受験の英作文添削をお願いします。

以下の指示を読んで,奥語で答えよ。 Then, explain the story and the main point in English. Look at the picture story below about two donkeys*. 英語 13 ad re efu えさ the 2 えさ Sるすせ肉 AO29A (1) JA GA えさ 37た -た A BA ーさ の の が とま trin 2m Th pC- JT Committee, 1920)

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al, too. OI think(is / thán / ) the y liked our sea, and we enjoyed talking with them in English. / is / because / language / an ) people from different countries )I will study English hard. sea / beautiful / this / more I will also learn about the history by working as a tour guide. Thank you. ce:~を紹介する Naoshima:直島(瀬戸内海東部にある香川県に属する島)ferry: フェリー 言語 answer: 答える sunset: 夕焼けshining:輝いている island: 島 て culture: 文化 1つずつ (4) 下線部のが「はじめて」となるよう )に適する語を書きなさい。 frst に,( luring (5) 下線部6, ⑦の( )内の語をならべかえて書きなさい。 ound this Sea is more besutifulthan

ELEMENTlessons9です。この課末問題の回答を教えて欲しいです。お願いします。

2021 英語 2A の英 1808 課末問題 aiio19 Lesson 9 The Vancouver Asahi er eaoonO ofa do8 oddio Comprehension tndW 9 A Reading for main ideas: Choose the best answer. 1. What is the main idea of the passage? @ The hardships that the Nikkei had during World War II. O The first Nikkei baseball team in North America. © The relationship between the Nikkei and other Canadians through baseball. 2. The Vancouver Asahi finally won o ni ebi t s @ the respect of other Canadians through fair play nebioos sdT O the championship, improving their physical strength © the award for sportsmanship during the Pacific War c eviansage ne 2obaw asw buo) sedW S B Reading for details: Fill in the blanks with the words in the box below. There are some unnecessary words. Then divide the paragraphs into the following sections. TA Japanese beganimmigrating to Canada in the 1870s, but they faced prejudice and (1. The Nikkei enjoyed baseball, and they (2. |2 ) the Vancouver Asahi. |3 The Asahi joined the strongest (3. ) league, the Terminal League. 4 The Asahi couldn't win against the white teams because of their lack of (4. ) power. The manager, Harry Miyasaki, used the strategy called “Brain' Ball" to (5. ) the team. Harry also required the Asahi to play (6. 7 The white teams played rough against the Asahi, but they never (7. ) back. many times. ) and sent Even the white people began to support the Asahi, and they won the (8. The Pacific War changed the lives of the Nikkei. They were treated as the (9. 19 to camps. Life in camps was uncomfortable, and the people living near the camps were (10. Nikkei. 1|However, baseball (11. 12| The members of the Asahi were (12. )of the ) their hate. They understood each other by playing baseball. )into the Canadian Baseball Hall of Fame in 2003. Paragraph Organization Words Introduction ( The Asahi playing against white teams ( Rebuilding the team amateur / championship / professional enemy / established / fairly/ fearful fought /inducted/ named/neutralized physical/ discrimination/rebuild The war and baseball Epilogue Class & No. Name

至急です!!!「受け身の文」と「受け身からできた表現」って何が違うのか分かりません😵　語彙力ないので詳しくは写真を見ていただけたら理解してもらえるかと…。違いを教えて下さい🙏

21 受け身 受け身は動作をする側でなく「さ れ会側を主語にした表現だよ。 50年前に書かれた 「書く」という動作をしたのは 本ではなく、本は「された」側 CD 021 1受け身の文「~されます」 されます」 【現在) 175 The park is cleaned every day. ~されます」 The park| lis cleaned every day. その公園は毎日そうじされます。 主語 be動詞 過去分詞 176 This story was written in 1996. この物語は 1996年に書かれました。 【過去) 「~されました」 The park| was cleaned yesterday. be動詞を過去形に 0受け身の文「~されます」 「~されます」は〈主語+be動詞+過去分詞~.〉の形。 過去の文は be動詞を過去形にする。 will, can など助動詞を使うときは, 〈主語+助動詞 +be+過去分詞~.〉 で表す。 * 行為をする人は〈by +人〉「~によって」で表す。 L過去分詞のまま 【助動詞】 「~されるでしょう」 The park| will be||cleaned tomorrow. 助動詞 Lbe動詞の原形 「~によって」 だれがその動作を するのかを表す。 【by を使う場合】 ※「過去分詞」は「過去」の時間を表しているわけではないので注意。 o The park| lis cleaned by Mai. (その公園は真衣によってそうじされます。) ※(by +人)の「人が代名詞のときは、 「~を [に11の形、 受け身の否定文· 疑問文 の受け身の否定文「~されません」

この中で取り除いたほうが良い文が1文あるそうなのですがどの文か分かりません！ 私は②と選択したのですが解答が無いので正解を教えて欲しいです🙇⤵︎

問2 27 Internet users are exposed to advertisements on social media, in search results and on many websites. Most are "targeted advertisements," which are based on the past record of a person's online activities and are related to his or her personal interests. O These personalized advertisements are considered effective marketing tools as they allow advertisers to reach out to potential customers. 2 However, internet users have pointed out some of the negative aspects of these ads. 3 First, many users are disturbed or annoyed by the ads which pop up constantly and don't seem to go away. @ There isa good chance that they receive ads for goods or services that perfectly match their interest. They also feel uneasy about the way their browsing history is tracked and their personal information is collected.

最近、英語で日記をつけ始めた初学者です！ 添削・アドバイス・日記で使いやすい表現などあればお教えくださいませ_(._.)_

L29 dloudy I tole a test called Shin ken- moshi dificalt for me o salve poblem in the Wolds of history, but I want to be a historian Teacher. There fire, I will hove to stocdy hardd in History. I was sad bit I believe good day! Date 2022. 1t was very a that tomorrow will be a Date

But when this story began, that wasn't my name. 日本語訳して欲しいです🙇‍♀️

すみません、長文の穴埋めがわからないのでどなたか教えてくれる方がいましたら心強いです！ (1)と(2)がわかりません。

Dear Patron, Thank you for your contribution to the Sunset Maritime Museum. Our efforts to pass on our rich seacoast history to the next generation have been a phenomenal success. We were able to raise more than $60,000 this past year. There are many projects in progress and more planned for the following year. several retired sea captains have been volunteering their time for live 2. storytelling sessions, which have been getting young people interested in boating and fishing. Consequently, we hope to exceed the amount of donations this coming year. An anonymous donor has contributed $20,000 to get the ball --3--.We are delighted about this, as we anticipate remodeling costs of $100,000. We understand that everyone's resources are limited, --a- we ask that you help us spread the word by forwarding this to your family, friends and associates. The Sunset Maritime Museum is a worthy cause. Since the museum reopened, the number of people staying and working in this town after high school, as well as those attending college and coming back here to work in family businesses has increased almost 10%. Help save our local heritage. Your help willbe appreciated for generations to come. SVBd (8) 1. (A) Actually, there were at least a dozen new projects involving seabirds. (B) On the other hand, we didn't finish the report to our shareholders in time. (C) Otherwise, there was no information about the matter that could be shared. 0ubeem.ol opiod (D) Nonetheless, we project we will need further funding to meet operating Costs. 46 00 2. (A) For example, (B) However, (C) Notwithstanding, (D) On the other hand, 3emit ynsm visil of beleva) evsdinrelbbne eus eit GAe 1w () の O0

内容一致の問題でこのふたつは「内容が一致している」となっています。ですが「before 1600」は「1600以前」なので、17th「17世紀」出なくて16th「16世紀」にならないのですか？？教えていただけたらありがたいです

選択肢 d. Sana said potatoes came to Japan before 1600. サイは L6oe rlaにセがE7たとい子ろ Sana: It was great! We also learned about the history of potatoes. Potatoes are 'native to the 根拠 P12, L6 highlands in the Andes. Some people say potatoes were brought to Japan in the 17th アンデス山脈の高地が原産 century. じャガルもは 1の世紀に日本に もりこれすしT2 f rlale total production of potatoes.

どこを読んだら答えに導けますか？ 答えは1がenjoyed.2がeasy3がstoryです！ 長文のコツを教えてください、、

restaurant was on the first floor in the hotel. When we got to the hotel, we tried to find the 次の英文は,中学生の真紀(Maki)が, 夏休みの課題として,イギリス(the UK)を旅行したこと the restaurant was. She said, “The restaurant isn't on this floor. Please *go upstairs, On our first night in London, my family went toa restaurant in a hotel. My father heart ) restaurant on the first floor for a long time, but we could not find it. So I asked a woman We went upstairs and found the restaurant. We enjoyed dinner there, *garden. His family welcomed us and they made us lunch. We had lunch in the garden. It was エ from) Mr. Brown. He said His name is Mr. Brown B[ A[ (2)本 えなさ 4 とに(注)があります。 (56点) (3)本文中 I visited the UK with my family this summer. (4)本文 記々 We visited his family during our stav in the UK. I had a very good ue. about the restaurant ① (ア on イ since ウ for the ア A a but I did not know why the restaurant was on the second floor. The next day we visited Mr. Brown's house. Around his house, B beautiful was a SO nice. After lunch, I told Mr. Brown about the restaurant we C | the first night in London. I asked him about the floors. “Whyis the restaurant on the second floor:" He answered. “On the second floor? "I did not understand what he meant. Then Mr Brown said, "Oh, I see. The first floor in the UK is the second floor in your country. Im sorry ] didn't tell you about that." I was a little surprised to hear this. "As you know, we have many *castles in the UK. A long time ago, each castle ② (ア have イ has ウ had エhaving) its *entrance on the second floor. People went up to the second floor when they wanted to go into the castle. So the second floor is called the first floor. It's one example of *British English," said Mr. Brown. His story was very interesting to me. I said to him," he told me 3(ア another イ other ウ others I many) example of British English. C “Sure," he said. Then We enjoyed talking with each other. Now I understand that people in the UK speak British English. It's a little different from the English I am learning in Japan. I also enjoyed *communicating with people in English during this trip. I want to know more about the UK through English. In the future, I would like to visit the country again. It was a wonderful summer vacation.