九州大学英語2019年の英作文の添削をお願いします🙇‍♀️ 大問4が要約と英作文、5が和文英訳です！🙇‍♀️🙇‍♀️🙇‍♀️

〔4〕 九州大-理系前期 Read the following newspaper article and follow the instructions below. (36) 16 2019年度 英語 in Engligi taul" According to the Kanagawa Prefectural Police Station, a 20-year-old female university student caused a traffic death. The student was riding on a power- She moved off from an assisted bicycle when the accident happened. intersection and started riding on the sidewalk. At that moment, a 77-year-old lady was walking on the sidewalk and moved toward the bicyclist. The student hit the lady. The collision caused the lady to fall and strike her head. She was transported to hospital, but died of her injuries two days later. At the time of the incident, the student was apparently holding a smartphone in her left hand and a drink in her right while steering the power- assisted bike. Moreover, she had an earphone in her left ear. Therefore, police arrested the student for breaking the new law and riding recklessly. Police are investigating whether the student noticed that the old lady was walking toward her. They suspect that she was not paying sufficient attention because she was operating her smartphone right up until the collision. Her court appearance date has not been decided yet. The Mainichi, December 16, 2017 Instructions: Write two well-developed paragraphs in English. In the first paragraph, summarize the main points of the newspaper article above in lo approximately 100 words. Use different vocabulary and sentence structure from the original passage as much as possible. In the second paragraph, write your opinion about what should be done to reduce accidents like this in approximately 50 words. hosidinlong unich lor, condadnoah

九州大学英語2019年の英作文の添削をお願いします🙇‍♀️ 大問4が要約と英作文、5が和文英訳です！🙇‍♀️🙇‍♀️🙇‍♀️

〔4〕 九州大-理系前期 Read the following newspaper article and follow the instructions below. (36) 16 2019年度 英語 in Engligi taul" According to the Kanagawa Prefectural Police Station, a 20-year-old female university student caused a traffic death. The student was riding on a power- She moved off from an assisted bicycle when the accident happened. intersection and started riding on the sidewalk. At that moment, a 77-year-old lady was walking on the sidewalk and moved toward the bicyclist. The student hit the lady. The collision caused the lady to fall and strike her head. She was transported to hospital, but died of her injuries two days later. At the time of the incident, the student was apparently holding a smartphone in her left hand and a drink in her right while steering the power- assisted bike. Moreover, she had an earphone in her left ear. Therefore, police arrested the student for breaking the new law and riding recklessly. Police are investigating whether the student noticed that the old lady was walking toward her. They suspect that she was not paying sufficient attention because she was operating her smartphone right up until the collision. Her court appearance date has not been decided yet. The Mainichi, December 16, 2017 Instructions: Write two well-developed paragraphs in English. In the first paragraph, summarize the main points of the newspaper article above in lo approximately 100 words. Use different vocabulary and sentence structure from the original passage as much as possible. In the second paragraph, write your opinion about what should be done to reduce accidents like this in approximately 50 words. hosidinlong unich lor, condadnoah

全て解説していただけると助かります😥 わかるとこだけでも十分です！よろしくお願いします

3 次の英文の下線部a~dには一個所誤りがあります。誤りのある個所を解答用紙にa~dで 記入しなさい。 (1) While I agree with you, I don't believe in your plan is best. a b C d (2) This new small car is sold well among the people in developing countries. a b C (3) Judged from the setting sun, it will be fine tomorrow. a (4) It is said that children will grow up to be as cleverer as their parents. a b C (5) Statistics show a steady increase in a number of students who go to college. a bc

テストでプレゼンテーションをするのですが、おかしなところがあれば直して欲しいです

I think that high school students in Japan should go to a foreign country on a school trip. I recommend for their school trip is Italy. I recommend it for two reasons. The city Firstly, Italy has the largest number of World Heritage sites. Forexample, Colosseum where wild animals were hunted and Domenico monastery displaying the Last Supper and so on Secondly, there are many unique cultures. = One of them is Venice Carnival. The festival where people wear luxurious costumes. Others Chrismas is a famous event where the whole family gathers together to eat and exchange gifts. In conclusion, I think that they should go to foreign country on a school trip better than domestic.

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ウクライナからの難民を日本は受け入れるべきか。 I don't think that Japan should recept Ukrainan refugees To be sure accepting them leads to learning their and promotes Japon to become actually it is difficult. for Cince the distance from far If they comer Tot of Also there crimes and terrorisms increases. culture life and culture more global. However them to come. 1 expenses. the number of Ukraine to Japan is Japan have to spend of living to Japan 1 .. very a difference in accept Ukrainan refugees. money is. Date Oh a possibility that because of Therefore, Japan had better not 91 words their

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水をペットボトルで売らないようにしたりなどのペットボトルの使用を減らすべきという意見についてどう思うか書く問題です。 添削をお願いします。 ※高校入試の問題です。

I agree with Ayaka. This is because we can reduce the number of plasti c good for enviromment. bottles and it is

答えは4なのですが、なぜ3はダメなのでしょうか。 教えて頂きたいです🙇‍♀️

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至急！ 教えてください。

3 次の文の に適する語を下の内から選び、 必要があれば適する形になおして書きなさい。 young for her age, but my sister doesn't. (1) Your sister (2) (3) Do you (4) I'm Daiki, so please (5) They tell me your phone number, and I'll call you later. her name? me Dai. the city ten minutes ago. call leave know look

A.Bに当てはまる組を選ぶのですが、答えはなんでしょうか？？ またそれになる理由も教えて頂きたいです🙇

の町で開かれる国際 の中に、それぞれ入 か。 ただし、下の Other Information Open from 10:00 to 16:00 on the days first and second Open from 11:00 15:00 on all pen from 12:00 17:00 on the cond and third Den from 10:00 17:00 on all and "coconut will also sell from India. it may be an eat a lot Aki: Sally: I see. Aki: Look at that sign, Sally. The festival asks us where (A) from. There are six areas in the world: Asia, North America, South America. Europe, Africa, and Oceania. We put a small sticker on the area we are from. For example, I'm from Japan, so I will put it on "Asia." Aki: Aki: The number of people who 11 Where are you from? 7 (A) we are (B) comes 2. (A) we are (B) came Asia (アジア) North America (北アメリカ) are from Asia is the largest. Yes. This is Japan, so a lot of Japanese people came here. Sally: You're right. The number of people who are from South America is the second largest. Do you know the reason? Well, there are a lot of people who came from there and are working in this town, so "probably some of them came to the festival today. Sally: I see. is from Africa, right? If he (B) Oh, only two people from Africa came here. Idi in the next class here, there would be three stickers on the sign. South America ************* (南アメリカ) Europe (ヨーロッパ) Africa (アフリカ) Oceania (オセアニア) ******** Right Oh, now I remember. Alice, my friend from Australia, said she would come here today. She arrived in Japan three days ago. Sally: Really? Can I meet her? Aki: Maybe I'll call her. [注] probably おそらく 1 (A) it is (B) comes I (A) it is (B) came 3 次の文章は、ニュージーランドに帰国した Sally が、 Aki に送ったEメールの内容である Dear Aki, H