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問2 次の英文は, たくみさんが冬休み明けに英語の授業で発表したものです。 これを読ん で、文中の呼びかけに対するあなたの考えを、あとの条件にしたがって30語程度の英 語で書きなさい。 ただし, Tm のような短縮形は1語として考え、符号(やなど) は (例)のように書き、語数に含めないこととします。 Japanese people send *New Year's cards to their family or friends living in other places. This has been a traditional Japanese custom for a long time. However, the One *reason is that many young number of New Year's cards is *decreasing now. people use their *smartphone to send their *greetings instead of sending cards. I think we should send more New Year's cards. Do you agree with my opinion ? (注) *New Year's cards 年賀状 *decreasing decrease 「減少する」 の現在分詞形 *reason 理由 * greetings あいさつ *smartphone スマートフォン (例)符号をつける場合の書き方 : ~ 条件 賛成の場合は“I agree with you.", 反対の場合は “I don't agree with you.” から書き 始め、いずれも語数に含めることとする。 ・主語動詞を含む文で書くこと。 自分の考えについて, その理由を説明すること｡ ・文中で述べられている例以外の内容とすること｡ boy vbart Tom to ROM Ai

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10 15 3 experimenting with music. Scientists in an English university are They want to know what music makes customers spend money. What they did was to play different kinds of background music in a restaurant. They watched carefully and recorded what happened. They found that customers spent 22 pounds on average when However, if they played soft, classical music, customers spent over 24 pounds. That's 10 percent more! they played pop music. "According to our research, music does affect people's moods. Classical music makes customers feel rich and sophisticated," says 10 Dr. Adrian North from the University of Leicester. "They then buy luxury items, such as appetizers, desserts and coffee." Interestingly, if there was no background music, the customers spent only 21 pounds on average. They spent less because they skipped some of the luxury items. 5 レストランや喫茶店では音楽を流していますね。 あの音楽によって売上に変化はあるのでしょうか。 の科学者が実験を行いました。 その結果は... POINTS James Davis owns the restaurant where the scientists carried out the research. "Sometimes I play what I like, not what the customers like," he says. "After the research, I'll be more careful. I'll use less pop music! Classical music is what I should play." [東京家政大〕 ). ✓ fewer 7 no (5) In the future, James will play more ( 7 pop 1 jazz イギリス ). more scientist 科学者 experiment 実験をする ) music. customer 客 classical spend 使う on average 平均して ☐ 1 本文の内容に合うように,次の (1)~(5) の()に入る最も適切な語句をそれぞれア〜エか ら選びなさい。 (1) The scientists carried out the experiment in a ( 7 university restaurant concert hall (2) They played various kinds of ( 7 games 1 roles (3) Customers bought more ( 7 salads 1 desserts (4) Customers bought ( research 研究 affect 影響する sophisticated 高級な luxury ぜいたくな when they heard classical music. gifts I department store ) luxury items when there was no music. I bigger background music I musical instruments 29 I main courses 2 I rock アエ イ ウエオ 3 (1 0

（2）、（3）がわからないです。 2はそこには神社と寺がたくさんあるとあるのでwhereではないのですか？ 3もなぜwhichが入るかわかりません。 理解が遅いですが教えていただけると嬉しいです。

✓ 前の文を先行詞とする which 非制限用法のwhich には、先行詞が前の文の一部または前の文全体を 先行詞とする用法がある。 下の文では, which が前の Jane was on time this morning (ジェーンが今朝時間通りに来た)を受けて, それが 「みんなを驚 かせた」ことにつながっている。 Jane was on time this morning, which surprised everyone. (ジェーンは今朝時間通りに来たので、それはみんなを驚かせた) ✓チェック 33回 11/4, 10/24 8/31, 918 次の文の空所に入る適切な語(句) を下から選び,記号で答えなさい。 (1) M (1) My favorite book ( )I borrowed from the library, is about life in おりもこ Japan 100 years ago. ア what ア what 解答別冊 p.12 ウ that I if O (2) You had better visit Kyoto ( ) has many shrines and temples. 神社 イ which ウ where (静岡市立静岡看護専門学校・清水看護専門学校) イ which (3) We tend to think of him as unsociable, () is not the case. ~しがち 人づき合いか ア this イthat ウ which 苦手 エ whatedT (竹田看護専門学 10.05. (5) ( )you want, I'm happy to give it to you. C Sino an ア Whoever My brother;( ) you met here yesterday, wants to see you. ア that イ which ウ who 7even if 819 10/2 2-34 (島田市立看護専門学校 ) (6) I'd rather have a room of my own, () small it may be. ほしい however イ whatever (呉共済病院看護専門学 イ Whatever ウ Wherever I Whenever (鶴岡市立荘内看護専門 (愛仁会看護助産専 item 33 関係

このような英語長文のsvocの振り方が分かりません。コツなどあればこの写真の例文を使って教えて欲しいです。

4 Part 2 Part 3 30 18 Vol. II FL 20 本文 21 22 レーズ23~24 ¹A flexible perspective is necessary / when we deal with social problems. // 2For 教科書 pp.58-59 instance, / many children in South Africa / once died from diseases. // ³It was because called "Hope Soap." // they didn't wash their hands enough. // To get children to wash their hands regularly, / a toy was put / inside each piece of soap.// 5Children became eager / to wash their hands / because they wanted to get the toy. // The soap used in this successful program / was bi nid deen At 'Let's look at another example. // In 1995,/ more than a million volunteers / went to A We 1 Loa 1 pers 2 die 4 reg help / after the Great Hanshin-Awaji Earthquake. // However, it was difficult / to match communication/in disaster areas. s. // volunteers' skills with victims' needs. // 10 Later, / dekimasu zekken was created / to solve 5 eas 8 mc 2 C (1) d this problem. // 1¹ Volunteers wrote their skills / on sheets of paper / and put them on their backs. // ¹2 Dekimasu zekken still brings people together and promotes a C B 31 5 6

添削お願いします🙇‍♀ 長生きすることで経験が積める。もし150歳まで生きたら多くのことが学べる。約140年間の歴史は学べる。特に政治、経済、環境は大きく変化する。社会に適応するために様々なことを学ぶ。 しかし死ぬまで寝たきりかもしれない。多額の医療費を払うかもしれない。... Read More

メリット 経験を積めるちんれまし. No. Date science may make it possible for people to live a healthy life to the age of 150 What would be the advantages and disadvantages of living longer. I think that the advantage of living longer can get some experience. If I live a healthy life to the age of 150. I am able to learn a lot of things. For example I can learn history for about 140 years. Especially. political, economy and environment make a major difference. So I try to learn a variety of things to adapt to society. However I may be in bed for the rest my life. I will spend a lot of medical costs. Do you think it is happiness ? Everyone has the right to the pursue of happiness. So I think living longer is not only good think. The longer I live the poorer I Cast lots of money

明治学院大学のA日程2015年の英作文の課題です 黄色のマーカーをしているところが理由部分です。 できれば早めに添削していただきたいです

No. Date 2d5 Online education is becoming a popular choice for many students nowadays.. think is better, to learn in a classroom or to learn at home over Which do You the internet? I think that we learn in a classroom. I have two reasons. First we can study with my friends. Online education feels lonely. But leaming in a classroom have friends around. Also we are able to do group work because of the people around. I think that we can deepen thinking though group work. Second Online education is not face to face. So students hide different things. For example playing game, studying different subjects and so on. In my experience, some leveryone was doing these things. Therefore students may decline academic ability. For there reasons, I think that teachers had better teach at scool.

英作文に使える表現を多く知りたいです。教えてください！

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分かりません！！！ 助けてください！！ お願いします！！！ 英語です！！ 2枚目、3枚目は問題文です！！

weive 4 Use every word once to fill in the blanks. Give the correct forms. ebrow (The English Language-Where Did It Come From?) Ino I become begin borrow build call go invade remain stop use Julius Caesar (1. ) the island with his Roman army in 55 B.C. and named it Britain, but soon they (2. ) back to the Continent. In 43 A.D. the Romans invaded Britain again. They (3. ) strong towns and wonderful roads. During the 5th century the Romans left and the Angles and the Saxons invaded Britain and (4.) it Angle- land, or England. The people of Britain (5. ) to speak English. Then the Danes ) by King and the Vikings invaded the island from the north. The advance was (6. Alfred in 871, but the Danes (7. ) in the east and left many of their own words. ) Christians, so English (9.) Meanwhile, the Angles and the Saxons had (8. ) in the church. many words from Latin, which was widely (10. 7678 100 W mil nedW 4) 1) (9) 7) 5) 8) 6) 2) 3) 10)

英文が変でないか見て欲しいですm(*_ _)m One of selective breeding is pigs.its perpose is improve growth rates and improve meat quality. However, it has ... Read More