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以下の TOPIC について, あなたの意見とその理由を2つ書きなさい。 POINTS は理由を書く際の参考となる観点を示したものです。 ただし,これら以外 の観点から理由を書いてもかまいません。 語数の目安は80語~ 100語です。 「解答は, 解答用紙のB面にあるライティング解答欄に書きなさい。 なお、 解答欄の 外に書かれたものは採点されません。 解答が TOPIC に示された問いの答えになっていない場合や, TOPIC からずれて いると判断された場合は, 0点と採点されることがあります。 TOPIC の内容をよく 読んでから答えてください。 a do get a job je valuable f 8 QUESTION Pentsta various Today, more and more young people are starting their own companies. Do you think this is a good idea? Point: Experience / Income think that more and more young people, are starting I have two their own companies is good. reasons for my opinion. 28 First of all, I think that it is good for us to work what we like. It is valuable experience very much. And We can rest favorite time. Second, we can be got much money. It is glad for us to do. If we have much money, we can buy various things. For These reasons, I think we should start our own companies in the future. 22 24 (24) 88

英検2級のwritingです！ 添削お願い致します！！ 少しでも良いのでアドバイス頂けると助かります！！

以下の TOPIC について, あなたの意見とその理由を2つ書きなさい。 POINTS は理由を書く際の参考となる観点を示したものです。 ただし, これら以外 の観点から理由を書いてもかまいません。 語数の目安は80語~ 100語です。 解答は、 解答用紙のB面にあるライティング解答欄に書きなさい。 なお,解答欄の 外に書かれたものは採点されません。 解答が TOPIC に示された問いの答えになっていない場合や, TOPIC からずれて いると判断された場合は, 0点と採点されることがあります。 TOPIC の内容をよく 読んでから答えてください｡ do get a job valuable f 8 QUESTION Pentata various Today, more and more young people are starting their own companies. Do you think this is a good idea? / Freedom Income Point: Experience 22 "I think that more and more young people are starting their own companies is good. I have two reasons for my opinion. First of all, I think that it is good for us to work what we like. It is valuable experience very much. And. We can rest favorite time. Second, we 28 (X 24 can be got much money. It is glad for us to do. If we have much money, we can buy various things. For These reasons, I think we should 09 start our own companies in the future. 88

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以下の TOPIC について, あなたの意見とその理由を2つ書きなさい。 POINTS は理由を書く際の参考となる観点を示したものです。 ただし, これら以外 の観点から理由を書いてもかまいません。 語数の目安は80語~ 100語です。 解答は, 解答用紙のB面にあるライティング解答欄に書きなさい。 なお、 解答欄の 外に書かれたものは採点されません。 解答が TOPIC に示された問いの答えになっていない場合や, TOPIC からずれて いると判断された場合は, 0点と採点されることがあります。 TOPIC の内容をよく 読んでから答えてください。 contact 6 QUESTION 小学校 Do you think it is a good idea for elementary school children to have mobile phones? Point: convenience /(cost/ variety (Cost) v think that it is a good idea for elementary school children to have mobile phones. I have two reasons for my opinion. 23 9 First of all, they can keep in touch with their family. It is easy. And, they don't need als to their parents. letter to contact Second, children can buy mobile phones cheaply 75 So, they should to buy it right now. I think it wil (7 be useful for them. Because, 9 internet is developmenting now. 13 For these reasons, I think that it is a good idea for elementary school children to have mobile phones. (6 23+31+30+ 54+40 (94

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4 ライティング Polandeningl M. ●POINTSは理由を書く際の参考となる観点を示したものです。 ただし,これら以外の観 以下のTOPICについて, あなたの意見とその理由を2つ書きなさい。 から理由を書いてもかまいません。 語数の目安は80語~ 100語です。 ■解答は, 解答用紙にあるライティング解答欄に書きなさい。 なお,解答欄の外に書かれた のは採点されません。 ●解答が TOPIC に示された問いの答えになっていない場合や, TOPICからずれていると 断された場合は,0点と採点されることがあります。TOPICの内容をよく読んでから各 てください。 ding TOPIC Dus Kay Today, some kindergartens have started teaching English to children. Do y think it is a good idea to teach English to children in kindergartens? POINTS Career Japanese language Effectiveness

Howは名詞節を導けませんか？ 写真の(2)文章でwhatの位置にhowは来れないですか？ なぜwhatが来てるのか教えて欲しいです🙇‍♀️

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TOPIC Young people love playing computer games, and this may even be their favorite hobby. Do you think it is okay for young people to play computer games? POINTS Health Friendship Stress 解答欄 I think that it is not okay for young people to play computer games. There are two reasons to support this idea. For the first reason, to it another I think that Computer game is not good eyes way eyes is very bad. If It want play, It decide playing time, For the second reason, put I think that time is very waste. In addition, Computer game is not useful, For these reasons, I think that it is not fer okay young people to play computer gamer, 15 |10 15

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Date I think Increase peoples to do internet shopping, there are two reasons to support this idea. For the first reason Internet shopping is very convenient. If I have no time go shopping, I can buy thing fast i For the second reason P Internet shopping can buy whenever I want... things. to put it another way. I can buy free times, On the other hand, Shopping isn't open in the night; So I think that shopping isn't convenient, For there reasons. I think increase peoples to do internet shopping,

至急！ 直すところがあれば教えて欲しいです！ 質問はDo you think it is a good idea for people to have a car? という質問です！ 後、この文章だと英検で何点ぐらい取れるか教えて欲しいです🙇‍♀️🙇‍♀️🙇‍♀️

I th Yes, I think so. I have two reasons. First reason is, it is fun for people take a car. For example, when take a car with family, we become happy. Second reason is, we can going to a lot of place take a car. For example, can learn about a lot of things at don't know place. we 58語

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EXERCISES 次の各文のイタリック体の動詞は、現在の状態 理 ⑩ 確定的未来 未来の代用のどの用法か, 1) Lucy sends e-mails to her family every day. 2) They arrive in Beijing tomorrow afternoon. 3) His house stands on the hillside. 4) It will be warm before those birds fly to the north. 5) Cells are the basic units of life. 12 次の各文の( )内から適当な語句を選びなさい . 1) The children (plays, play, played) in the park in those days. 2) My father usually (take, will take, takes) a walk every morning. 3) On earth, water (boil, boiled, boils) at 100°C. 4) Last night a good idea (occurs, occur, occurred) to me. 5) The street lights will turn on when it (will get, gets, got) dark. 6) Please wait here till I (will return, return, returned). 7) I doubt if he (will succeed, succeeds, succeed) in the exam. 次の各文の( )内の動詞を必要に応じて適当な形にかえなさい. 1) The Thames (flow) through London. 2) I (lie) down under an oak tree yesterday. 3) My father (be) retirement age next year. 4) I'll let you know as soon as I (arrive). 5) Look right and left when you (go) across a street. 6) When I (look) at the baby, it was sleeping. 7) I'll believe you if you (show) me the picture. 現在の習慣, © 不変の真 ⓔ の記号で示しなさい.