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6 あなたは,英語の授業で、なりたい職業について発表することになり、次のメモを作成しました。メ 2 「モをもとに,原稿を完成させなさい。 原稿の ① な英語を書きなさい。 また, 3 には,それぞれメモに即して,適切 には, 【あなたのなりたい職業とその理由】 を,次の 《注意》 に従っ て英語で書きなさい。 《注意》 10語以上20語以内で書くこと。 文の数は問わないが, 短縮形(I'm やdon'tなど)は1語と数え,符号(, や, など)は語数に含めないこと。 ・次の <メモ> (導 Buhus <原稿> それについて書くこと。 内から職業を1つ選んで, 宇宙飛行士 astronaut 記者 reporter 看護師 nurse サッカー選手 soccer player 料理人 cook ● dgift sds 入) この前の日曜日, 家族と夕食を食べていたとき、父に 「将来何になりたいか。」と聞 かれた。 (なりたい職業) 通訳 interpreter 音楽家 musician M 以前は科学が好きで、家には科学についての本がたくさんあったので, 科学者にな りたいと思っていた。 sew Bomit loods'd ・しかし, 先月インターネットである記事を読んだとき, 新しい夢の職業を見つけた。 【あなたのなりたい職業とその理由】 odstaatiotat # 2 milion (まとめ)みんなは将来どんな仕事をしたいのか教えてほしい。 want to be in the future?" 写真家 photographer with my family last Sunday, my father asked me, "What do you I liked science before, and there were 2 so I wanted to be a scientist. However, last month, I read an article on the internet and found my new dream job. Now I want to be 3 What kind of job do you want to have in the future? Tell me about it. (注) internet = Internet

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名古屋大･文系 English words in length (Indicate the number of words you have written at the end of your answer. Do not count punctuation such as compras or periods as words 1 200 donors and delivers blood products to those who need them. Figure A below By year the Japanese Red Cross Society collects blood from voluntary shows how the mambers of younger (between the ages 16 and 39) and older between the ages 40 and 69) blood donors have changed in Japan from 2000 to 2019, as well as how the number of all blood donors has changed for the nineteen-year period. Figure B shows the total amount of blood donated in Linear trend lines are shown in dotted lines. Japan from 2000 to 2019 7.000.000 6.000.000 5.000.000- 4.000.000 3.000.000 2.000.000 1.000.000 Figure A Age (1639 years) A Age (40-69 years) .... ● All donors B. 1999 2001 2003 2005 2007 2000 2011 2013 2015 2017 2019 Years Amount of blood donated (liters) 2.000.000 2.000.000 1,500,000- 1.000.000- 500,000- Figure B QUESTIONS 2023 17 04 1999 2001 2003 2005 2007 2009 2011 2013 2015 2017 2019 Years Adapted from: Ministry of Health, Labour and Welfare website https://www.mhlw.go.jp/stf/seisakunitsuite/bunya/0000063233.html Write three 1. Describe what the Figure A show. trend lines in approximately 30 to 50 words. (Indicate the number of words you have written at the end of your answer Do not count punctuation such as commas or periods as words.) 2. Describe the trend depicted in Figure B. and explain how the amount of blood donated per donor has changed since 2000 by referring to both (Indicate the Figures A and B. Write approximately 30 to 50 words. Do not number of words you have written at the end of your answer. count punctuation such as commas or periods as words.)

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[4] Read the instructions and write a well-organized answer in English. (50 points) Partly due to the recent spread of the new coronavirus, some museums, especially small and medium-sized facilities, have been forced to close their doors or restrict admission to their facilities. A survey conducted by the Japan Association of Museums in 2021 revealed the severe business conditions of museums nationwide. ETTU However, museum education* has a lot to offer to the public at large Describe a no single specific thing the museums can offer to the public that contributes to the improvement of their lives. Explain your idea in detail in about 100 English words. onu boycloeb ton as ilsati matave, Notes: 8) esw gnidt slodw add o2 Jom erw zbioresuit lensi nist:95 museum education*: Museum education program means utilizing the resources donese noise aeder moT of the art, science, or history museums, aquariums or bide cobrol ni board nou zoos for formal or informal learning opportunities for the gaibaste pidot robsond sal citizens. bai de noqo ad bluoda inomaisvos d Tom & al 9tedt siqabg sdi 6 nobennoint vom shivong has anoisiluznos }

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4. コンビニで、たまたま英字新聞が目についたので、友達といっしょに買ってみた。 Thursday, December 12, 2019 EIGO LAB TIMES それ (この壁画) は創作的な物語の痕跡を表している The World's Oldest "Story" Was Found in Indonesia 物語を伝えること (口承文学 ) In 2017,/a *cave painting was found/in *Indonesia.// こんせき ate : mystery : 謎 注 cave: 洞窟 Indonesia : インドネシア record: 記録 sign: 痕跡 create: 創り出す intelligent 知性のある unknown: 解明されていない figure out : 解明する (2) 記事の The research team says/that it is the earliest known *record of “storytelling." vligh y 知られている最古の記録 Cave paintings are find/in many parts of the world,/ and many of them tell us/about ancient human life.// But this painting is different/ it shows *signs of creative stories.//Surprisingly,/ancient humans enjoyed *creating and tell stories/almost 44,000 years ago.// This *implies/they were highly *intelligent./ Much about ancient times is still *unknown./The team's effort/to *figure out the *mysteries of the cave この洞窟の壁画の謎を painting/continue.// [99 words ] 解明するための研究チームの努力 要点をつかむ (1) この壁画は,どんなことが他の壁画とちがっていると書かれていますか。 ア インドネシアで発見されたこと 古代の人々の生活が描かれていること ウ物語が描かれていること 詳細をおさえる Edition 055 の語をそれぞれ適する形に変えなさい。 found te telling continue → find When and where was this cave painting found? (7) It was found in 2017 in Indonesia. imply: 意味する brid ledW ウ continues.

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次の英文を間接話法の文に書きかえなさい。 [総合] (1) David said to me, "Please forgive me for my rude behavior." David said that he pleas forgive (2) She said, "I don't know which color he will choose." (3) The man said, "I have two sons, and I'm proud of them." 1: ... bain woy ou 10\is is tqo, I don 150 dhidi O(1) ipal.

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年度 英語 15 [II] Write (VI) opinions. Write your answer in about 100 English words, not counting punctuation marks. Mr. John Spence's opinion on e-bikes My electric bike is one year old on Thursday, and it was a 75th birthday present. I have only ever been a casual cyclist, but had given my old bike away, as my creaky knees combined with living at the top of a hill-meant that I rarely used it. But with my e-bike I feel so empowered. It is so easy to get around to do a few errands that it often seems quicker than using a car and having to find parking. If anyone is tempted by the idea, I strongly recommend giving it a try. Ms. Liz Ormond's opinion on e-bikes Mr. Spence's enthusiastic praise for e-bikes omits any reference to pedestrians. There is no mention that they are more dangerous than other bikes. Can he tell us what 19 OC DE BESLOT ACAI BESI TE OF 0.8. safety studies have been done in relation to pedestrians, particularly in shared space, and what discussions have been held with organisations such as the Royal National Institute of Blind People? Also, since the motors are effective enough to propel bikes loaded with shopping and children, what effect would the additional weight have in a collision with a pedestrian? (Adapted from "Wheels of fortune: the pros and cons of e-bikes," The Guardian, May 19,2020)

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IV. (1) から (5) の各問いにおいて, 1.~6. の語句を並べ替えて空所を補い, 最も適当な英文 を完成させなさい。 解答は解答用紙2枚目 (記述式) の所定の解答欄に, (A)と (B)に入る語句の番号を記入すること｡ (1) I like English because I feel like a different person when I am speaking it. Although it is difficult to speak well, I enjoy the challenge. Someday I hope ( ) (A) ( ) ( ) (B) ( ) in English. 1. even dream 5. the level 1. young people 2. acquire 5. provide (2) Volunteering is a good thing because it teaches young adults valuable lessons about life. For one, it teaches them that charity is an investment. By helping others you also help yourself. Volunteering can also ( ) ( A ) ( ) ( ) ( B ) ) practical experience. 1. health 5. to 2. where 6. I can. 1. lacking 5. found of what roles physical activity, exercise and nutrition play. neither prevent nor manage disease. 6. an opportunity (3) There are at least four kinds of education people should get when they are young: physical education, moral education, intellectual education and nutrition education. Those ( ) (A) ( ) ( ) ( B ) ( ) have an understanding Without them we can Q wear 5. we 3. reach 2. in 6. interested 3. with 2. and 6. more (4) E-mail and other SNS applications are now the primary means of communication in much of the world. While this is certainly one form of socialization, it seems to be replacing social interaction in person. As a result, more ( ) ( A ) ( ) ( ) ( B ) ( ) in the social skills and values that are essential to their integration into a group or community. 2 clothes 6. to 4. to 3. need 4. to 3. are (5) Presumably fashion reflects our personalities. The ( ) ( A ) ( :) ( ^_-) (B) ( ) who and what we are. Many people wear clothes to try and fit in, some to impress others, and some just wear the clothes they own. Your clothing is a reflection of who you are one way or another. 3. like 4. mental or physical 4. people 4. show Basic Elements for Communication (t, 2019 4), 7, 35, 59, 71, 87 ( 改変)