This is a picture. Ⅰ found it on the internet. 丁目的語 「私がインターネットで見つけた」 This is a picture that[which] I found on the internet. 陽刻↑ 基本文の練習 ( )内から適する語を選んで○で囲もう。 (1) This is the racket (which / who) Josh uses. これはジョシュが使っているラケットです。 (2) This is the e-mail (that / who) I wrote yesterday. これは私が昨日書いたEメールです ★「もの」の後ろに住語+動詞...)が続くときは、 that[which] が適切。 84 eighty-four 2 (1)~(3)の絵を見て、 関係代名詞を使って説明を加えた文を完成させよう。 (2) (3) (1) give (1) I have a bag that which my sister made. 私は私の姉 [妹] が作ったバッグを持っています。 (2) This is the T-shirt thaf[which] Asami gave 82.3 これは朝美が私にくれたTシャツです。 (3) This is the watch_thai[which]__I 3年 bought 3 日本文にあう英文になるように、関係代名詞の後ろ文を書こう。 新出単語日本語は英語に、英語は日本語にかえよう。 (1) 高価な, 費用のかかる expensive reach (3) ...に着く、到着する (5) salt (7) leader (1) これはみんなが大好きな歌です。 This is (everyone/that/asong/loves). This is a song that everyone loves. (2) あれはあなたが昨夜滞在したホテルですか。 Is that (stayed at / which / the hotel / last night / you )? Is that the hotel which you stayed at last night? これは私がロンドン で買った時計です。 <主語+動詞...) が続く形にする in London. me. ( 塩、食塩 ) (6) colony (指導者, リーダー) (8) peaceful (2) ニュース,知らせ (4) ほとんど 自己表現をラケット racket クッション cushion サポート! giveの過去形 gave ････を使う use (1) the hotel の後ろに 関係代名詞 whichを you stayed... 「あな ・・・滞在した」 をつた ( ( news almos 植民地 平和な ゲー 本 book ・・・ に行く go to .

英検準1級ライティングの添削をお願いしたいです！何を書いているか全くわからなければ、言ってもらえると… あと、筆記試験90分の間でライティングを書かないといけないんですけど、本当にライティングが苦手で、少しでも短時間で良い文章を書くコツを教えてください！具体的に言えば、英文... Read More

Write an essay on the given TOPIC. OUse TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer. Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion Suggested length: 120-150 words TOPIC or disagree: More companies will allow employees to work from 情報セキュグ 危ない disag Agree home in the future POINTS ●Information security Communication Recruitment Cost reduction I do 1 仕事の内容の 外部漏れの危険 1 not agree home in the future and I have two reasons to support Day 2 Day 3 ・直接コミュニケーションをとれない一誤解を招くおそれ (記録をしないと) 相手と商談や会議等の連絡をメールや コスト削減。 電話しないといけない手間がかかる。 Day that more companies will allow employees to work from 4 this opinion... on One of the reason is that employees cannot communicate on meet easily. They have to keep in touch with partner about importan things such as meetings the phone or e-mail, so they might take so much time to do this. Also, might make mistakes if they do not communicate on the phones or e-mail without s keep records of communication. Day they Another of the reason is that it companies might need to improve employees houses information security.. If do not do this, documents might be seen by companies many people such as employees' familys, and visitors to them, For these reasons abore, more companies will not allow employees to work from home if these problems are solved. total: 143 words Da 6

英検準1級のライティングです。 どなたでも構いません。添削をお願いしたいです！何を書いているか分からなければ、聞いてもらって全然大丈夫です。ていうか、読んだだけでは、全く理解できないと思います。 近日中に受けるので、明日の夕方頃までにお願いします🙏

Write an essay on the given TOPIC. Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer. Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion Suggested length: 120-150 words TOPIC Do you think that gas-powered cars will be replaced by electric cars in the near future? 電時の排出 POINTS 走行エネルギーの asse). Environment Convenience #1124-Kat #veg Cost Industry 高速産 ・充電せった コストが高い 産業限られた 短いきが しが ・使用者が買いかえようとは 思わない 2:33. 1 充電スペースの 2015 3. cars will be replaced by electric cars I do not think that gas-powered opinion. in the near future, I have two reasons to support this One reason is that it may be not convenient for people to drive electric cars in these days society. For example, electric cars take more time to charge than gas-powered cars. Moreover, electric cars can run few distance. Onother reason is that electric cars cost a lot of money in the many situation. For example, people who use electric, cars usually sex charging places at the each houses, but they have to pay so much cash to do it, Also, they need to prepare too much money every month to charge electric Propte cash, For these reasons above, I believe that gas-powered cars will be replaced by electric cars in the near future. total: 179 words

Let me give you （ ）． 1，a bit of advice 2，some advices 3，a little advice 4，a few advices 答えは1です。 2と4が違うのはわかります。1と3で迷ったのですが3がいけない理由を教えていた... Read More

Check It Out の問題があっているか教えてください。添削して欲しいです。

Model Read the article on the connection between technology and life. While many parents think that smartphones are not good for students, smartphones can actually help them work more efficiently. 2 For instance, students can use smartphones to easily keep in touch with one another. 3 This is especially important when they are working together on school projects. 4 In such situations, students often need to arrange meetings, and smartphones can help them do that. 5 Another example of how smartphones can help students is through the use of schedule "applications. These applications help students organize their work, so they remember when different "assignments are due. These are just a few examples of how smartphones can help students. 6 "application 771) / assignment. Check It Out QO What is the writer's opinion on smartphones? Is it positive or negative? Q2 How many examples does the writer give? Q3 What does the writer say are the benefits of smartphones?

Q3が分からないので教えてください。

Model Read the article on the connection between technology and life. While many parents think that smartphones are not good for students, smartphones can actually help them work more efficiently. 2 For instance, students can use smartphones to easily keep in touch with one another. ³ This is especially important when they are working together on school projects. 4 In such situations, students often need to arrange meetings, and smartphones can help them do that. 5 Another example of how smartphones can help students is through the use of schedule "applications. These applications help students organize their work, so they remember when different "assignments are due. These are just a few examples of how smartphones can help students. 6 7 "application 771) / assignment . Check It Out QO What is the writer's opinion on smartphones? Is it positive or negative? Q2 How many examples does the writer give? What does the writer say are the benefits of smartphones?

わからないので答えを教えてもらいたいです。

英語 Amy: Hey Jake, I was thinking about online shopping this weekend. Do you shop online often? Jake: Yeah, I do it quite a bit. It's so ( house and you can ( ) almost anything online. That's true. I love the convenience, too, especially with a busy schedule. But I've heard there are some downsides to it. What do you think? Well, one obvious downside is not being able to ( ) or try the product before buying. Sometimes, what you see on the website isn't exactly what you get. Amy: Yeah, that's a good point. I've had a couple of instances where the color or size was ) from what I expected. ( Another thing is the shipping time. Even with express shipping, you might have to ( ) a few days for your stuff to arrive. It's not great if you need Amy: Jake: Jake: Amy: Amy: Jake: Jake: Jake: something urgently. True, waiting can be frustrating. But what about the ( that sometimes the prices are higher online. It depends. I've found some great deals online, especially during sales. But you're right; in some cases, the prices can be a bit inflated, and you might end up paying more than if you bought it in-store. Amy: And returns can be a hassle, too. I had to return a shirt once, and the process took forever. It's not as easy as just going to a store and returning it on the spot. Yeah, returns can be a pain. Also, there's the whole security issue. You must be careful about where you're buying from to avoid scams or stealing your ( ). Amy: Oh, definitely. I always make sure the website is secure before entering any payment details. 日本語 L ), you know? No need to leave the On the bright side, online ( ) can be super helpful. I always check them before making a purchase. It gives you an idea of the product's quality and whether it's worth the money. Amy: That's a good point. I do the same. It's like having the opinions of a bunch of friends who've already ( ) the product. Jake: Exactly. So, while there are some drawbacks, I think the ( ) of online shopping, like the convenience and variety, outweigh the ( ) for me. Yeah, I agree. It's all about finding a balance and being cautious about where and what you're buying. )? I've heard

③はat first になるんですけどどうやってとけばいいんでしょうか?なにか方法があれば教えて欲しいです

結化(Yuka), リリ 九里(M. Greenの英語の授業で発表を行いました。 発表を聞いたクリー ン先生は, 結花さんの発表についてコメントを書きました。 【 結花さんの発表】 【グリーン先生のコメント を読んで,後の1から8までの各問いに答えなさい。 sog vin 【結花さんの発表】 He Many people in Shiga have worked as volunteers. My grandfather is one of them. worked as a junior high school math teacher for many years and retired five years ago. He has worked as a volunteer at the community center since then. Many children go there to play and study together after school and on weekends. He helps them ( 1 ) every day. He always says that working for other people makes him happy. His words made me interested in volunteer work. bon OR I became a high school student and wanted to try something new. So I did volunteer work at the community center this summer. Now, I will talk about my experiences. I hope my speech will give you a chance to think about volunteer work. During summer vacation, I visited the community center. The community center 【used / many /is/ people/byl living in my city. And the volunteers do a variety of work. My first volunteer work was to take care of elderly people. I played some games and talked with them in the morning. Mr. Sato, one of the elderly men, said to me, "I had a good time today. I live alone and don't have so many chances to talk to other people, especially to young people like you. So I enjoyed talking with you." I was happy to hear that. In the afternoon, I saw a little foreign girl in the playroom. She was drawing a picture alone. ), I hesitated to talk to her because of my English. Then I remembered Mr. Sato's words. So I went to the girl and said, "Hi, I'm Yuka. You are good at drawing pictures. [4]" She smiled and showed me her picture. Then she said, "I will give this picture to my Japanese friend for her birthday. I want to write 'Happy Birthday!' in Japanese on the picture. Can you teach me how to write it?" I was glad to hear that. I taught her how to write it in hiragana. She practiced many times and looked very happy when she saw the picture after she finally finished 5[write] her message in Japanese. Then she said to me, "Thank you for helping me!" Her big smile made me very happy. These experiences reminded me of my grandfather's words. Before doing volunteer work, I thought that helping other people was to make them happy. However, I realized that helping other people made me happy,) too. So we can [ 6 ]. Now I'm looking forward to doing volunteer work again during spring vacation. Thank you for listening. (注) volunteer(s): ボランティアをする人 retire: 退職する community center: E play : 遊ぶ hesitate : ためらう chance : playroom: 【グリーン先生のコメント】 Your speech was great. I'm glad that you learned an important thing. I do volunteer work, too. I visit the city library every Saturday. I help foreign people there. Some foreign people don't understand Japanese. So I help them borrow books. Do you like to read books? The staff members are looking for someone who can read books to children. If you are interested, why don't we visit it together this Saturday?