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とても拙い英文で申し訳ないのですが、ピンクの斜め線の部分はどう直したら良くなるでしょうか？ タイトルは　rush hourの交通渋滞をどう減らすか　というものです 2枚目が模範解答です お願いします🙇‍♀️

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I believe that destruction of nature is really bad for us. I have two reasons which support my opinion. First reason is that we can't save animals. Actually, animals which have lived in damaged. forest, lost their house. Second reason is that it give some effect for us. For example, global warming, sea level raise and so on. For these reasons, we should take plans to conserve nature. I think i we have something to do. For example, not to waste water, and not to waste foods. These are very good way to keep living on the earth..

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[4] Read the instructions and write a well-organized answer in English. (50 points) Virtual reality (VR)* refers to a high-quality simulation of reality created by a computer. Probably the most famous use for VR so far is gaming. But VR has also been used to improve society in various fields such as education, medicine, and engineering. Describe a single specific way that virtual reality can be used to improve society. Explain your idea in detail in about 100 English words. Notes: Virtual reality (VR)*: VR systems use special glasses that completely cover the user's eyes. These glasses show a very realistic picture of a world created by the computer. In addition, the systems can tell when the user moves their head, arms, and sometimes other body parts. So users can control the action by natural movement. Some systems even let users feel like they are touching things. Thus, VR systems can make users feel like they are really in another world. 〔答案〕 I suggest you to simulation with VR. For example, doctors can practice operation. I have the three reasons. First, VR's display is very real. So doctors can do as if real simulation. Second, every one can make simulation software. If you want add patients information to VR and study how to make software, you can make VR software to yourself. Third, medical professors can use VR simulation in lecture. If they do this, Students who want be surgeon in the future will reduce about operation's anxiety. In this way, VR have a lot of possibilities that useful of medical field. For these reasons, I suggest VR simulations.

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(10) K2 is the second (higher/ highest) mountain in the world. (11) He is a (far / very) better cook than he was two years ago. Eto Janow hoorbal 2 例にならって下線部の誤りを訂正し、文全体を書き直しましょう。

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recently ris(o)ntli/ less (les! survey (sárver/ happiness /hæpinas/ occur /əká:r/ recent /ri:s(ə)nt/ stress (strés/ devote (divout/ communicate /kəmjú:nikeit/ anytime /énitàrm/ conduct (ed) /kəndákt(id)/ percentage /parséntid3/ My mother recently said to me, "In my high school days, I was happier than you are." Are today's students I will introduce a less happy than their parents were? survey about happiness among high school students in Japan. Look at Figure 1. In 1982, only 24% of high school students felt "very happy." By 2012, however, the figure had increased to 42%. How did such a big change occur? There are several reasons. First, recent students have less stress at school. Second, many of them devote Also, they can themselves to sports and music. communicate with their friends anytime through social media. I conducted a survey in my school. Look at Figure 2. The percentage is still high. How about the situation in other countries? them はだれを指しますか ● 10. stress を英語らしく発音しよう。

行きたい国についての英文です‼️ おかしい文法やこうした方がいいなどアドバイスがありましたら教えていただきたいです🥺 I want to go to Italy.I have two reasons. 私はイタリアに行きたいです。理由は2つあります。 First,Ther... Read More

5(3)について質問です。 No other thing is as hard as diamond. と書いたのですが、これは○でもいいのでしょうか。

-) ) 2.「…すればするほど､ますます」 V' .... the + 比較級+S+V~〉のS+V が省略されて The sooner, the better. 「早ければ早いほど良い」 となる 3. 「週1日、その年の中で最も...な」 <the + 最上級 + 名 詞 + of the week [day. year])。 4. far 「遠く、さらに」 は2種類の比較級・最上級を持つ。 距離を表す場合は far-farther-farthest, 程度を表す場合は far-further-furthest となる。 副詞の最上級では the は付 けても付けなくてもよい。 5. ｢~した中で最も・･･な｣ <the + 最上級+名詞+関係詞節〉。 5英作力を磨く 1. Which country has the third largest population? 2. This is one of the best robots ever made. 3. Nothing is as hard as [harder than] diamond./ Diamond is harder than anything else./ Diamond is the hardest (of all). 解説 1. ｢この国は人口が多い」 This country has a large population. この文の下線部を the third largest に 変えて, 疑問詞 which を使った疑問文にする。 3. 原級 比較級を使って最上級の意味を表すことができる。 6 入試問題に Try 1. ⓘclean 3. ④ the second most 2.③ by far 解説 1. 「日本ほど清潔な国はない。」 〈No other+B (単 数名詞)... as +原級 + as A〉の形。 2. 「ニューヨークはずば抜けて大きい都市だが､ アメリカ のいくつかのほかの市もかなり大きい｡」 最上級を強調す る場合, by far または much を使う。 「「ヘビーローテーション』 は2010年の日本のヒットチ ャートで2番目に人気があった歌だ｡」 41 3. 金曜日は週の中であなたが最も忙しい日ですか。 4. Who throws a ball the players ? 5. それは,これまでに経験した中で最もつらい出来事だった。 Is Friday of the week for you? その選手たちの中で誰がいちばん遠くまでボールを投げますか。 XA It was the 5 英作力を磨く 1. どの国の人口が3番目に多いのですか。 /3. 次の日本語を英語に直しなさい｡ [総合] 2. これは,これまでに作られた中で最も良いロボットの1つです。 X = ダイヤモンドほど硬いものはない。 Hints 1. 「~の人口が多い」 ~ has a large population 6 入試問題にTry ( 1. No other country in the world is as ( 2 cleaner ① clean 2. Although New York is ( quite large. ① a lot 3. "Heavy Rotation" was ( ① second more ever experienced. に入る最も適切な語句を①~④から選びなさい。 総合 ) as Japan. 3 more clean (2 as much 2. ｢これまでに作られた~」 ~ ever made (愛知工業大 (4) cleanest ) the largest city, several other cities in the U.S.A. are a (近畿 ③ by far (4) far more ) popular song on the hit charts in 2010 in Japan. (東京 4 the second most ③ second most ② the second more

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I think that Online education has two advantages. First, Online education can study at home. For example, Student who can't learn at school by sick, he can learn on online as who goes to school. Second, Online education can use chatroom. In this place students can question to their teacher at home. Also, Students can teaching each other. But Online education has two disadvantages, First, A digital divide problem. We can't online education without digital devices. Students who can't buy a computer because they don't have money can't learn online. Second, Online education will be sometimes but connection.