英検準1級のライティングの添削をお願いします。 前回のライティングテストでは、構成が1点でした。そして内容 構成 語い 文法のうち1つも満点がありませんでした。 次のテストで高得点を取りたいので よろしくお願いします。

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英検準1級のライティングが毎回悪いです。 1回目 内容 3/4 、構成 1/4 、語い 3/4 、文法2/4 2回目 内容 1/4、構成1/4、語い3/4、文法3/4 こんな感じで毎回ライティングの点数が1番低いです。 2回で共通しているのは、構成が... Read More

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cross great distancesの和訳が全長を延ばすと書いてあるんですけどどうしてそう訳すんですか？直訳とかを教えて欲しいです

例題 11 次の文章に合う絵として最も適当なものを,下の①~④のうちから つ選べ。 This type of bridge is made up of multiple connected sections. These sections work together to help distribute the forces throughout the entire bridge, so that it can cross great distances and support a large amount of Vf V+ Vt which makes S. Vt weight. The size of the components in each section is small. C₁ this type of bridge ideal for places where long sections cannot be shipped or where large cranes and heavy equipment cannot be used during space above the construction. However, a bridge of this type encloses the √t roadway, possibly distracting drivers' attention, 3 A やや難 4

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3 次の文章は, Fred が、 コンサートのあと Yutaka に送ったEメールの内容である。 Hello, Yutaka, Thank you for inviting me and my brother to the concert. It was so much fun for us. The brass band and the guitar club played a lot of anime music. My brother was excited to listen to them. For me, the performance of the chorus was the best. You sang some English songs very well. One of them was my favorite song, "Stand by Me. When I listened to it, I remembered my friends in my country.. I often enjoyed singing that song with them at school. I like it very much. In December, we will have a winter concert at our school. Will you come to the concert? You can come with your friends, of course. We will sing many songs. How about joining us? Tell the members of your club about my idea. I will be very happy if your club can sing with us. Let's sing Stand by Me together! Your friend, Fred () performance S Stand by Me 『スタンド・バイ・ミー』 (曲名)

ピンク下線部について これは「put A through B」(AにBを経験させる)の意訳からドラマに出演させる　という意味になっているのでしょうか？ put throughの意味はいくつかあって混乱してしまったため質問します。 以下原文のリンク https://www... Read More

22:49 日 = 4G 26 Why is the 'Barbie' movie bombing in Jap... the japan times 8 I loved playing with Barbie dolls. As a little girl in Michigan, I spent hours putting my dolls through dramas, creating stories alone in my room or in tandem with my best friend who lived next door. Although I have no memory of wanting to look like a Barbie doll - or like any other of my dolls which had thicker waists and flatter feet — I gradually absorbed the culturally prevalent idea that little girls should have dolls that looked like them. With this in mind, I grew up and came to Japan to teach English. One day, at a kindergarten, I was surprised to see that there were no dolls with Japanese features. Aside from the exquisite dolls- in-kimono displayed in glass cases only at the end of winter, none of the dolls in Japan looked Asian. Barbie wasn't popular. She was probably too sexy for Japan. After I married a Japanese high school teacher and had a daughter of my own, I bought dolls for her. Although Barbie dolls were not sold in the local 5

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21年度第2回 I 61 -74. agree with the idea that it is beneficial for workers to change jobs often for the following two reasons. The first reason is that it can change working conditions. I often hear that workers want to take a Vacation after their children borned, but it is difficult by company.. Therefore, the idea enables workers to forme working environment. The second reason is that workers are able to get motivation by changing their workplace. I think that The more the time passed, the less workers passion for their tast: I think that everyone should have motivation for new things. It is increasing their quality of life. For these reasons I mentioned above, I think that it is good effect for working people to change jobs often. Tot

who以下の訳が分かりません。 直訳では「その考えは、2 つの言語で学習することは、2 つの語彙、2 つの文法、そしておそらく 2 つの文化的習慣と期待を学ばなければならない生徒」という訳になると思うのですが、以下の問題集の訳のように「~することを生徒に求め」とあります。... Read More

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関係詞を使った分で80単語以上で文書をかかなきゃいけません。なにか書きやすいテーマありますか？

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5,8,11,14,15の用法が分からないので教えてください 5 形容詞的用法 8 副詞的用法 11名詞的用法 14名詞的用法 15副詞的用法 ですか？？？？

1. I learned that it is important to communicate in English as much as possible. Grammar-A: 以下の文中の不定詞・動名詞の用法は何か、 解答欄で答えなさい。 4. This was their way to show their respect for him. 3. To do these thigs, I need English and friends! chance to learn. 2. A mistake is a 5 His workers hated the idea of wearing the same clothes as each other every day. 6. To survive there is difficult, but one plant manages very well. 7. The best way to describe it is, "a natural water bottle." It stores water, and the liquid it produces is safe for people to drink. 9. Also, it is easy to grow 10. It is used to make food for farm animals, and as a fruit and vegetable for humans to eat Indian people also used it to produce skin cream, soap, and even medical products. 12. Showing all their art is impossible because they don't have enough space. 13. They only have room to show about 10% to 20% of their art at any given time. 14. You can enjoy looking at it from all angles. 15 It's a new way to experience art. Pera Adtr HARE