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英検準1級のライティングです。 どなたでも構いません。添削をお願いしたいです!何を書いているか分からなければ、聞いてもらって全然大丈夫です。ていうか、読んだだけでは、全く理解できないと思います。 近日中に受けるので、明日の夕方頃までにお願いします🙏

Write an essay on the given TOPIC. Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer. Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion Suggested length: 120-150 words TOPIC Do you think that gas-powered cars will be replaced by electric cars in the near future? 電時の排出 POINTS 走行エネルギーの asse). Environment Convenience #1124-Kat #veg Cost Industry 高速産 ・充電せった コストが高い 産業限られた 短いきが しが ・使用者が買いかえようとは 思わない 2:33. 1 充電スペースの 2015 3. cars will be replaced by electric cars I do not think that gas-powered opinion. in the near future, I have two reasons to support this One reason is that it may be not convenient for people to drive electric cars in these days society. For example, electric cars take more time to charge than gas-powered cars. Moreover, electric cars can run few distance. Onother reason is that electric cars cost a lot of money in the many situation. For example, people who use electric, cars usually sex charging places at the each houses, but they have to pay so much cash to do it, Also, they need to prepare too much money every month to charge electric Propte cash, For these reasons above, I believe that gas-powered cars will be replaced by electric cars in the near future. total: 179 words

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English Junior High

③はat first になるんですけどどうやってとけばいいんでしょうか?なにか方法があれば教えて欲しいです

結化(Yuka), リリ 九里(M. Greenの英語の授業で発表を行いました。 発表を聞いたクリー ン先生は, 結花さんの発表についてコメントを書きました。 【 結花さんの発表】 【グリーン先生のコメント を読んで,後の1から8までの各問いに答えなさい。 sog vin 【結花さんの発表】 He Many people in Shiga have worked as volunteers. My grandfather is one of them. worked as a junior high school math teacher for many years and retired five years ago. He has worked as a volunteer at the community center since then. Many children go there to play and study together after school and on weekends. He helps them ( 1 ) every day. He always says that working for other people makes him happy. His words made me interested in volunteer work. bon OR I became a high school student and wanted to try something new. So I did volunteer work at the community center this summer. Now, I will talk about my experiences. I hope my speech will give you a chance to think about volunteer work. During summer vacation, I visited the community center. The community center 【used / many /is/ people/byl living in my city. And the volunteers do a variety of work. My first volunteer work was to take care of elderly people. I played some games and talked with them in the morning. Mr. Sato, one of the elderly men, said to me, "I had a good time today. I live alone and don't have so many chances to talk to other people, especially to young people like you. So I enjoyed talking with you." I was happy to hear that. In the afternoon, I saw a little foreign girl in the playroom. She was drawing a picture alone. ), I hesitated to talk to her because of my English. Then I remembered Mr. Sato's words. So I went to the girl and said, "Hi, I'm Yuka. You are good at drawing pictures. [4]" She smiled and showed me her picture. Then she said, "I will give this picture to my Japanese friend for her birthday. I want to write 'Happy Birthday!' in Japanese on the picture. Can you teach me how to write it?" I was glad to hear that. I taught her how to write it in hiragana. She practiced many times and looked very happy when she saw the picture after she finally finished 5[write] her message in Japanese. Then she said to me, "Thank you for helping me!" Her big smile made me very happy. These experiences reminded me of my grandfather's words. Before doing volunteer work, I thought that helping other people was to make them happy. However, I realized that helping other people made me happy,) too. So we can [ 6 ]. Now I'm looking forward to doing volunteer work again during spring vacation. Thank you for listening. (注) volunteer(s): ボランティアをする人 retire: 退職する community center: E play : 遊ぶ hesitate : ためらう chance : playroom: 【グリーン先生のコメント】 Your speech was great. I'm glad that you learned an important thing. I do volunteer work, too. I visit the city library every Saturday. I help foreign people there. Some foreign people don't understand Japanese. So I help them borrow books. Do you like to read books? The staff members are looking for someone who can read books to children. If you are interested, why don't we visit it together this Saturday?

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