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Living in The City Mayuko Ishii 1st Draft May 11, 2023 Living in the city is better than in the countryside. First, it is convenience for us to live in the city. We can use a good public transportation system when we commute to our company or school and go shopping. It can reach your destination faster than using cars. Also, in the city, there are many convenience stores. If you are hungry in the middle of the night, you can go there, buy foods, and eat them on foot. Second, It is exciting to live in the city. We can easily participate in many events, for example, music concerts, art exhibitions, and sports events. It is important to actually experience. We can broaden our viewpoint and see the new world. For example, when I went to the art museum of Alfons Mucha, I saw the real size of his paintings. Although I did not even know his name, I was interested in his paintings and loved them by seeing them in person. Thus, we will be able to spend fulfilling days if we live in the city. (177 words)

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Lo 4. 生活費を両親に頼る若者が増えている。(摂南大*) be De something wrong with the air conditioner. (dependent / young people / on / of / the number / their parents) for living expenses is increasing. The number of young people depend on their parents ~

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2012年には、アフリカゾウ全体の約10%が象牙のためだけになされました。 Hor/17 ① In 2012, / about 10% of all the African elephants/ were killed / just for ゾウの保護に注力するために、友人は私は非営利組織「アフリカゾウの涙」を their ivory. // ② To focus on protecting elephants,/ my friend and I / founded 設立しました。 a non-profit organization, / Tears of the African Elephant.// of heir medito この組織は、日本における象牙の使用に対する認識で促進することを目的としています。 ③ The organization aims to promote the awareness / of ivory use in 日本は1980年代後半まで大量の象牙を輸入していました。 Japan. // ④ Japan had been importing a lot of ivory / until the late 1980s. // 今でも、雪芽製品を気軽に購入する人もいます。 IT 気づかないうちに ⑤ Even today, / some people buy ivory products/ casually. // ⑥ They might ・猟者を支援している可能性があります J ゾウを救う鍵は、 be supporting illegal hunting/without noticing it. // ⑦ The key to saving 客用についての事を知ることです。 elephants / is to know the facts/about ivory.// froad ylleon, 私はサバンナでどこまでも続く地平線、青い空、白い雲を見るのが大好きです。 HESTULE Revi JeftA de noiv ⑧ I love seeing the endless horizon, / the blue sky, / and white clouds / in the とりわけ、 hd p come a よそこに草す元気な野生動物たちが大好です。 MOVIT 911 of astean9.9 savanna. // ⑨ Above all, / I love the energetic wild animals mened. v!leni... living there. /p elemi したかって、私はこの美しい場所でアプリカゾウやその他の野生動物を保護するためにCerinary ⑩ Therefore, / I continue working hard / to preserve African elephants/anc 努力を続けています。 other wildlife / in this beautiful place.// Savolleo ni zbute éttleTbib maw (1

このプリントの答えがわからないので、間違っているところのご指摘お願いします。 VisionQuest NewEnglish grammar47という教材です。乱雑な字で申し訳ないです。

Vision Quest Lesson 4 HO 1年 *EL 1 ( )内から適切なほうを選びなさい。 AB 1. Ann (takes) is taking) a walk in the park every morning. 2. Water (boils)/ is boiling ) at 100°℃. 番氏名 3. She (talks / is talking) on the phone now. 4. I (buy/am/buying) books on the Internet once a week. 5. Do you know the saying "Knowledge (is) was ) power"? 2 日本語に合うように,( )に適切な語を入れなさい。 AB 1. 私はいつも8時間寝る。 I (always) (sleep) for eight hours. 2. 私の父はスマートフォンを2台持っている。 (My father has). two smartphones. 3. サナは日本映画があまり好きではない。 Sana (doesn't) (like ) Japanese movies very much. 4. あなたは最近数学を一生懸命勉強していますか。 (Do >< you) (study) math so hard these days? B 3 ( )内の語句を並べかえて、英文を完成させなさい。 ただし、不要な語句が1つあります。 CD 1. (Tom/passed / passes / the exam) last week. Tom passed the exam last week. 2. (Bill/ going / went / fishing / often) with his friends when he was a child. Bill often went fishing 3. My younger sister (was/in/a / reading / reads / novel) the living room last night. was reading a novel in

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① 現在形 1 日本語の意味に合うように( )内の語を並べかえ,文全体を書き直しましょう。 (1) 彼は私が困っているといつも助けてくれます。 He (I'm / me / whenever/ helps ) in trouble. (2) 私の子どもはいつもリビングで眠ってしまいます。 My child (falls / always / asleep) in the living room. (3) 列車でそこに到着するのにどれくらいの時間がかかりますか。 How long (does / take / it / to) get there by train? 龍英 3 現 1 E (1) (2)

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backgroud←背景　という意味ですが、２, の訳はどのようにするのでしょうか？

1 Answer "T" if the statement is correct, and answer "F" if otherwise. 1. Robert Campbell was born in Ireland and grew up in New York City. F ロベルトキャンベルはアイルランド生まれで ニューヨー ク市で育ちました。 2.In the apartment building where Robert Campbell lived, there were people of other backgrounds ロベートが住んでいたアパートには、様々な living on different floors. 3.Robert didn't have any interest in other cultures. 4. When Robert felt sad, he would often go and watch submarines for a while. 2. 3. [Answers) 1. 2 Answer the questions in English. 1. What countries were Robert Campbell's neighbors from? 4. 2. What did he enjoy doing with his neighbors? 1 Ans 1.WH 2.0m 3.Ir 4.F 5.1

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主語を決める Lesson 1 1 日本語に合うように,( )に適切な語を入れなさい。 1. 君の笑顔はすてきだ。 (広島国際大 *) )( have. 2. 日本の天然資源は豊かでない。 ( Japan 3. 先日、私のコンピューターはどこか具合が悪くなった。 (成蹊大*) (Something) ( went :) ( wrong ) with my computer the other day. 4. 夏休みが始まるまでにまだ1週間あります。(摂南大*) is ) still ( There ( )( week 66 ) a nice (smile (西南学院大 * ) ). 形 ) ( is )( not i) rich in natural resources. ) to go before the summer vacation begins. 2 日本語に合うように,( )に適切な語を入れなさい。 1. カナダでは何語が話されていますか。(中部大*) What language ( ) ( is 2. 今年はいつもよりずっと雨が多い。 (愛知学泉大*) (We )( have :) ( had 3. 昨日から食欲がなくなってしまったんです。(関西学院大 *) I )( have )((ost 4. 中間テストのできは良くなかったね。 (順天堂大 *) (You ) didn't ( do ) ( well ) on the mid-term exams. 5. この道をまっすぐ行くと, その銀行は右にあります。 (東京理科大 * ) Go straight down this street, you :)( will )( find )(spoken ) in Canada? ) more rain than usual this year. Jan appetite since yesterday. ) the bank on your right. 3 日本語に合うように, 下線部に適切な語句を補いなさい。 1. 「今, 雨が降っていますか。」 「はい, すごく降っていますよ。」 (三重県立看護大) Is it raining. now?" "Yeah. it is 2. 暗くなる前に必ず戻ってきなさい。(つくば国際大*) raining really hard." Be sure to come back before it gets dark. 3. あなたと最後に会ってからどれくらいたちますか。 ( 広島経済大 * ) How long has it been since I saw you last? 4. 外は寒いのでコートを着るようにメアリーが言ってくれました。 (龍谷大*) Mary said I should wear a coat as it was cold out. 5. いちばん近いコンビニエンスストアまでどのくらいの距離がありますか。 ( 足利工業大 *) How far is it to the nearest convenience store? 6. 我慢できない,もしくは不快感を表す場合, 「我慢できない」 と言う。(駒澤大 *) When you want to express impatience or annoyance, you say, ". I can't stand it."