九大2020年度英作文です。 どなたか添削して頂けないでしょうか🙇‍♀️🙇‍♀️

g 3), of d to sinion. nerican ments. ing and writing, orms than 九州大理系前期 〔4〕 次の英文の説明と指示に従い,英語の文章を書きなさい。(30点) Lew Most Japanese high school students have to choose their course of study either from humanities ("bunkei") or science ("rikei") in the middle of their high school education. One of the reasons is to help students prepare for university entrance examinations and reduce their burden of subjects studied. At the same time, this narrows the range of choices for their future careers at Chebet a very early stage. Write your opinion on this current practice in a well-organized paragraph. It should be approximately 100 English words long, including specific reasons to support your argument. 〔5〕 次の文章の下線部(1), (2)を英語に訳しなさい。 ( 27点) 2020年度 英語 15 Okue 250 (E) 220 インターネットと検索エンジンのおかげで,あるトピックに関してどんな論文 がすでに発表されているのかを調べるのは、格段に簡単になった。 そこで何を 始めるにもまずは既存研究を調べましょう, となるのだが、下手をするとすぐに 「こんなにたくさんの研究がされている。 自分たちに出る幕などありません」 とい あんたん う暗澹たる気分になってしまう。 (1) 研究で楽しいのはなんと言っても問題について自分で考え、解決に向けて自分 で試行錯誤する時間, そして何かが解決できた瞬間である。 そこで,あまり真面 目に既存研究調査などせずにそれを始めた場合どうなるか? おそらく多くの場 合、苦労をして考えついたアイデアや作り上げたソフトウェアに似た先行研究が あるということを後から思い知ることになるのだろう。だがそれは、無駄な時間 だったのだろうか? (2) 一人の人間が情報を消費することに一生を費やしても、決して吸収しきれない 情報があふれている。 徹底調査をし、ひたすら再発明をしないことに向けて最適 化すべきなのか, それとも, 再発明の危険があってもまずは自分で脳を全開にす ること,それ自身を目的関数にしてよいのか? 真面目に考えてもよい時になって いる気がする。 田浦健次朗 「車輪の再発明と研究者の幸せ」

この赤いラインのところの文構造がわかりません。 to convince him otherwise のtoが何なのかを特に知りたいです。happen to では無いだろうしわけわかんなくなってます。

tol (fremmee hin visbiy od When climate scientists got on board the global-warming movement (in the late 1980s, Richard Lindzen remained steadfastly on the fringe. Back then he took issue 大営業 with the notion that the earth is headed for catastrophe, and nothing has happened in Đ a decade of climate research to convince him otherwise. With the *Kyoto plan to and environmentalists up in arms, C 5 reduce carbon-dioxide emissions こうぞしてい」 [1]-

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[4][5] のそれぞれについて、 ave の部分の3語を正しい英語になるように並べ替えなさい。 並べ替えた結果を数字 で(123とか321とか) で解答欄に書きなさい。 [4] Next, sleep deprivation (1. affects 2. also 3. your) mental health. Many of you must have experienced fatigue, irritability, and a (1. focus 2. lack 3. of) after a poor night's sleep. It goes without saying that these consequences 1. affect 2. negatively 3. your) social life (1. academic 2. and 3. performance). Also, it increases your risk of getting (1. accidents 2. in 3. involved) due to drowsiness or lack of attention. To make the situation worse, lack of sleep is linked to an increased risk of mental illnesses, such as depression and anxiety. 213 b 231 213 d 213 321 [5] Now you can understand (1. I 2. recommend 3. why) having a good night's sleep on a regular basis. It reduces (1. of 2. risk 3. the) having the physical and mental problems 1. explained 2. I 3. that) previously. But not only that, it contributes to better academic performance. With good sleep, your brain 1. can 2. information 3. process) more efficiently and retain the information longer. In other words, you can learn and memorize better. So, everyone, let's (1. and 2. sleep 3. well) have an excellent university life! 312 b 321 32 d 132 231 a a C C e e

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以下のTOPICについて, あなたの意見とその理由を2つ書きなさい｡ ●POINTSは理由を書く際の参考となる観点を示したものです。 ただし, これら以外の観点から理由を書いてもかまいません。 語数の目安は80語~ 100語です。 TOPIC These days, some people spend a lot of money on their pets. Do you think more people will do so in the future?

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I often try to refuse reduce / reuse) things. 具体的行動 I take my own ·bag when shopping. Also, I always decide what I'll buy before it

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It is often said that restaurants, and supermarkets should try to reduce the amount of food that they throw away. Do you agree this opinion? I agree the opinion that restaurants and supermarkets should try to reduce the amount of food that they thinw I have two reasons to support this opinion. Firstly, It is bad for the enviroment two throw away the food. To throw away the food lead to global warming Secondly, reducing food waste is one of critical factors Developing contries have a lack of safe food If wealthy countries reduce the amount of food that they throw away, people in developing countries will happy. for these reasons f mentioned above, I believe that we should reduce the amount of food that the restraunts and supermaket's throw away,

英語です！54番のthatは関係代名詞のthatですか？

53. It was actually a huge amount of garbage floating in the ocean. 53. 実際はそれは海に浮かぶ膨大な量のゴミでした。 54. The plastics that humans throw away kill many sea animals 54. 人間が捨てるプラスチックが毎年多くの海の生き物を殺しています every year. 155. We should reduce our use of plastic and gather the garbage 55. 私たちはプラスチックの使用量を減らし、海のゴミを集めるべきで Sa

とても拙い英文で申し訳ないのですが、ピンクの斜め線の部分はどう直したら良くなるでしょうか？ タイトルは　rush hourの交通渋滞をどう減らすか　というものです 2枚目が模範解答です お願いします🙇‍♀️

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[4] Read the instructions and write a well-organized answer in English. (50 points) Virtual reality (VR)* refers to a high-quality simulation of reality created by a computer. Probably the most famous use for VR so far is gaming. But VR has also been used to improve society in various fields such as education, medicine, and engineering. Describe a single specific way that virtual reality can be used to improve society. Explain your idea in detail in about 100 English words. Notes: Virtual reality (VR)*: VR systems use special glasses that completely cover the user's eyes. These glasses show a very realistic picture of a world created by the computer. In addition, the systems can tell when the user moves their head, arms, and sometimes other body parts. So users can control the action by natural movement. Some systems even let users feel like they are touching things. Thus, VR systems can make users feel like they are really in another world. 〔答案〕 I suggest you to simulation with VR. For example, doctors can practice operation. I have the three reasons. First, VR's display is very real. So doctors can do as if real simulation. Second, every one can make simulation software. If you want add patients information to VR and study how to make software, you can make VR software to yourself. Third, medical professors can use VR simulation in lecture. If they do this, Students who want be surgeon in the future will reduce about operation's anxiety. In this way, VR have a lot of possibilities that useful of medical field. For these reasons, I suggest VR simulations.

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