英語の文法についてに質問です。 一と二枚目の緑の蛍光ペンのところの文法が合っているか確認していただきたいです。　 三枚目に参考資料を載せてあります。 お願いします🙇‍♂️

CUTTING EDGE 1-05 絶滅危惧種の選定 Have you ever heard of the "quagga"? Perhaps not, but you may have seen a zebra before. (1)The zebra is a horse-like animal with 形M distinctive black and white stripes covering its body. The quagga was a member of the zebra family, brownish in colour with white stripes FOS around the neck and the front part of the body. (2)It is often said that quagga looked like "zebra which had forgotten to put on their pajama trousers." Quaggas lived in Southern Africa, but they died out in the 19th century due to overhunting. We can now only see their wild beauty as 3stuffed specimens. Some researchers, however, have tried to "revive" the quagga. Because of its attractive stripe pattern, the quagga has gathered much attention from those interested in animal conservation. Those who would like to see the animals walk around the savannas again have conducted the Quagga Project for over thirty years in South Africa. Fas 模様のない (3)It turns out that the quagga is genetically close to the plains zebra. In this project, researchers have attempted to selectively breed plains zebras: they chose plains zebras which have fewer stripes and look slightly like quaggas. Baby zebras born to a slightly quagga- like mother and father may look more like the quagga, with a 13 significantly reduced number of stripes. (4)This project has achieved a certain level of success, producing several lovely baby zebras which have striking similarities [to ] the quagga. . However, should we be happy about this? (5)While this new generation of zebras is visually impressive, it only resembles [X]

英語です。 (b)の訳と(c)の並び替えが分かる方いらっしゃいますか？

But the 1,600 cases of deaths for which the agency obtained information. The document also failed to offer sufficient analyses of these cases from the viewpoint of how they (b) could have been prevented. No similar report has been compiled with regard to other disasters since then. In a written opinion published in August last year, the Japan Federation of Bar Associations pointed out that individual cases of disaster-related deaths offer many valuable lessons. The organization called on the government to establish an organ devoted to investigations into such cases, classify and publish specific cases, and build a database for local governments to obtain necessary information. The ministries and agencies (consideration / should serious concerned / give) to the association's proposals. (c) Many disaster-related deaths can be prevented if an appropriate environment

英作文 問題 『The spirit of mottainai を感じるのはどのような時か』 自分の経験や理由を含めて4文以上のまとまりのある文を書け。 どなたか採点をお願いいたします。 ミス・改善点等ありましたら教えて頂ければ幸いです。

Selling used books and clothes I feel the spirit of mottaina". I think selling used books and dothes is kind for environment. Also. It's good for reuse some thing which we throw away. I'm glad that there are used by people There are reasons. Selling used books and clothes I feel the spirit of mutta inai

写真の2枚目は、1枚目の文章に対しての問題で、 答えは「Yes, they are.」です。 2段落目（②の後の文章）で優れたアイデアが出て、もう折り鶴が燃やされることはなくなったのかと思ったのですが、まだ毎年燃やされているのでしょうか？ 質問の主語が「Were」だったら過... Read More

The monument receives about 10 million paper ( cranes every year. But every year those cranes are burned. It costs too much and it's not good for the environment. People have been thinking about this problem for a long time. amissed oxaba2. One good idea is to recycle the paper cranes into notebooks and origami paper. When people fold the recycled paper into cranes again, they are renewing the hope for lasting peace.

この英文、どうしてitsを使うんですか？ また、itsをwith the に置き換えても正解ですか？

日本語 地球は最も深刻な環境危 機に直面しています 英語 × The Earth is facing its most serious environmental crisis

文章長くてすいません。 赤線が引いてあるとこで『toshio did』と言ってますが'did'は絶対入れなきゃダメですか？？ didが入る理由が分かりません。😭

6 対話文読解 ② 1 次の Fumiko, Keiko, Toshioの会話を読んで、 問1~間8に答えなさい。 *印のついている語句には, 本文のあとに〔注〕 があります。 Fumiko, Keiko, and Toshio are high school students and good friends. After school, they are having a *meeting in their *classroom. They want to *recycle things. meeting me here. I thought of a great idea last night. I think we should collect *unneeded things from our homes and sell them at the city *flea market. That's a great idea, Fumiko! My house *is full of unneeded things. My family uses them. I have many old clothes. Toshio: Yes. I also have many things at home. I have old books, shoes, and more. Fumiko: I'm glad you both agree. A flea market is a good way to recycle things. Toshio: Keiko: Fumiko: Great! I will ask my father and we will clean the *garage. Maybe he has some old things and we can sell some of them. Fumiko: Keiko and Toshio, thank you Keiko: Keiko: Toshio: A Keiko: never I will go to the *city office this week. I will get *information about flea markets. have to wash my old clothes and put *prices on all of them. My mother will help me. And I will talk with my brother. He has many old books and comic books. I think that he has about one hundred comic books. We can also sell old books, right? I think we can do that. I have an old desk and chair. My mother is going to *throw them away next week. Oh, don't throw away your old desk and chair. the flea market? Toshio, can you ask someone in the city office about it? Toshio: OK, I will ask them tomorrow. Fumiko: Great ideas, everyone. Let's start! B Can we sell a desk and chair at brand ad asdw bas olet aud? I Last Sunday, the three students joined the flea market in the park, and they sold many things there. All of their family members helped and gave them a lot of things to sell. They all did well and made a lot of money. The three are now talking together. you of mateil das uOY 問1 問2 HE

英作文の添削お願いしたいです🙇‍♀️

(5) Peter Scott は多くの人々と協力して野生動物保護に取り組んだ。あなたが周りの人と一緒に 取り組みたいと考えることは何か。 15 語程度の英語で書け。ただし,1文または2文で書き,コ ンマやピリオドなどは語数に含めないこと。

Alsoは「理由①. Also, 理由②.」の形で用いることはできるんですか？また、理由②が否定的な内容の場合alsoが用いれないみたいなことがサイトに書いてあったのですがどうなんでしょうか？

大阪市立大学の過去問です。写真のパラグラフの"As a reault〜の一文の文構造がよく分かりません。 また、when presented with、2個目のカッコ内のas are humanの訳の仕方が答えを見てもどこに訳が出ているか等イマイチわかりません。 メモが... Read More

[5] exquisite pain. 傾向 仕方ない Such a tendency is understandable. Humans evolved ina [イ], wild 清備? すごくひどい environment with dangers at everyTturn. 「Those humans who developed a 健全なル偏新宿 本当にきばと向いていたかもしれなり 33/19+²2 healthy paranoia* and jumped at shadows (that genuinely may have had teeth) 接 あらわれる? さらされる いでんしを残す。 survived long enough to pass on their genes. As a result, when presented with ありそう。 現世人類 any conceivable threat or danger, the modern human has a suite of (mostly 反応機構群 引きおこす 反作用 unconscious) response mechanisms providing a reflex that enable them to deal そういう better with said threat, and this reflex is still very much alive and ウ] (as 闘争 逃走 are humans, thanks to it). This reflex is the fight-or-flight response, which is a 端的正確 great name as it concisely bit accurately describes its function. When presented with a threat, people can either fight it or run away.

オイルは使わないと書くのだと思うのですが、わからないので教えてください。初めの（）はbecauseと書きました

ウ Second, walking is good for the environment. When we use cars or buses, Hi Jy に環境 post