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English Senior High

英検一級のライティングの添削をお願いしたいです。 Should the Japanese government encourage more immigration? というトピックで書きました。よろしくお願いします。

The Japanese government should encourage more immigration Problems such as lack of diversity, Japanese companies retreating from the world declining birth rate 39 there is a because market, and aging population with a can be solved by increasing immigration. Japan, although it is one of the advanced countries, lack of diversity. Except of big cities like Tokyo, there are only few foreigners. I think this is a set back to Japan while other countries are stepping foward by changing its own system, Japan is refusing to make a change to its old style, and I believe this is because Japan doesn't have abundant. perspectives. foreign countries to. By encouraging more immigration, they can provide many different views and stimulate Jahanese people. as of what does other countries. a image Japanese companies are retreating from the world market. Many Companies in Japan are producing overeng ineered expensive products that only targets Japanese customers and it is losing its power in other countries : If Japan accepts more immigrants Japanese companies. will be able to get detailed regire to their product and stay in the world market. Aging population and a declining birth rate is a huge problem in Japan right now. Because of it, companies are losing workers and young people will have to saffer with a lot of taxes in the future. Encouraging immigration can increase population and solve. these problems more By encouraging more immigrations, many problems that Japan is facing can be solved.

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English Junior High

リーディングの問題です。 色付き下線部の英文の訳し方がよくわかりません。 どのようにして,回答のようになるのか教えて下さい🙇‍♀️

3 Jill, Ellen, Bob, and Edward lived near a lake/They could go for a swim every day. A man named Mr. Black lived near the lake, too./Sometimes Mr. Black went swimming with the children. One day they asked him to go for a swim with them./Mr. Black said "We can't go for a swim. We may never swim in the lake again." "Why not?" asked Edward. "Because the lake is polluted," said Mr. Black. "There's a new sign at the lake. It says No Swimming, Polluted." "What is polluting the lake?" asked Jill. "Let's go down to the lake and look at it," said Mr. Black. (ア) Mr. Black and the children went to the lake on a sunny Sunday. They looked into the water. It wasn't clean/They walked around the lake and they saw why it wasn't clean. “Look at that *garbage in the water," said Jill. "That's what's polluting the lake.” Edward saw oil floating on the water./"That oil pollutes the water, too,” said Edward. "It comes from boats on the lake." "Come here," said Ellen. "Take a look at this. There are tires in the lake !" "Why would people throw tires into a lake ?" asked Bob. "They just don't stop to think," said Mr. Black. "But they are not the only ones who pollute the lake. The people who run that factory pollute the water, too." Bob looked at Mr. Black/"What can we do? How can we stop the pollution ? he asked. "Well, we must get help from other people. We can't do it alone," said Mr. Black. Mr. Black had a friend who worked for a newspaper company. He asked him to help. The next day the story about the pollution was reported in the newspaper. Many people read about the story. They talked of the pollution. They talked of ways to clean it up. people met at the lake./They came to clean it up./ They cleaned out the garbage. Then they cleaned out the tires./They set up big cans. Then they put signs on the cans. The signs read, "Put Your Garbage Here." /People who lived near the lake came to help./People who had boats came to help./And, people from the factory also One day (イ) came to help. They knew that it would take a long time to get the lake clean again. But they did not give up. They all hoped that someday the "No Swimming” sign would come down and the people could swim in the lake again. 注) 〒garbage=ごみ

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