英検準1級のライティングの添削をお願いします。 前回のライティングテストでは、構成が1点でした。そして内容 構成 語い 文法のうち1つも満点がありませんでした。 Topic: Should the facilities at train and bus stations i... Read More

英検準1級のライティングの添削をお願いします。 前回のライティングテストでは、構成が1点でした。そして内容 構成 語い 文法のうち1つも満点がありませんでした。 次のテストで高得点を取りたいので よろしくお願いします。

B Young people today than young people Awareness, Culture, Family, Lifestyle Points. I disagree Support Date are more likely to help others the past. in the with the idea. I have two reasons to my opinion. First of all, young people can't care other people. These days, many young people feels stressful about their relationships •Therefore, many of them think being alone is. Comfortable. This situation makes them to be difficult to take care of others ch In conclusion, Take care Second of all, they don't prefer to help someone. Recently, young people's mental' is wick because of they don't have enough confidence. As a result, they hestitate to communicate and chelp others many young people don't like to.. others and can't take care others.

英検準1級のライティングが毎回悪いです。 1回目 内容 3/4 、構成 1/4 、語い 3/4 、文法2/4 2回目 内容 1/4、構成1/4、語い3/4、文法3/4 こんな感じで毎回ライティングの点数が1番低いです。 2回で共通しているのは、構成が... Read More

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英検の英作文添削をお願いします。 1行5語に合わせたり、削ったりしているので、段落や空間等は気にせずに添削をして頂きたいです。

I don't think scare people's salaries should be based on their job performance. I have two reasons. In the first place, It should be changed from their performance to age. As they get older, many people will have their family, so they need a lot. of money. If their salavies base on age, they can live in peace. In the Second place, some people don't have the skills. For example, people who have disability may not have enough skills. If their salaries be based on r their age, they can't get enough money. Last of all I think people's salaries had better be based on their age. It has a lot of benefit than being based on their job performance. Mary people can live in peace

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28 問3 第10問 次の問い (問1~3) において、 それぞれ下の①~⑤の語句を並 に べかえて空所を補い、文を完成させよ。 ただし、 解答は [ 入るものの番号のみを答えよ。 標準解答時間 3分30秒 問1 Isaac Newton an apple fall from a tree. ① of gravitation ④ the law 問2 ② is said to ⑤ by chance A man can ① conceals what 3 he chooses ⑤ never be prevented svols asw sta 5 ① people ② few 3 6 2 4 3 seem to NOTE - 6 he thinks. ② from thinking whatever. ④ as long as he the book. 4 have ④ when he saw ③ have discovered ⑤ read SP

画像横になってすみません blow「息を吹きかける」、steaming「湯気の立った」はわかったのですが、間にあるこのacrossってなんですか！？ blow acrossで繋がってるのかなーって思ったのですが辞書引いても出てきませんでした😭 よろしくお願いします

3 <英文構造> Somewhere, millions of years ago, just after learn... 同格 e fire, the primitive human was faced with a difficult technological dilemma: how to cool his piping-hot food enough to be コロン以下で dilemma の内容を説明 疑問詞 + to 不定詞 「・・・するのに十分に｣ able to eat it. Surely he must have burned his tongue enough times. He would have to find 助動詞 + have done 過去の習慣を表す would a way of eating the hot stuff. Then he must have discovered that by putting his lips together 助動詞 have done discovered の目的語 and blowing across) a steaming bowl of mammoth stew, the food magically cooled). Why? He S hadn't a clue, but it worked. FOCUS 助動詞 PE he must have burned his tongue : 過去の経験や完了の意味を含む助動詞 must + have done 「･･･ したに違いない」 の形→ 「彼(=原 始人)は舌をやけどしたに違いない」。 (→重要構文 31 て考えてす 間 この死行前は何 he must have discovered that ~ the food magically cooled: inc must have discovered の目的語は that 節 (that cooled)。 that を代名詞の「それ」 と訳さないよ うに注意しよう。 that節の主語･述語は the food (magically) cooled ｢食べ物が (魔法のように) 冷 めた｣。 その前の by putting 〜は「・・･することによって」 を意味する前置詞 by + 動名詞の表現。 buman puc すべき ... enough to be : how to cool は疑問詞 + to 不定詞 「どのように~すべきか〜の l.2 how to cool 仕方」の表現。 「であるほど十分に」 を意味し cool を修飾。 ｢そ (→ 重要構文 10 enough to be Hold wasob 313860 れを食べられるくらい十分に冷ます」 となる。 → 重要構文 11 ivillization l.3 find a way of eating the hot stuff : 同格を表す of でつながっている→ 「….する方法」と訳す。 RENSE) Vocabulary Check NDOW 訳 どこかで、何百万年も前、火を使うことを覚えた直後、原始人は、ある困難な技術的なジレンマ [板挟み ] に直面していた。 すなわち, ものすごく熱い食べ物を食べることができるくらいに冷ます方法である。 彼 はきっと何回となく舌をやけどしたに違いない。 彼は熱い物を食べる方法を見つけなければならなかった。 そんなとき彼は、 唇をすぼめて湯気の立つマンモスのシチューの入ったお椀に息を吹きかけることで、食べ 物が魔法のように冷めることを発見したに違いない。なぜなのか。 彼にはまったく見当がつかなかったが, その方法はうまくいったのである。 vody tavsundw) snsig 「原始の、原始的な」 ■ primitive □technological 「技術的な｣ □ burn MG SRI 文重 「~をやけどする」 Vocabulary Plust ~ in svol orwalqoo1 somewhere 「どこかで」 ■ be faced with 「〜に直面している」 □ put ~ together 「~をあわせる」 「手がかり」 ■ clue

so asを使った用法が他にもあったら教えて欲しいです😭

by ship. 139 rich の後ろに来るものは? ave Tagsqewens bear 本問では形容詞 rich の後ろに enough to do を続ける。 ... enough to do so... that SV 140 so kind の so に注目 so ... as to do 「~するほど･･･」 = ... enough to do *so kind の so に注目。 ｢･･･してくれるほど親切だ」とすれば文意が通るので, so kind as to do となる①が正解。 (so as to do〉と〈... enough to do> は表す意味が同じ。 ≒ The girl was kind enough to take me to the station. = The girl was so kind that she took me to the station.OMASIFET bBA B of Voved) HA Section 049 目的を表す不定詞の慣用表現 by to do EE to do 「・・・ するために」 Fleld 1文法 Field 語法 Field

(6)でなぜ完了不定詞になるのか教えて頂きたいです。 問題文の方で、校長先生だと言われていた時と校長先生だった時は、同じ時制ではないのですか？

EXERCISES 1 次の各文を、 それぞれ [ ]内の語で始まる文に書きかえなさい。 1) For children to swim in this river is dangerous." [It] 2) This town is pleasant to live in. [It] 3) You're nice to remember my birthday. [It] 4) The teacher advised Yumi not to waste her time." [Yumi] 5) We saw Mike get on the train at Kyoto Station." [Mike] 6) It is said that Ms. Suzuki was principal* of this school. [Ms. Suzuki] 7) It appeared that the boy had forgotten my name. [The boy] 8) It seems that there is little hope of her success. [There] 次の各文の誤りを正しなさい. 1) Please be careful to not touch the walls. 2) Lisa came all the way, only find Mike was out. 3) It was careless for her to make such a mistake.* 4) We listened Takeshi to play the piano.* 5) The professor made her student waits in the hall.* 5) The meeting is to hold in London next month. 7) I was enough lucky to find a nice apartment. LALALAL 次の各組の文がほぼ同じ意味を表すように, 第2文を完成させなさい. Would you tell me the way to City Hall? ) Would you tell me ( ) ( ) ( ) to City Hall? Ann wondered whether she should see him or phone. Ann wondered whether ( ) ( ) him or phone. have some books that you should read. I have some books ( ) ( ) ( ) ( ). I'm free this afternoon. I have () ( ) do this afternoon. told her that she should be more independent.* told ( ) ( ) ( ) more independent. It happened that I met Koji at the cafeteria. I ( ) ( ) ( ) Koji at the cafeteria. 1) For children はどんな働きをしている 6) principal 4), 5) 受動態にする

英語 文法です 4、6行目のthatの用法を教えて欲しいですm(*_ _)m

新しい 9 The new focus on grit) is part of a larger scientific effort to study the personality traits 現実世界におけ達成度を最も正確によそうする個性を研究しようという。 OVER CE 長い間 / that best predict achievement in the real world.// While researchers have long focused / on 知能測定 measurements of intelligence / such as the IQ test / as deciding markers of future success, / ~ECT. these scientists point out / that most of the variation in individual achievement / has nothing to do with being smart. // Instead, /it largely depends on 2 personality traits / such as grit and honesty. It's not that intelligence isn't really important / Newton was clearly a genius / 決して十分ではない but that having a high IQ/is 3 not nearly enough. //

答えがないので正誤判定お願いしたいです。ちなみに、オレンジで囲ってるのが私の回答です。 最後（11）丸をし忘れましたが答えは2番にしました。 それとオレンジで囲ってみにくくなった英単語などは隣または近くに書きましたが，わからないとこあれば指摘ください。

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