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2011年北海道大学の英作文の添削をおねがいします。questionCです。 字数が足りていませんが、それ以外の部分をおねがいします。

Australia, the United States, and urban India. Rend the following passage and answer questions A through C in English. while their wives work outside the home, Stay-at-home dads are also called stay- Stay-at-home dads are married fathers with children who care for their family domestic burden has led some couples to completely reverse their roles. The number of stay-at-home dads is starting to increase in Britain, Canada, 「husband who can do the housework, such as shopping, cooking, and looking alter the children. The widespread expectation that men should share the vin England showed that 75 percent of women in their twenties prefer a 38 on were breadwinners and women were caregivers. Arecent Traditionally, Survey can Many stay-at-home dads take great pleasure in showing affection to their children. Their wives can pursue careers without worrying about teaching family values or paying for child care. Research suggests that children of stay- athome dads often benefit from strong bonds with both parents, whereas the father's role ina stay-at-home mom household is less influential. Although the number of stay-at-home dads is increasing, it remains small Compared to the total number of fathers. In the United States, the government estimates that in 2009 there were 158,000 stay-at-home dads, a mere 0.2 percent of 67.8 million fathers. In Australia, about 1 percent of fathers are stay-at-home dads. In urban India, one estimate suggests 3 percent of fathers stay at home full-time. Some stay-at-home dads suffer from social stigma. Many people, including stay-at-home moms, do not understand why a man would choose to give up his career to care for his family full-time. Being a stay-at-home dad can also be career suicide. Many employers view stay-at-home dads as lacking ambition and commitment. Losing professional skills may prevent stay-at-home dads from returning to the workforce.

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English Senior High

どなたか英語の得意な方この問題問いてくださいませんか、、 先日受験して不安で眠れません

6. 次の英文を読み, 以下の設問に答えよ。 legally as a *trophy. In 2003, a lone hunter killeda rhino on a legal safari in South Africa and brought it back to Asia. Dozens of poachers soon followed. The sound of rifles being fired could be heard in the dark forest just as each paying $50,000 for a hunt. It seems like a lot to pay, but poachers can Damien Mander arrived at his campfire after a long day training *game ranger make as much as $200,000 in profits by selling a pair of horns on *the black recruits in Zimbabwe's Nakavango *game reserve. "There, near the eastern market. boundary," he pointed. He and his rangers grabbed their guns, radios, and ull Many officials in Vietnam are fighting back against reports that the country medical kits. They then drove into the night, hoping to stop the shooter. is the main market for rhino horn, stating that rhino horn bound for Vietnam (21) And so goes a night on the front lines of southern Africa's ruthless * rhino is merely in transit for another country. Do Quang Tung, deputy director of war, which has seen more than a thousand rhinos killed since 2006. At the CITES Managing Authority in Vietnam, said the country "could not be the main bloody heart of this conflict is the rhino's horn, a prized ingredient in traditional market for South African rhino horn," claiming that the majority of Vietnamese Asian medicine. Prices range from $33 to $133 a gram, which at the top end is people would not be able to ( 26 ) rhino horn. Even if there is an emerging double the price of gold. group of people who can ( 26 ) it, he thinks it is too small to make the country Although the range of the two African species 一 the white rhino and its a significant consumer. Professor Dang Huy Huynh, chairman of the Vietnam smaller cousin, the black rhino- has been reduced primarily to southern Africa Zoological Society, says that rhino horn has never been a popular ingredient in and Kenya, their populations had shown signs of improvement. In 2007 white traditional medicine. rhinos numbered 17,470, while blacks had nearly doubled to 4,230 since the mid Recently, there has been a renewed interest in the unproven belief that rhino 90s. horn has healing power. For at least 2,000 years, Asian medicine has prescribed For conservationists these numbers represented a triumph. In the 1970s rhino horn to reduce fever and treat a range of illnesses, but the handful of 22 and '80s, *poaching had nearly caused the two species to become extinct. Ther studies which have been conducted on rhino horn have not found any proof that China banned rhino horn from traditional medicine, and Yemen forbade its ust it can reduce fever. The newest rumor is that it cures cancer, but doctors say in ceremonial knife handles. All signs pointed to better days. But in 2008 th the proof is nonexistent一 no research has been published on the horn's efficacy 23) number of poached rhinos in South Africa shot up to 83, from just 13 in 200' as a cancer treatment. But even if rhino horn is not an effective cure for anything, let alone cancer, that doesn't mean it has no effect, says Mary Hardy. By 2010 the figure had soared to 333, followed by over 400 in 2011. Most of th 27) medical director of Simms/Mann UCLA Center for Integrative Oncology. "Belief horn trade was found to lead to Southeast Asia. in a treatment, especially one that is wildly expensive and hard to get, can have *Javan rhinos once lived in Vietnam's forests. ( 24 ) It had a bullet a powerful effect on how a patient feels," she says. its leg and its horn had been removed. In any event, John Hume believes no rhinos need to die to supply the rhino Even with the rhinos gone, rhino horn can still be found in Vietnam. This 28 25 horn to those who want it. The 69-year-old * entrepreneur has acquired one of because South African law, which complies with the Convention on Internatio the largest privately-owned rhino herds in the world, and currently has more Trade in Endangered Species (CITES), allowS a rhino's horn to be expor ○M3(45)

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English Senior High

合ってるか見てください!↓ (1)That team may have adupted new practice method (2)I should have practiced presentation more (3)My computer cannot have ... Read More

(適切な助動詞を用いて文を作る)日本語の意味に合うように下線部に適当な語句を書 Exercises in English Composition Hints 3 (1)あのチームは新しい練習方法を取り入れたのかもしれない。技術が上達した 和文和訳[別の表現に言い換える]採用した きなさい。(必要に応じて, [和文和訳の空欄をうめて考えてみよう。) (1) 18 練習方法 C practice methed They have improved their skills. (2) 20 プレゼン(テーショ ン) (2)もっとプレゼンの練習をしておくべきだった。発表中に少し間違ってしまった。 C presentation 和文和訳[隠れた主語を補う] + [別の表現に言い換える] を)練習しておくべきだった は)もっと( I made some mistakes while giving it. (3) 19 (コンピュータ)ウ (3)私のコンピビュータがウイルスに感染したはずがない。ウイルス対策ソフトをイン ストールしているのだから。 イルス C computer virus [váras] (病気やウイルスな ど)に感染する catch ウイルス対策ソフト Uanti-virus I have installed anti-virus software in it. software (4)子どもの頃はよくゲームのことで兄とケンカをしたものだ。 が)子どもだったとき, (4) 21 ~のことでケンカを する 和文和訳[隠れた主語を補う]( fight over ~ は)よくゲームのことで兄とケンカをしたものだ when we were children. (5) 20 設問 question (5) 最後の設問の答えを直すべきではなかった。もとの答えが正解だった。 和文和訳 [隠れた主語を補う] + [別の表現に言い換える] は)最後の設問の答えを( )べきではなかった The original answer was correct. 26 Part 1 動詞の表現

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よって放送されるラジオ番組 Voice of America を 聞くこともできます。 もし外国の友人がほしいなら、チャットルームに 行くこともできます。世界中の多くの人々が、いろ いろなことを話しにそこへやってきます。外国の友 人とeメールを交換することは、あなたの語学能力 を向上させるだけではなく、世界の人々の生活を考 えることにも役立つでしょう。 多くの皆さんはインターネットを使う機会に恵ま れています。インターネットを活用して、何かをす るもう1つの手段を見つけてください。 インターネットは、外国語を学ぶ人にとってと ど何でも買うことができます。 コンピューターの前」 も役に立ちます。インターネットには学習教材があ ふれています。例えば、アメリカの有名な新聞 USA TODAY によって報じられる世界のニュース The Internet is changing our lives. It's very useful, so nmore and more people are using it these days. You can buy almost anything from online shops like Amazon.com or Rakuten. All vou have to do is sit in front of your computer, then choose the goods you want. It's that easy. The Internet is very useful for people learning foreign languages. It is full of learning materials. For example, you can read world news reported by USA TODAY, a famous American newspaper. Or, you can listen to Voice of America, a radio program broadcast by the U.S. government. brob Lek C O1. 話し手がおそらくあなたに最も言いたいことは何 If you want foreign friends, you can go to chat か。 ons a00m0 IO く rooms. Many people around the world come there to talk about many things. Exchanging e-mails with foreign friends will not only brush 日本人はアメリカ人よりもインターネットをよ く使う。 2インターネットショッピングは問題を引き起こ すかもしれない。 up your language skills, but help you think about the lives of people around the world. Many of you have chances to use the Internet. Please make use of the Internet, and find another way of doing things. インターネットでラジオ番組を聞くことができ 5100m る。 インターネットは私たちの生活を便利にする。 2. 講義によると、外国の友人を作るために何ができ るか。 4 を得 geomior 0 チャットルーームに行く。 ② eメールを交換する。 語学能力を磨く。 ④世界の人々のことを考える。 i 3. 話し手によると、どの記述が正しいか。 訳 go1aa インターネットは私たちの生活を変えつつありま 1 す。それはとても便利ですから、最近は、ますます 多くの人々が利用しています。アマゾン·ドットコ ムや楽天といったオンラインショップから、ほとん 00 って、ほしい商品を選ぶだけでいいのです。そ ① 英語の手紙を書くことで、外国の友人を作るこ れぐらい簡単なのです。 Tnos sho とができる。 2 インターネットショッピングは、 店で買うより も安い。 オンラインショップで物を買いなさい。 の 外国の友人とeメールを交換することは、 語学 能力を磨いてくれるだろう。 ao 1oog 00,000 役に立ちます。ィンターネットには学習教材があ 呪むことができます。あるいは、アメリカ政府に

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