とても拙い英文で申し訳ないのですが、ピンクの斜め線の部分はどう直したら良くなるでしょうか？ タイトルは　rush hourの交通渋滞をどう減らすか　というものです 2枚目が模範解答です お願いします🙇‍♀️

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英作文の添削をお願いします。😌

[4] Read the instructions and write a well-organized answer in English. (50 points) Virtual reality (VR)* refers to a high-quality simulation of reality created by a computer. Probably the most famous use for VR so far is gaming. But VR has also been used to improve society in various fields such as education, medicine, and engineering. Describe a single specific way that virtual reality can be used to improve society. Explain your idea in detail in about 100 English words. Notes: Virtual reality (VR)*: VR systems use special glasses that completely cover the user's eyes. These glasses show a very realistic picture of a world created by the computer. In addition, the systems can tell when the user moves their head, arms, and sometimes other body parts. So users can control the action by natural movement. Some systems even let users feel like they are touching things. Thus, VR systems can make users feel like they are really in another world. 〔答案〕 I suggest you to simulation with VR. For example, doctors can practice operation. I have the three reasons. First, VR's display is very real. So doctors can do as if real simulation. Second, every one can make simulation software. If you want add patients information to VR and study how to make software, you can make VR software to yourself. Third, medical professors can use VR simulation in lecture. If they do this, Students who want be surgeon in the future will reduce about operation's anxiety. In this way, VR have a lot of possibilities that useful of medical field. For these reasons, I suggest VR simulations.

至急お願いいたします🚨 生物の質問です。 ミトコンドリアの経路についての説明だと思うのですが、電子オーバーフローモデルと電子分布モデルの違いを教えていただきたいです。 また、どういう仕組みなのか、何故このように電子が流れるのかも教えていただきたいです。 UQ poolはユ... Read More

(A) Electron overflow model (considered out-of-date) Alt UQ pool Alternative oxidase inactive. Alt No alternative pathway activity Cytochrome pathway unsaturated Cyt (B) Electron distribution model (reflects current thinking) UQ pool Cyt Alternative pathway active Cytochrome pathway saturated Alt Alternative oxidase active Alt UQ pool Cyt Cyt Figure 14.33 Two models for regulation of electron flow through the alternative oxidase. (A) In the electron overflow model, no appreciable electron transfer through the alternative pathway takes place until electron flow through the cytochrome pathway is at or near satu- ration. This could result from the effects of respirato- ry control, if the rate of mitochondrial ATP produc- tion exceeds its rate of utilization in the cytosol, or from some externally imposed stress, such as low temperature. Under such circumstances, the UQ pool becomes sufficiently reduced to allow electrons to flow through the alternative oxidase, the latter re- quiring that the UQ pool be 40% to 60% reduced to attain significant activity. (B) In the electron distribu- tion model, the alternative and cytochrome path- ways both show significant activity at low levels of UQ pool reduction, and electrons are distributed be- tween the two pathways on the basis of the relative activities of each pathway. The activity of the alter- native oxidase under these circumstances is thought to be regulated by the action of a-keto acids and by reduction/oxidation of the intermolecular disulfide bond, as well as by additional regulatory mecha- nisms not yet characterized.

わからない問題をなくすといいと思う を英語で簡単に書いて欲しいです！

ambibalenceは不可算名詞ですか？

(2)の訳は 「そのことについて考えれば考えるほどストレスには私たちにとって何かが価値があるように思われた」 なのですが、訳を書く時に「そのこと」と書くのは違和感があります。aboutの後ろのitはit=stressですよね？ だとしたら「ストレスについて...」と書いても... Read More

次の英文を読んで, 設問に答えなさい。 25 min. 454 words 2 25分ぐ終了 ( Listening to a gardening program the other day, I was struck by something the /S-70₂ expert said about a particular type of potted plant. Do not water it once it has *come into bud, he advised. Cause it to feel stress, and it will produce more, and more beautiful, flowers. 52 Surely this advice is against everything that we are told by doctors. Stress is bad for us, they say. Stress is the cause of all sorts of diseases. Stress caused by overwork sometimes results in early death. Newspaper and magazine articles tell us how to reduce stress, or how to avoid it altogether. No one has a good word for stress. 10 3 And yet, I asked myself, if stress is good for plants, can there possibly be any value for us in it? The longer I thought about it, the more it seemed to me that there is. Without a certain degree of tension and stress, we are apt to become lazy and neglect our duties. All students know that they should study regularly throughout the year, and then be able to face examinations without fear. In fact, 15 most students leave this study till the last possible moment, and then hastily try to ( 3 ) lost time. Many of us, likewise, put off dealing with our problems until the deadline approaches. Every year I resolve that I will write all my Christmas cards and letters ahead of time, and avoid a last-minute rush; and every year I find that 20 once again I have left it too late for me to finish comfortably. Only when the tension increases [working seriously / the job / do / to get/I/done / start]. (4) In other fields too, when satisfaction enters in, creativity and curiosity go out of the window. What has been called "divine discontent" - a creative dissatisfaction (5) with the present situation, whatever it is produces progress. And that 25 dissatisfaction is one type of stress. 6Thus, it seemed to me, a certain degree of stress is necessary for human progress. Just how much is good, and how much is harmful, is the problem. Those of us who are employed by a company/whose policies demand long periods of stressful activity/are to be sympathized with, since too much stress is activity/are

英検2級のライティングの添削をお願いします🙏 内容、構成、語彙、文法が各4点で16点満点です。 写真は解答にのってたものです。 (TOPIC) Today, many buildings collect rainwater and then use it in variou... Read More

4 I think such buildings will become more common in the future. First, by making use of rainwater, a building owner can reduce the cost of water used from the water supply. For example, rainwater can be used for washing cars and for growing plants in gardens. Second, collecting rainwater can be useful in times of disaster. Due to damage to water pipes, supplies of water are sometimes limited. In such cases, rainwater will help until normal conditions return. Therefore, I think buildings that collect rainwater will become more common in the future. (*上記はあくまでも解答例です。)

英作について！ what is important to reduce electrictyuse?って聞かれてこの答え合ってますか？また、文法的にも！！

I should to reduce electricity use .This is because electricity needs in our life .If electric was not in our life, our life is very difficult. So, I should to reduce electricity.

この文で最後の方をby getting some exercise, listening to music, stay in nature and so on.としたのですが、不自然なところはありますか？ 教えて欲しいです。

Disk1 例題 5 現代の生活では、 だれでもストレスがたまりや ドラック14 すい。適度な運動をするとか、音楽を聴くとか、 自然の中で過 ごすなどして、ストレスを解消する方がよいでしょう。 [熊本県立大学]

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図書館に行くにはバスに乗る必要がある。 to take a bus To go to to library needs to We need to take a bus to go to the library Hints 1. 「~を説明する」 explain 2. 「許可なしに」 without permission 3. 「ごみの量」 the amount of garbage 「~を減らす」 reduce