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4 次の Learning foreign languages についての英文を読んで, あなたの考えを, [条件]と [記入上の 注意]に従って40 語以上50語程度の英語で書きなさい。*印のついている語句には, 本文のあとに [注)があります。 (10点) pole icol You have studied English for three years or more. The only foreign language most students in Japan study is English. But in many other countries, high school students learn more than one foreign language. For example, as a second foreign language, many high schoo! students in (Germany) learn French or Spanish, and many students in China learn French, Spanish or Japanese. Some people say that high school students in Japan should learn English and another foreign language. However, others say that they should *focus on studying only English. Which VOn doo! blnd idea do you agree with? 問 *9 【注) focus on~ ·~に集中させる bu no9ue coubg J [条件) 下線部の質問に対するあなたの考えを,その理由が伝わるように書きなさい。 [記入上の注意) の【記入例】にならって, 解答欄の下線 toomoe ape の上に1語ずつ書きなさい。 つot *符号(,.?!など)は語数に含めません。 * 50 語を超える場合は, 解答欄の破線 で示された行におさまるように書きなさい。

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English Junior High

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2次の文章は,カナタに帰国したJudy が Maki に送ったEメールの内容である。 Dear Maki, Thank you for your help during my stay in Japan. Do you remember that you took me to the Dream Festival ? I enjoyed it very much. I enjoyed learning about Japanese culture at the festival. I played the shamisen for the first time at the event "Try new things!" The sound of the shamisen was very new to me. It was a wonderful experience. I learned that it is very important for me to try new things.The shamisen was one new thing. In Canada, I have started to practice the shamisen. Ipractice it every day. e piu The other day, I went to a concert withmy sister, Amy. It was exciting ! Japanese *musical instruments, such as the shakuhachi, shamisen, and wadaiko, were played together with western musical instruments, such as drums and guitars. I was very surprised. When they were played together, music became more beautiful and powerful ! At the end of the concert, I was very happy to have a chance to play the shamisen witha special band on the stage ! That was a lot of fun. I found a new thing I wanted to do. I'm very glad about that. Have you started doing any new things? Ifyou have, tell me about them. I'm looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Judy [注) musical instrument 楽器 western 西洋の powerful 力強い sheのふセでけどれか。

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