英検準1級のライティングです。 どなたでも構いません。添削をお願いしたいです！何を書いているか分からなければ、聞いてもらって全然大丈夫です。ていうか、読んだだけでは、全く理解できないと思います。 近日中に受けるので、明日の夕方頃までにお願いします🙏

Write an essay on the given TOPIC. Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer. Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion Suggested length: 120-150 words TOPIC Do you think that gas-powered cars will be replaced by electric cars in the near future? 電時の排出 POINTS 走行エネルギーの asse). Environment Convenience #1124-Kat #veg Cost Industry 高速産 ・充電せった コストが高い 産業限られた 短いきが しが ・使用者が買いかえようとは 思わない 2:33. 1 充電スペースの 2015 3. cars will be replaced by electric cars I do not think that gas-powered opinion. in the near future, I have two reasons to support this One reason is that it may be not convenient for people to drive electric cars in these days society. For example, electric cars take more time to charge than gas-powered cars. Moreover, electric cars can run few distance. Onother reason is that electric cars cost a lot of money in the many situation. For example, people who use electric, cars usually sex charging places at the each houses, but they have to pay so much cash to do it, Also, they need to prepare too much money every month to charge electric Propte cash, For these reasons above, I believe that gas-powered cars will be replaced by electric cars in the near future. total: 179 words

Check It Out の問題があっているか教えてください。添削して欲しいです。

Model Read the article on the connection between technology and life. While many parents think that smartphones are not good for students, smartphones can actually help them work more efficiently. 2 For instance, students can use smartphones to easily keep in touch with one another. 3 This is especially important when they are working together on school projects. 4 In such situations, students often need to arrange meetings, and smartphones can help them do that. 5 Another example of how smartphones can help students is through the use of schedule "applications. These applications help students organize their work, so they remember when different "assignments are due. These are just a few examples of how smartphones can help students. 6 "application 771) / assignment. Check It Out QO What is the writer's opinion on smartphones? Is it positive or negative? Q2 How many examples does the writer give? Q3 What does the writer say are the benefits of smartphones?

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Model Read the article on the connection between technology and life. While many parents think that smartphones are not good for students, smartphones can actually help them work more efficiently. 2 For instance, students can use smartphones to easily keep in touch with one another. ³ This is especially important when they are working together on school projects. 4 In such situations, students often need to arrange meetings, and smartphones can help them do that. 5 Another example of how smartphones can help students is through the use of schedule "applications. These applications help students organize their work, so they remember when different "assignments are due. These are just a few examples of how smartphones can help students. 6 7 "application 771) / assignment . Check It Out QO What is the writer's opinion on smartphones? Is it positive or negative? Q2 How many examples does the writer give? What does the writer say are the benefits of smartphones?

英検２級のライティングです。 添削をお願いしたいです😿 字汚くてすみません 文法、単語あってますかね、

●以下のTOPICについて, あなたの意見とその理由を2つ書きなさい。 ●POINTSは理由を書く際の参考となる観点を示したものです。 ただし、これら以 外の観点から理由を書いてもかまいません。 語数の目安は80語~ 100語です。ordi 限 POINTS ●Recycling ●Quality ●Repair かんたんにものを捨てる これから TOPIC Today, many people simply throw things away if they are broken. Do you think this trend will increase in the future? へる?

この問題の(4)なのですが、 I will try anything faster than any other student in my class. どんなことも他の人(クラスメート)よりも早く挑戦する と解答したのですが、あっていますか？ 添削お願いします。

19 ハルナ(Haruna) がヒューズ先生 (Mr. Hughes) と話をしています。この対話文を読んで、 [1]~[(3) に入る最も適当なものをそれぞれあとのア~エのうちから一つずつ選び、その 符号を書きなさい。 また、対話文の内容に合うように、 (4) に入る言葉を英語で書きなさい。 ただし、語の数 は10語程度(.?! などの符号は語数に含まない。) とすること｡ Haruna Mr. Hughes, do you have time ? Mr. Hughes Of course. Do you have any questions? Haruna:Yes, at the end of the class, you said, "Be the first penguin." (1) Mr. Hughes: All right. You know penguins, right? Penguins are birds that cannot fly but car swim in the sea. Haruna Yes, of course. I have seen them in an aquarium. Mr. Hughes : Some people say that there is no leader in the world of penguins but that is not true. When they catch food or run away to a safe place, one penguin moves first, and then the rest of them (2) Haruna Mr. Hughes: Wow, that's very interesting. For example, (3) | to jump into the sea to catch food because there is sometimes danger in the sea. But when one brave penguin jumps into the sea, all 0000/r

英検二級の英作文の練習をしているのですが、写真の中でなにか添削するところはありますか？ ご指摘していただけるならおねがいしたいです。

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とても拙い英文で申し訳ないのですが、ピンクの斜め線の部分はどう直したら良くなるでしょうか？ タイトルは　rush hourの交通渋滞をどう減らすか　というものです 2枚目が模範解答です お願いします🙇‍♀️

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中3です質問の答えが分かりません教えてください🙏💦

G Gand dought didn's should keep buynig ④ The Salt March showed a new way to fight against discrimination. (2) 次の質問に英語で答えなさい。 (P.76の内容です。 本文の語句を使い、 自分で考えて書きましょう。) ① Why did Indians in South Africa stand up against the law? A: A: ③ Why did the jails in South Africa become full of Indians? A: A: (下) What did Gandhi decide to do when the British made a law that was even more unfair to Indian people ? What did the success of the movement Gandhi led in South Africa show? success=成功 led=leadの過去 (3) P.77,6行目 Gandhi thought it was unfair. の it の内容を具体的に日本語で説明しなさい。

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[4] Read the instructions and write a well-organized answer in English. (50 points) Virtual reality (VR)* refers to a high-quality simulation of reality created by a computer. Probably the most famous use for VR so far is gaming. But VR has also been used to improve society in various fields such as education, medicine, and engineering. Describe a single specific way that virtual reality can be used to improve society. Explain your idea in detail in about 100 English words. Notes: Virtual reality (VR)*: VR systems use special glasses that completely cover the user's eyes. These glasses show a very realistic picture of a world created by the computer. In addition, the systems can tell when the user moves their head, arms, and sometimes other body parts. So users can control the action by natural movement. Some systems even let users feel like they are touching things. Thus, VR systems can make users feel like they are really in another world. 〔答案〕 I suggest you to simulation with VR. For example, doctors can practice operation. I have the three reasons. First, VR's display is very real. So doctors can do as if real simulation. Second, every one can make simulation software. If you want add patients information to VR and study how to make software, you can make VR software to yourself. Third, medical professors can use VR simulation in lecture. If they do this, Students who want be surgeon in the future will reduce about operation's anxiety. In this way, VR have a lot of possibilities that useful of medical field. For these reasons, I suggest VR simulations.

添削をお願いしたいです！（画像が送りきれないので回答者の方が返信したら追加で送ります） 自分の解答↓ 短い時間、レンジで加熱すると心臓病のリスクを下げるフラボノイドを増加させることができるが、長い時間加熱したり多すぎる水の中で加熱するとむしろフラボノイドは低下してしまう。た... Read More

一般に,電子レンジでの調理は,他の調理法に比べると栄養素 16 の保持には好ましいとされるが,調理時間が長かったり、多量の 水を使って調理したりするとブロッコリーでは心疾患のリスクを減らす フラボノイド類が減少するという報告がある。 ただ、食材によって栄養保 持の結果はさまざまであり,統一見解はない。電子レンジ調理にプラスチ ック容器を使うと, 可塑剤のフタラートなどの化学物質が溶け出すが, こうした物質は微量であってもホルモンや代謝系を乱すほか、 生殖問題や ぜんそく, ADHD との関連性など,さまざまな悪影響を及ぼすことが指 摘されている。また, 高温になる電子レンジでの加熱で分子の結合が変わ り,新たな高エネルギーの分子が作り出される。 これがDNA と反応し て突然変異を引き起こすとされており, ジャガイモを電子レンジ加熱した ことで,発がん物質として働くアクリルアミドが生成した例が報告されて いる。(400字以内)発 当 解答編