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」 困 ( )内に入る珂を下から選び 適切な形にして文民ませて言いまじょラ= 1. My sister is very proud of( ) an animator. 2.( )pictures is not allowed in thia muaeum 3. Would you mind( )mehislatestbooko 人. Tcouldntstop( )whenTwatehedthevideo. [take /1end / be /augh ] 必要 回 日本語の意味に合うように, ( )内os シッ の 6 語(句) を並べか い 鹿まだ なら語を適切な形にしましょう。 II W 1.「ナルト』 は世界中の人々に広めるに値する間画です。 gz7o iS a manga ( to /worth / people / introduce ) around the world. 私は漫画クラブに入ろうかなと考えています。 Tm thinking ( of/ manga club /join 7 the ). 3. 宿題を終えると, ソフィーはテレビゲームを始めました。 After ( her / finish / homework ), Sophie began to play a video game. ・ 私はこれらの古い漫画本を捨てる気にならないのです。 (throw away / ike / dontt / feel ) these old comic books。 2. 日本語の意味に合うように, 英語で表現しましょう。 1. 子供の頃. 私はアンパンマンを描くのが得意でした。 Anpanman. When 1 was a child, 私の趣味はアメリカの漫画本を集めることです。 2. My hobby js 93. プラウン先生は日 談を言う (make jokes) ことに慣れていません。 Ms. Brown js 4. エリックは日本の伝統的な消稽語である語に行ってみたくなりました。 t0 see 7cAxgo Erie traditional Japanese comic storyteling. 上3 をに。 天馬表現しましょう。

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の記を大以下の要回の答えを(ア)ー(エ)より選び記を符えなきい Young People cet cw fit than older people Some people say that young people "friues js that tree? Take a ook at iMis ablc Ths s mede by the Minidry of mltL Labor and Welfare。You cmn see how je fruit young eople er The reewon for this trend is simplk。 Mt | oumg pcople dont cat fruit becauwe they ae too cxpensive to cat every day。 Some young pcople say tbey dont et them beeuse iiey dnt want to get their hands diry or cciing them is a Tnuisance。Another rcnson 5 thatifyoung people ive by themsclves ir js difcultto nh eatng arge fuitssuch as atermeons or meions belore they "ro bad. Some kinds of fruit are sGll popular among young peoplc. The rmost or he fits are "imporred from other countrie clerwin japan are triing to change lessonsr to dlementary schooky Others sre promotng fruit on radio programs Anot Many fruit growers and fu ュ vending machine for fruit An apple cutter acked ut appkes at ome sattons It wil be intereving to we young people eat 半柱 *lees こかない *go bad 麻る。 wimport 得する 設問 1. Why are youmg people called "fruitlessT te Nmiary VHHkaNdL Labor and Water 厚生人 manufacture 半 Tr 人20I5和人 yare kiwi fits and banans_ However iion。 Some farmers olcr fruit ther interesting tril manufacturer introduced vending machines which we morc or lews fnit in the future knuikance うんきりすること の) Because youmg people don't eat much fruit (の Because young people dont grov fm (②) Because young people ike to cat ri (ご) Because many fruit growers are trying to scl morc fruit 2.What is the percentage of people over 70 years old who domt eat fruitat al (7) About 20 % (7) About 30上% (⑫) About40 % (エ) Zem 3. Which of following describes the graph correctly? (⑦) Halfof women in their sixties eat more than 100 grams of fruit per day. (?) Less than a qarter of people in Bities emt more than 100 grams of fruit per dy (⑰) More than half the people below the age of 50 eat no fruit で) About twenty percent of people in their tventies eat more tham 200 grams of fruit per day。 4 Which of the following (7) Fruitis expensive for them (⑫) They want to keep their hands cleam. ror the reason why young people dOmt eat fi (① Fruitis not tasty ご) They cannot hinish eating fruit betore they go bad. YYhich sentence is correct about the articlef (ア) Watermelons and melons are stll popular amOng YOUng DcoDle. (?) Most Kiwi fruits and bananas are On in TaDaT. (⑦) Some farmers are promoting their fruit On rd Program エ) There are vending machines for fruit at eVery SL4iOh.

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No.2 人@ 。 Write an essay on the given TOPIC. @ UseTWO ofthe POINTS below to support youranswer 人@ Structure: Introduction, main body, and conclusion 人@ Suggested length: 120-150 words TOPIC Should a country develop a national DNA database? POINTS Exoneration Crime prevention Privacy False accusation