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名古屋大･文系 English words in length (Indicate the number of words you have written at the end of your answer. Do not count punctuation such as compras or periods as words 1 200 donors and delivers blood products to those who need them. Figure A below By year the Japanese Red Cross Society collects blood from voluntary shows how the mambers of younger (between the ages 16 and 39) and older between the ages 40 and 69) blood donors have changed in Japan from 2000 to 2019, as well as how the number of all blood donors has changed for the nineteen-year period. Figure B shows the total amount of blood donated in Linear trend lines are shown in dotted lines. Japan from 2000 to 2019 7.000.000 6.000.000 5.000.000- 4.000.000 3.000.000 2.000.000 1.000.000 Figure A Age (1639 years) A Age (40-69 years) .... ● All donors B. 1999 2001 2003 2005 2007 2000 2011 2013 2015 2017 2019 Years Amount of blood donated (liters) 2.000.000 2.000.000 1,500,000- 1.000.000- 500,000- Figure B QUESTIONS 2023 17 04 1999 2001 2003 2005 2007 2009 2011 2013 2015 2017 2019 Years Adapted from: Ministry of Health, Labour and Welfare website https://www.mhlw.go.jp/stf/seisakunitsuite/bunya/0000063233.html Write three 1. Describe what the Figure A show. trend lines in approximately 30 to 50 words. (Indicate the number of words you have written at the end of your answer Do not count punctuation such as commas or periods as words.) 2. Describe the trend depicted in Figure B. and explain how the amount of blood donated per donor has changed since 2000 by referring to both (Indicate the Figures A and B. Write approximately 30 to 50 words. Do not number of words you have written at the end of your answer. count punctuation such as commas or periods as words.)

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次の英文を間接話法の文に書きかえなさい。 [総合] (1) David said to me, "Please forgive me for my rude behavior." David said that he pleas forgive (2) She said, "I don't know which color he will choose." (3) The man said, "I have two sons, and I'm proud of them." 1: ... bain woy ou 10\is is tqo, I don 150 dhidi O(1) ipal.

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there PB I agree. This is because if I don't go I don't have to ready to go out. And I can spend time for my free time.

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よく出る 4 次のinformation literacy skills (情報リテラシー: 自分が必要とする情報を見きわめて入手し、 活用する力)についての英文を読んで、あなたの考えを、〔条件〕と〔記入上の注意】 に従って40 語以上50語程度の英語で書きなさい｡ ( 10点) People need information literacy skills. Some people say that every elementary school student should start learning these skills at school. What do you think about this idea? [条件] 質問に対する自分の考えを、その理由が伝わるように書きなさい。 〔記入上の注意] ① 【記入例】にならって、 解答欄の下線 _ 符号(,.?! など)は語数に含めません。 50語を超える場合は、解答欄の破線 Hil America. in rarint egur Ⅰ am bro asilbond ne ② 英文の数は問いません。 ③ 【下書き欄】は、必要に応じて使ってかまいません。 yart san sustoig tigl 【記入例】 【下書き欄】 is I'm Where April is Ken's birthday, too. of noilasup の上に1語ずつ書きなさい。 l で示された行におさまるように書きなさい。」 A og so lot zo ei sil 10:8 Nancy. are 2. I'm you 2001. from from? It 50 405 50 8 NOW S 平成31年■ (41)

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(5) Read the instructions and write your answer in English. (30 points) The graph below shows changes in the number of global UFO sightings recorded from 1990 to 2020: 10,000 8,000 ¥6,000 ¥4,000 2,000円 319 1990 92 2000 98 20 8 sqmod 2010 08 21 28,736 2022 九州大学 7,26778 RONTASSENPI obolksad & eworle rar sig i Isra berl A vasqmo IngA al bagasi ni birb bodas yragmo? 91 im bnooo; basie & neqigo er bris 2020 18 Itsed) * 10-0750 Using about 75 English words, describe the trends in UFO sightings between 1990 and 2020. OS ovods ar A yoqme to sisde todemon esgs 06-01 mi s38 odwongan alam si ei stunts oig airls to neg regned on. Note: Words that express a number, such as 319 or 1990, are counted as one JI6q legisl eggs 02-06 i alem the word. m 2510 M

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小学校でオンライン授業を実施すべきか、対面授業を実施すべきか。 I think that elementary schools had better face-to-face classes. than reasons. First face to face classes give to talk with others This opportunities leads to make communication ability friends and learns It important for dementary students to know that there people who have thinking different from me through Conversation face to face classes -taking online lessons at home should continue to to Second students need to + give Go online lessons for Date hold for the following chances outside to are face-to-four lessons a fo to it is better for their health than go Therefore, elementary schools before.

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2 〈不定詞 動名詞〉 (ア) A : Isaw your brother in the park last Sunday. B: (イ) A: B: (ウ) A: B : (エ) A : Oh, did you? He went (1. to 2. taking 3. of 4. there 5. take 6. pictures) flowers. I hear your dream is to be an actor. That's right. But my (1. is 2. to 3. wants 4. be 5. father 6. me) a teacher. Do you have any plans for tomorrow ? Yes. I'll join an event for children in the hospital. We (1. singing 2. are 3. to 4. sing 5. enjoy 6. going) with them. Do you think( 1. books 2. lot 3. are 4. reading 5. a 6. is) of fun ? B: Yes, I do. I like to read love stories. (オ) A: Please (1.watch 2. me 3. your 4. tell 5. see 6. let). I left my smartphone at home. B: All right. Here you are. (ア)3番目〔5〕5番目〔6〕 (1) 3番目〔3〕5番目〔4〕 (ウ)3番目〔3〕5番目〔4〕 (エ) 3番目〔 [] 5番目〔2〕 (オ) 3番目〔2〕 5番目〔 1〕 3 〈接続詞〉 (ア)A: I called you about 2:00 yesterday, but no one answered the phone. B: Sorry. I was (1. that 2. you 3. called 4. Bob 5. visiting 6. when) me. (イ) A: Do you have any plans for this weekend? B: Yes. I'm going to play baseball with my friends (1. on 2. sunny 3. is 4. if 5. will 6. it) Sunday. (ウ) A: What's your dream, Masami ? B: I want to be a (1. like 2. because 3. teacher 4. I 5. music 6. but) singing and playing the piano. エ) A: I'm sorry, I can't go shopping with you today. I have a headache. B: That's too bad. Lisa, (1. you 2. hope 3. after 4. will 5. that 6. I) be fine soon. (イ) 3番目〔5〕5番目〔1 (ｴ) 3番目〔4〕 5番目〔5〕 (ア) 3番目〔6 〕5番目〔3〕 (ウ) 3番目〔2〕 5番目 [ ] 〈文型〉 ■ A: Keiko, I heard you took many pictures in Okinawa. Can (1. to 2. I 3. them_4.me 5. show 6. you) ? B: Sure. A: You have a sister, right ? B: Yes. Her name is Akiko, (1. her 2. I 3. calling 4. Akko-chan 5. but 6. call). A: I want to give a birthday present to my mother. B: Great! A : Hi, Dad. B: All right. I'm sure (1. makes 2. will 3. it 4. her 5. make 6. happy). Mom hasn't come back from work yet. I'm hungry. Jim, (1. to 2. you 3. make 4. something 5. I'll 6. for ) eat. (イ) 3番目〔 3 (ア) 3番目〔 (ウ) 3番目〔 〕5番目〔4〕 [] 5番目〔6〕 (エ) 3番目〔6〕 - 22 — 5番目〔4〕 5番目〔 〕 1

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g 3), of d to sinion. nerican ments. ing and writing, orms than 九州大理系前期 〔4〕 次の英文の説明と指示に従い,英語の文章を書きなさい。(30点) Lew Most Japanese high school students have to choose their course of study either from humanities ("bunkei") or science ("rikei") in the middle of their high school education. One of the reasons is to help students prepare for university entrance examinations and reduce their burden of subjects studied. At the same time, this narrows the range of choices for their future careers at Chebet a very early stage. Write your opinion on this current practice in a well-organized paragraph. It should be approximately 100 English words long, including specific reasons to support your argument. 〔5〕 次の文章の下線部(1), (2)を英語に訳しなさい。 ( 27点) 2020年度 英語 15 Okue 250 (E) 220 インターネットと検索エンジンのおかげで,あるトピックに関してどんな論文 がすでに発表されているのかを調べるのは、格段に簡単になった。 そこで何を 始めるにもまずは既存研究を調べましょう, となるのだが、下手をするとすぐに 「こんなにたくさんの研究がされている。 自分たちに出る幕などありません」 とい あんたん う暗澹たる気分になってしまう。 (1) 研究で楽しいのはなんと言っても問題について自分で考え、解決に向けて自分 で試行錯誤する時間, そして何かが解決できた瞬間である。 そこで,あまり真面 目に既存研究調査などせずにそれを始めた場合どうなるか? おそらく多くの場 合、苦労をして考えついたアイデアや作り上げたソフトウェアに似た先行研究が あるということを後から思い知ることになるのだろう。だがそれは、無駄な時間 だったのだろうか? (2) 一人の人間が情報を消費することに一生を費やしても、決して吸収しきれない 情報があふれている。 徹底調査をし、ひたすら再発明をしないことに向けて最適 化すべきなのか, それとも, 再発明の危険があってもまずは自分で脳を全開にす ること,それ自身を目的関数にしてよいのか? 真面目に考えてもよい時になって いる気がする。 田浦健次朗 「車輪の再発明と研究者の幸せ」

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TOPIC Some people say that Japan should use the Internet for people to vote in elections. Do you agree with this opinion? POINTS Convenience Cost Security