英検二級の英作文の練習をしているのですが、写真の中でなにか添削するところはありますか？ ご指摘していただけるならおねがいしたいです。

英作文 it is I think such buildings will become more. in the future. First, if we will use cor economize. We NO. for example, we will not have to buy the water by collecting rainwater. It can some DATE roin mater in various ways, use giving plants. far Second, rainwater is useful when we will be emergency. example, water shorting. is. one As If we don't have eroght water, method. It help us for these reasons, mary buildings collect roinmoter and suit as water ther use it in some ways, to plants. I think it is good intentions. we rain mater -Topic Today, many buildings collect rainwater and then use it in various ways, such as to plants. Do you become more compon giving water think such buildings will In the future?

赤線を引いた部分 何を行ってるかわからないです about that I told you の語順かもしれないと思う思考ってどんな感じですか？

Section 068 212 「私があなたにお話をしたもう一人の女の子もブリストルに住んでいる。 The other girl (about/also/I/that/told/ you) lives in Bristol. 213 214 これが昨日君が話していた本ですか。 (the / book / this / you / were/talking/is/about) yesterday? 基本 These are the tools () he built his own house. ① that ③ with which まずは確認 024 Section 069 215 (1) 目的格の関係代名詞 (→212 ) を用いる表現 I have a talented daughter (whom/that) I am proud of. 「私には自慢の才能のある娘がいる」 (←I havea talented daughter. + I am proud of her.) *目的格の関係代名詞は省略できる (2) 前置詞+目的格の関係代名詞〉 を用いる表現→214] I have a talented daughter of whom I am proud. 「私には自慢の才能のある娘がいる」 (←I have a talented daughter. + I am proud of her.) *前置詞のあとの目的格の関係代名詞は省略することはできない。 ◆注意 〈前置詞 + that〉は用いられない。 (x) a talented daughter of that I am proudはス 1 which 3 where with that ④ which 先行詞が関係代名詞節の中で前置詞の目的語に なっている場合は、2種類の表現が可能 ●● Please tell me the name of the shop ( )you that why まずは確認 | 025 関係副詞は,基本的に先行詞が「場所 reason 「理由」 なら why → 218 を用いる 関係副詞 [213] 節内では前置詞の目的語が欠けている

彼らは家でそれらをどのようにして使うのですか。という英文を書く問題で、回答はHow do they use them at homeなんですが、How do they use these at homeでもあっていますか？？

関係詞の分野です。至急解答をお願いします🙏

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英語のことについて質問です💦 「初めて作ったが楽しかった。」① 「可愛く作ることが出来たし、自分で顔を書くことが出来たから楽しかった」② 「帰りの新幹線で友達と遊んだ」③ 「カードゲームをしたり、みんなでお菓子を食べながら話した」④ 「学校では出来ないことだったから凄く楽し... Read More

(2)がわかりません。答えはイなのですが、どうしてイなんですか？解説をお願いします🙇‍♀️

1 次の英文を読んで、あとの (1)~(3)の問いに答えなさい。 Did you know that a lot of people have difficulties in shopping? There are many old people who are too weak and can't walk for a long time. It's very difficult for them to go shopping every week because they can't walk or ride bikes to shops. So, their families want them to stop driving a car. If old people can't get fresh food at a shop for a long time, they will have health problems. In rural places, there aren't many shops near their homes. People can find only a few small shops that are too far away. If old people hope to buy many kinds of things they need, they have to go to bigger shops in bigger cities. But in some rural places, there aren't many trains and buses. So they don't have any means to get there for shopping alone. How about old people living in bigger cities? Cities usually have a lot of shops, but in some cities, people can't find many shops these days. This is because shopping malls are usually built in the suburbs, and the number of small shops *throughout the cities is getting (). So like in rural places, old people have to go shopping in places that are now far away from home. But for some, it's difficult. What can we do for those old people who have difficulties in shopping? Some *vendors carry a lot of products in their cars to rural places or the suburbs and sell them to people living there. If these people can go there every week, local people don't have to go shopping with difficulties. Also, shopping on the Internet is another good way to get things. But many old people have not used the Internet much, so they need other people's support. In the future, there will be more old people in Japan. *Even more people may have difficulties in shopping. So we should keep thinking about the problem. throughout [03 vendor 物を売る人 () means & the suburbs even~ さらに~ (1) 文中の@に次の3つの文を入れるとき, 最も適切な順になるよう符号を並べなさい。 7 You may think that they can go shopping by car. In Japan, the percentage of traffic accidents by old drivers has increased. But it's often dangerous for old people to drive cars. (2) 文中の()に入れるのに最も適切な語を次のア~エの中から1つ選び、 その符号を書きなさい。 7 higher smaller less I more (3) 本文の内容と合うものを次のア~オの中から2つ選び、 その符号を書きなさい。 7 If old people can't get fresh food at a shop for a long time, they will be sick. People living in rural places usually have some small shops near their houses. A lot of people in the suburbs like going shopping at shopping malls better than going shopping at small shops. I Some people carry products in their cars, and that is helpful for old people who have difficulties in shopping. The problem about shopping will be solved because old people have used the Internet a lot.

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[4] Read the instructions and write a well-organized answer in English. (50 points) Virtual reality (VR)* refers to a high-quality simulation of reality created by a computer. Probably the most famous use for VR so far is gaming. But VR has also been used to improve society in various fields such as education, medicine, and engineering. Describe a single specific way that virtual reality can be used to improve society. Explain your idea in detail in about 100 English words. Notes: Virtual reality (VR)*: VR systems use special glasses that completely cover the user's eyes. These glasses show a very realistic picture of a world created by the computer. In addition, the systems can tell when the user moves their head, arms, and sometimes other body parts. So users can control the action by natural movement. Some systems even let users feel like they are touching things. Thus, VR systems can make users feel like they are really in another world. 〔答案〕 I suggest you to simulation with VR. For example, doctors can practice operation. I have the three reasons. First, VR's display is very real. So doctors can do as if real simulation. Second, every one can make simulation software. If you want add patients information to VR and study how to make software, you can make VR software to yourself. Third, medical professors can use VR simulation in lecture. If they do this, Students who want be surgeon in the future will reduce about operation's anxiety. In this way, VR have a lot of possibilities that useful of medical field. For these reasons, I suggest VR simulations.

赤四角のwhereは関係代名詞の目的格であってますか？

microplastics in the environment. These plastic bits 海の中 remain in the places where many food sources are found. They can be eaten or swallowed by sea

至急お願いいたします🚨 生物の質問です。 ミトコンドリアの経路についての説明だと思うのですが、電子オーバーフローモデルと電子分布モデルの違いを教えていただきたいです。 また、どういう仕組みなのか、何故このように電子が流れるのかも教えていただきたいです。 UQ poolはユ... Read More

(A) Electron overflow model (considered out-of-date) Alt UQ pool Alternative oxidase inactive. Alt No alternative pathway activity Cytochrome pathway unsaturated Cyt (B) Electron distribution model (reflects current thinking) UQ pool Cyt Alternative pathway active Cytochrome pathway saturated Alt Alternative oxidase active Alt UQ pool Cyt Cyt Figure 14.33 Two models for regulation of electron flow through the alternative oxidase. (A) In the electron overflow model, no appreciable electron transfer through the alternative pathway takes place until electron flow through the cytochrome pathway is at or near satu- ration. This could result from the effects of respirato- ry control, if the rate of mitochondrial ATP produc- tion exceeds its rate of utilization in the cytosol, or from some externally imposed stress, such as low temperature. Under such circumstances, the UQ pool becomes sufficiently reduced to allow electrons to flow through the alternative oxidase, the latter re- quiring that the UQ pool be 40% to 60% reduced to attain significant activity. (B) In the electron distribu- tion model, the alternative and cytochrome path- ways both show significant activity at low levels of UQ pool reduction, and electrons are distributed be- tween the two pathways on the basis of the relative activities of each pathway. The activity of the alter- native oxidase under these circumstances is thought to be regulated by the action of a-keto acids and by reduction/oxidation of the intermolecular disulfide bond, as well as by additional regulatory mecha- nisms not yet characterized.