誰か採点お願いしますやって欲しいことは2つあります①添削②英検と同じように内容・構成・語彙・文法の観点を点数つけてほしいです この二つです

Question Some people say that too much water is wasted in Japan. Do you agree with this opinion? (POINTS: Daily habits, Technology. The environment) Answer Tagree with this opinion. I have two reasons why. To begin with, there are lot of water in Japan than other countries. WVe can use it whenever we like it. But it is difficult for other countries to do because they do not have a lot of water. But they can manage to live with less water. In addition, we often keep it running while we are taking a shower or washing dishes. Many people use it unconsciously therefore It is a problem. For these reasons l agree with this opinion

③じゃダメな理由はなんですか？？

The government report on science and technology released las month describes how technological progress ( lives by 2035. 13 13. ) peoples ロロロ T E合 の changes 2 is changing 3 will be changed ④ will have changed evad) T (立教大 (い本

長文です。答えはイ何ですが、その根拠となるところがわかりません。

(*印の付いている単語·語句には, 本文のあとに [注] がある。) There are many museums and *theme parks around Tokyo. Some of them teach people about the history of Japan, like *Edo Wonderland in Nikko and the "Edo-Tokyo Museum in Ryogoku. They are popular places for school trips because students can enjoy learning about Japanese history. I remember one of my school trips. When I was a student in Australia, we went on a school trip to Old Sydney Town. It was a theme park that *recreated the *past, just nke Edo Wonderland in Nikko. Old Svdnev Town was an hour away from Sydney Dy bus. 1t had more than 30 buildings. They were made in the same 'style as buildings in 1803. Many *actors were working at the theme park. They *wore old-style clothes, spoke old-style English, and "pretended to live in the town. “Horse-drawn wagons went up and down the streets. upin My friends and I were excited to see the actors' "performances. People drank at a "pub, sang old songs and danced in the streets. Some of them pretended to “fight a duel Some museum “staff gave us short history lessons, and we enjoyed listening to them very much. I remember Old Sydney Town was very exciting, because it brought us to another world. Old Sydney Town closed about 30 years after it opened. Many people visited there at first, but the number of people visiting there "gradually went down. The buildings started to become old. and more and more actors left Old Sydney Town. There were a lot of people who enjoyed visiting Old Sydney Town when they were children. And later, they took their own children there, but they said it was not as exciting as before. Why did Old Sydney Town close? There are many different "opinions about it. Some people say young people now like to play video games, and these young people think that a trip through time is not very exciting. Other people believe that Old Sydney Town did not *attract many people because it could not make new and exciting *entertainment. Times change and people also change. New "technology and the Internet can make new kinds of entertainment, and people can enjoy them at home. New building *materials can now make buildings that look like something from the future. New technology will make us more surprised. But it is also very important for us to keep old culture and entertainment. Maybe some of these things are not seen in everyday life, but they make a "link with the past. For example, if you go to see kabuki, maybe you will think about Japanese people who lived in the past. Culture *is made up of all the things people did in the past, and it makesa country and its people "unique. If we forget about the past, then we lose our culture. 10

Eはなぜ3になるのか教えてください！

(D) They never fail us when we are in trouble. hever fall 1o TV (1) help (2) helpful for (3) helping (4) to help (E) The company succeeded due to technology. due to (1) advance (2) advance its ()advanced (4) advances

この並び替えであってますか？

First, let's look at clothing. At first glance, the fashion industry_is not 6 really an area for pioneering research to take place. However, believe it or not, nanotechnology is already being used to create special coatings, made from nanoparticles* of silicon, that are sprayed onto clothes to make them waterproof or stainproof. Other nanoparticles are put in T-shirts to block ultraviolet light 2 3 5 from the sun, (ア sunburned イ from ウ wearer エ getting オ the カ preventing) . Nanotechnology can also be used to kill bacteria in clothes to

日本が貿易を行うようになってからの輸出品、輸入品の移り変わりについて教えていただきたいです😭🙏🏻

長文中のwhichの先行詞や、has stood が他動詞か自動詞であるか、あなたはどう考えますか。わかる方いたら、教えてください。　個人的にwhichの先行詞はour society and democracyでhas stood は他動詞でbasic valuesを目的... Read More

to keep the economy strong and growing. of ordinary citizens, including workers with contracts promising them financial sector demanded to be paid back first ー putting the welfare those at the top geta far better deal than those in the middle. System is fair- but it is now evident to all that ours is not, that (イ) in so many' other instances, when troubles emerged, the opportunityV. equal access to justice, a sense of a system that is fair - have been eroded.y A tax system such as ours is, for instance, based voluntary compliance. It works if there is a belief that the infrastructure, education, and technology, investments that are needed But the real cost of inequality is to our democracy and our society. 早稲田大-商 2016年度 英語 17 values for which) the Basic Country has stood equality of on 一 retirement benefits, in the backseat. function without trust. Although economists No society can precious thing, and once eroded, it may be hard to restore. (Adapted from Joseph E. Stiglitz: The Great Divide, 2015) 注 *miscarriage of justice 誤審 設問1.下線部(1)~(5)の意味にもっとも近いものを(a)~d)からそれぞれ一 つ選び、マーク解答用紙の所定欄にマークせよ。 1 (a) expectations that he wants to fulfill in real life b hopes of how his family will grow d possibilities of what his future has in store 2) (a) partly (C) ideas that he applies to his future career (b) unequally d with prejudice *le

教えてほしいです！！お願いします！！

問題は【1】~【4】まである。答えは各問題の指示に従って別紙の解答用紙に書きなさい。 【1】次の英文を読んで設問に答えなさい。 Headaches are a big problem. Each year, millions of people suffer from severe headaches that affect their enjoyment of life, (1) not to mention their productivity at work. estimate, headaches cost individuals and businesses more than (2) $50 billion each year! (3) This is one of the reasons research into headaches has become a worldwide effort. Although he did not know much about how headaches work, Hippocrates was the first doctor to find a way to treat them. By 400 BC, Hippocrates had discovered that the *bark from willow trees was useful in treating pain. He made a white powder from the tree's bark and gave it to his patients. Hippocrates did not know it, but he was actually prescribing a natural chemical in willow bark called salicin. Whena person eats salicin, the chemical is changed inside his or her body into (4) salicylic acid. It turns out that salicylic acid is good for stopping pain, including headache pain, but it is bad for a person's stomach. In the 1800s, a chemist in Germany slightly changed easier for people to take. commonly known as aspirin. Aspirin was used throughout most of the 1900s to treat headaches, but doctors had little idea about what really caused headaches. When doctors can *diagnose the cause of a disease, they can find better ways to treat it. Therefore, as medical technology developed, doctors began to use it to learn more about the human brain and about headaches. In fact, according to one m to make it This new form of the chemical was called acetylsalicylic acid, now acid's Now doctors classify headaches ( A ) two general types: primary and secondary. A primary headache is a condition ( B) as only the headache itself. one caused by another physiological condition, such as an *infection or a *tumor. For primary headaches, doctors have determined three possible causes. headache is caused by stress. characteristically felt on both sides of the head as a dull, steady pain. Another kind of primary headache is the *migraine headache. Exactly what causes these headaches is not well understood, but many experts believe it could be abnormal brain activity causing changes in the brain's chemistry and blood flow. For many people, migraines are caused by certain (5) stimuli, such as poor sleep or particular foods or smells. A sufferer usually feels intense pain on one side of the head and becomes sensitive to light and noise. If the migraine is severe, the sufferer may *vomit repeatedly. The third kind of primary headache is known as the cluster headache. Cluster headaches typically occur around the same time each day for weeks or months at a time. The person ( C)from this kind of headache usually feels pain on one side of her or his head, and the pain is centered around one of the eyes. Doctors do not know much (6) at present about cluster headaches, but they seem to be more common among men and could be related to alcohol or other things that affect a person's blood flow. Using computers and more advanced medical equipment, doctors continue to learn more about what happens in the brain before and during headaches. Especially in the case of migraines, some doctors believe they have found the part of the brain that sets off the reaction for severe attacks. With these insights into brain processes, doctors hope new ways will be discovered to stop headaches before they begin. On the other hand, a secondary headache is One kind of primary Doctors usually call these tension headaches, and they are 注: bark 樹皮 diagnose ~を診断する、~を突き止める 感染症·伝染病 migraine (headache) 偏頭痛 infection tumor 腫場 vomit 食べたものを吐く (出典:READING FOR THE REAL WORLD 3rd edition, Compass Publishing より)

英検２級の過去問のライティングをやってみました 文法的なミスがあるかどうか確認していただきたいです(語数はクリアしてます)

d ) odhigosd ライティング ●以下の TOPIC について, あなたの意見とその理由を2つ書きなさい。 POINTS は理由を書く際の参考となる観点を示したものです。ただし,これら 以外の観点から理由を書いてもかまいません。 ●語数の目安は 80 語~100 語です。 ●解答は,解答用紙のB面にあるライティング解答欄に書きなさい。なお,解答 欄の外に書かれたものは採点されません。 解答が TOPIC に示された問いの答えになっていない場合や, TOPIC からずれ ていると判断された場合は,0点と採点されることがあります。TOPIC の内容 other をよく読んでから答えてください。 fore lnsib2 4 hun TOPIC People around the world live longer lives than they did in the past. Do you think people will live even longer lives in the future? The Porcent wcre aquong wan an bluow ti ueuu inow b POINTS 1 1ah b OAOW oy ● Changing lifestyles ● Developing countries ● Technology tow They amo 76.38 d roy Too 20THO) ho

英検準1級ライティングです。 添削、アドバイス等お願いしますm(_ _)m points ・accidents ・crime ・food ・technology

Q, more needs to be done to improve public safety? A,l agree with the idea that we should do a lot to improve public safety. I have two reasons. The First reason is that the number of criminals is increasing in the last few years. That is because these days, polices are so lazy that they tend to overlook the trivial troubles of criminals. Thus, governments should force lazy polices to work harder. The second reason is that more and more car accidents are happening recently. That is because some people who drink or are not attentive drive cars. Thus, we should introduce car services to improve public safety more rapidly. For these reasons, I think it necessary that more needs should do a lot to improve public safety.