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次のTopic について、自分の意見とその理由を50 語程度の英文で書きなさい。 Topic :If you had an "Anywhere Door", where would you go? Topic 2: If you could travel in a time machine, when would you go to? Topic 3: Do you think more people will have pets in the future? 55 ☺ If I could travel in a time machine, I want to go to Heian Period. I have two reasons. First. I can watch Helankya. Sei Shenagon and Murasaki Shikibu. I like their essay. so I want to talk with them. For this reason. I want to go to Helan Period 54歳 0 If I had an Second. I want to meet "Anywhere Door", I want to go to Shizuoka. I have two reasons. First I want to eat Local gourment food like Fuzimiya-yakicabo, Second I want to watch the volley match of Hamamatushugakusha high school. But I haven't enough many to ge So I want to go to Shizuoka with anywhere door. ☺ I think more people will have pets in the future. It's because having And having pets make children's pets is good for education. emotions enriching. Also, pet helps relieve children's loneliness. So I think more people will have pete in the future Check! □自分の意見や考えを最初に述べているか。 □その理由を述べているか 理由に対する具体的な事例・事実を述べているか ( つなぎ言葉を効果的に使っているか。 □単語・文法の誤りはないか。 ) words

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In his search for more comfortable living, modern man of bra sometimes makes for his fellow men and even for himself an environment which turns out to be potentially harmful to health. (滋賀医大) 語句注□search 追求 comfortable 快適な□his fellow men (ここでは内容 から) 彼と同時代の人□ environment 環境 turn out to be... であることが わかる potentially 潜在的に,( の可能性が? [1

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3) 私にはナオに話しかける理由がない. (Nao, I, to, reason, to, have, talk, no) 4) イネは日本で最初に医学を学んだ女性です。 (medical science, to, the first, study, woman, is) Ine in Japan.

こちらの答えが what it would be like なのですが、この文は is ではなく would be が使われるのか教えていただきたいです。

465 824 フランスに行くことを決めた時は,まだ海外生活とはどういうものかわからな かった。 (1語不要) When I decided to go to France, I had no idea (like / what / would/ was / it / be) to live abroad. P 8SI tt) & (3) on LDS OR 成蹊大) Noito92 TOY *4

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よく出る 4 次のinformation literacy skills (情報リテラシー: 自分が必要とする情報を見きわめて入手し、 活用する力)についての英文を読んで、あなたの考えを、〔条件〕と〔記入上の注意】 に従って40 語以上50語程度の英語で書きなさい｡ ( 10点) People need information literacy skills. Some people say that every elementary school student should start learning these skills at school. What do you think about this idea? [条件] 質問に対する自分の考えを、その理由が伝わるように書きなさい。 〔記入上の注意] ① 【記入例】にならって、 解答欄の下線 _ 符号(,.?! など)は語数に含めません。 50語を超える場合は、解答欄の破線 Hil America. in rarint egur Ⅰ am bro asilbond ne ② 英文の数は問いません。 ③ 【下書き欄】は、必要に応じて使ってかまいません。 yart san sustoig tigl 【記入例】 【下書き欄】 is I'm Where April is Ken's birthday, too. of noilasup の上に1語ずつ書きなさい。 l で示された行におさまるように書きなさい。」 A og so lot zo ei sil 10:8 Nancy. are 2. I'm you 2001. from from? It 50 405 50 8 NOW S 平成31年■ (41)

生物の食物連鎖とかの問題だと思うんですけど誰かわかる方いますか？？？ 英語すみません💦

hhmi Biolnteractive Some Animals Are More Equal than Others: Trophic Cascades and Keystone Species Mean Leaf Area per Plant Over 18 Months without beetle with beetle Leaf Area per Plant (cm²) Control Ecology 2400 2200 2000 1800 1600 1400 1200 1000 800 Experimental 0 T 2 www.BioInteractive.org 8 10 12 14 16 Months After Start of Experiment 4 6 Refer to the figure to answer questions 12 through 17. 12. For both the plots with the beetles added and the control plots, state the mean tree leaf area per plot that the scientists recorded after running the experiment for 18 months. The mean tree leaf area per plot that the Scientist recorded after running the experiment for 18 months wit the beetles added is 1.7m², S 2.2m² 13. Compare the trends in mean tree leaf area per plot for both the plots with the beetles added and the control plots over the 18 months of the experiment. The area of the control plat for thinoceros beetles has d has increased at a nearly constant rate, the other is a gradua decrease at first, then a sudden decrease, and finally a dradua 18 Figure 2. Mean leaf area per tree. Initial measurements were taken before (0 to 2 months) and after (7 to 18 months) beetles were added to 40 of 80 plants. The light gray round markers represent measurements taken of the control plots, to which beetles were not added. The black square markers represent measurements taken of the experimental plots, to which beetles were added. Measurements were made on all leaves to calculate the mean leaf area per plant. Error bars represent standard error of the mean. 14. Draw two diagrams that show the food chains for both the experimental and control plots. Include increase. interactions among predatory beetles (if present), ants, caterpillars, and piper plants. Revised January 2018 Page 4 of 5

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下の文を英文に直して欲しいです。 はい。私は外食するのが好きです。 理由は二つあります。一つ目は美味しいからです。特に夢庵が好きです。なぜなら夢庵のうどんが好きだからです。二つ目は楽しいからです。家族や友達と行くとご飯が美味しいです。だから私は外食するのが好きです。 私... Read More

英検準一級です Should people trust information on the internet? でライティングしました。 添削お願いいたします。

I don't agree that people should truse information on the Internet. This essay will explain the two main reasons for my opinion Th Terms of News and online shopping The first reason is that we cante lonow that the news 75 correct. Although we are able to obtain a variery of Information, the news may have a hias. A tending may suffer to us such as There fore, I found that A tending information the big earthquake in Kumamoto. don't have to rely to everything. we For example, when The second reason is the online shopping is likely to send we buy the dress through internet, goods which we down requine. we can't know whom this dress sell by. If it were not for buying clothing ac online store, it could not have such a opportunity to purchaseing different clothing. For these reasons, I don't believe people ought not to trust information. on the Internet.