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Drills Change the sentences below according to the example 例)Iwent to the wrong platform, soI couldn't catch the 7:30 train. If I had not gone to the wrong platform, I could have caught the 7:30 train. 1. It was cold, so we Couldn2 go swimming. t hadn't ben cold w Could . hoe Jone suimming 2. The driver wasn't careful, so there was an acident. -r_ the dhicer hod been caefiull chere helit been on accident 3. I did not have enough money, so I could not buy a double cheeseburger. -IfI_lod onough pOng 1Could harve bought I

2021年北海道大学の自由英作文の添削をおねがいします🙏 QuestionCです。

I think that liberal ats subjects shauld be Considered more Tmportant in the vear fitwe. I have tro easons . First, more andl more peaple thinh diversity is important these days. A liberal aris education let students to think variety. Second, there are a lot of Occupation than. tew years ago, To have. alot of shills is very important for us. So, likeral orts subjects should be conside more important in the near future. (74話)

この意味どゆことですか？？ くりきんでぃーはそのままやくしてください！ 五番でなぜキになるかわかりません😖💦 ちなみに答えはキです。

I'd like to introduce a short story of a hummingbird. A hummingbird is a very little bird. The little bird's name 次の英文は,南アスリカの先住民に伝わるクリキンディ (Kurikindi)という名前のハチト 2 ummingbird)の短い物語を題材に書かれたものです。( ① )~(⑤ 話を、それぞれ下のアークから1つ選び, 記号で答えなさい。 )に,最もよく当てはまる in this story is Kurikindi. Kurikindi lived in a forest. One day there w9s a *Gre in the forest. The little bird stayed there and 5 tried to “put out the fire. But all the other animals hurried to *escape. When they saw Kurikindi on me way. they asked Kurikindi, “Why are you doing that ?" Kurikindi( ① ), "Tmonly doing something I can do.” After( ) this short story, I thought about a few things. For( ), did the hummingbird believe) he could put out the fire? Why did all the other animals want to escape from the forest: Kurikindi did( ) so small that others thought his *actions meant ( ). Many people often think like that. What do you think about Kurikindi? (注)fire 火事 put out 消す escape 逃げる action 行動 ウ reading ア read イ something エ came カ example キ nothing ク answered オ excuse の 2 - P23- の

2011年北海道大学の英作文の添削をおねがいします。questionCです。 字数が足りていませんが、それ以外の部分をおねがいします。

Australia, the United States, and urban India. Rend the following passage and answer questions A through C in English. while their wives work outside the home, Stay-at-home dads are also called stay- Stay-at-home dads are married fathers with children who care for their family domestic burden has led some couples to completely reverse their roles. The number of stay-at-home dads is starting to increase in Britain, Canada, 「husband who can do the housework, such as shopping, cooking, and looking alter the children. The widespread expectation that men should share the vin England showed that 75 percent of women in their twenties prefer a 38 on were breadwinners and women were caregivers. Arecent Traditionally, Survey can Many stay-at-home dads take great pleasure in showing affection to their children. Their wives can pursue careers without worrying about teaching family values or paying for child care. Research suggests that children of stay- athome dads often benefit from strong bonds with both parents, whereas the father's role ina stay-at-home mom household is less influential. Although the number of stay-at-home dads is increasing, it remains small Compared to the total number of fathers. In the United States, the government estimates that in 2009 there were 158,000 stay-at-home dads, a mere 0.2 percent of 67.8 million fathers. In Australia, about 1 percent of fathers are stay-at-home dads. In urban India, one estimate suggests 3 percent of fathers stay at home full-time. Some stay-at-home dads suffer from social stigma. Many people, including stay-at-home moms, do not understand why a man would choose to give up his career to care for his family full-time. Being a stay-at-home dad can also be career suicide. Many employers view stay-at-home dads as lacking ambition and commitment. Losing professional skills may prevent stay-at-home dads from returning to the workforce.

英作文の添削をお願いいたします🙇🙏🙌 改行に関しては気にしないでください！

use the chopsticks her ( her evéry day 7分 の environmental problems (環境問題) についてでの英文を読んで, あなたの考えを,(条件」と ヘ上の注意]に従って40語以上50語程度の英語で書きなさい。*印印のついている語句には、本文の に(注) があります。 4B 『here are many environmental problems we have to solve in the world.Global warming has *cau Sserious problems in many parts of the world. Many people are suffering from water pollution. FC areas are geting smaller, and *desert areas are getting larger. It is important for each of you to think of these problems as your own problems. Some people everyone should make *environmentally friendly choices when they use or buy things, or try t Something else. Even students can do something as a smal *step. What can you do now? 【注) cause ~…………~を引き起こす desert…砂漠 environmentally friendly…環境にやさしい step………一歩 (条件) 下線部の質問に対するあなたの考えを,その理由が伝わるように書きなさい。 【記入上の注意) の 【記入例】にならって, 解答欄の下線 の上に1語ずつ書きなさい。 *符号(,.?!など)は語数に含めません。 . 50 語を超える場合は, 解答欄の破線 ② 英文の数は間いません。 【下書き欄】 は, 必要に応じて使ってかまいません。 で示された行におさまるように書きなさい。 3

スマートフォンを長時間使うことは健康に良くない。例えば目が悪くなる。 というかんじの文にしたいんですけど、どこがおかしいところとか直した方がいいところありますか！？

It is not good tor our healih fo use a Simartphone for along time. For example、 ow eyes go bad.

志望校の過去問です。 英作文の添削をお願いします！

(V] 以下の英文を読んで, 英語で答えよ。 Some people move to large cities and live there. Other people move to small rural towns or villages and live there. There are advantages and disadvantages to living in both kinds of places. Which kind of place would you like to live in? Explain your choice using reasons and examples. You should write 4 to 6, sentences in English.

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pn, waste had the biggest influence of the three on total water pollution in the lake. Next, I'd like to tell you about five different wastes: mayonnaise, milk, Graph B How much water do we need to make it clean? used cooking oil (20ml) mayonnaise (20ml) shampoo (20ml) shampoo, soy sauce, and used cooking oil. 20 They are used and drained in homes 17 every day, so I studied about them. Please look 5 at Graph B. It shows that cleaning Soy sauce 3 (20ml) milk 1 (20ml) wastes needs a lot of water. 20ml of milk needs 300 l of water to make it clean. 15 bathtubs ofwater 0 5 10 20 That's 1 bathtub of water. think that's a lot of water! 20ml of soy sauce needs |e of water. Mayonnaise needs more water than shampoo, and used cooking oil needs the most water of all. Now what can we do at home to reduce water pollution? It's not so difficult. For example, I decided to write a report about how to reduce water 08 pollution and tell my school friends about it. I hope we can enjoy swimming in the lake some day. What do you think? Your friend, Serina caught: catch「~をとる, つかまえる」の過去形 graph(s) : グラフ (注)report : レポート polluted : 汚染された library : 図書館

QuestionAとBの1について、私の回答で丸はもらえますか？教えていただきたいです 北大2017年の英作文の問題です。

Read the following passage. for my age. I leave home early and it takes about two hours on a crowded train to get to the office. I get Sunday off, but on the other days I'm usually in my office till nine o'clock, or even midnight on occasion. But I enjoy seeing the customers excited about our new products and services. Every August I take a 15 years. It's a secure job in a major company and I enjoy a relatively high salary six-day summer vacation, usually at my parents' place in Toyama. It's nice to Thave been working for a Japanese cell phone company in Tokyo for the last 2017年度(3] 32 a or the space of the countryside after my cramped apartment in the suburbs. However, I spend two days travelling there and back, and then it's straight back to work the next day. Last summer, however, I was able to take 10 days off in August and used the rare chance to take my wife on a foreign holiday by going to visit my old friend, Pierre, in Paris. He and I met at university in the US nearly 20 years ago when we were both international exchange students. We shared a love of tennis and S0on became good friends, and have stayed in touch. He now works as a supervisor in a post office in eastern Paris. It was lovely to see Pierre again and spend time in the spacious apartment he shares with his wife. I was very surprised to find that they were just back from a month-long summer vacation in southern France and Switzerland. Pierre told us that this is perfectly normal in his job, and couldn't believe his ears when I mentioned that my usual vacation is around a week and that I work 12 hours a day, six days a week. His usual workday, he said, was from 9:00 to 16:00. He wasn't joking ; he was back home by bicycle by 16:20 every day. He likes his job as the postal service fulfills a vital function in society by connecting people both aomestically andinternationally. On hearing his story, though, I began to reflect upon my own life and work. AmI working to live, or just living to work ? Answer questions A to C in English. You may use words and ideas from the Lext, but you must not copy complete sentences.

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(22:25 Stage 2 Lesson 13 異文化 213 (1A )(1B )( 1C ) にそれぞれ入る顧も適切な動詞を次の中から選び,文脈に応じ 調切な形(現在形 現在分調形·過去分調形のいずれか)に変えなさい。 開西学院大001枚田大 12点x3=6点 [give, involve, need, stare, vary ) 次の文章を読み、設問に答えなさい。[0点) 376 words (1A) (1B) (1C) Attitudes toward time differ from country to country and culture to culture. Americans, for example, are customarily later than the times announced or scheduled for appointments and parties, though how late (1A ) with the occasion and the particular COuntry. In contrast, Germans and Swedes and Americans from the northern states expect people to arrive precisely on time and will sometimes stand outside a door ( 1B at their watchuntil the exact moment to knock or ring the bell. Consequently, anyone who hopes to do business abroad or simply demonstrate good manners while traveling around the globe ( 1C ) to learn new codes of etiquette to fit in with local custom. Learning local time custom will not only fatter your hosts and make your visits more 10 pleasant, but will also amake you a good ambassador abroad; instead of causing embarrassment, misunderstanding, and offense, you will demonstrate your respect for your host culture and your own international aptitude, Although you yourself must learn what is polite a in terms of time in any given place, it helps to have some general guidelines for wide areas, In the main, northern areas are 15 more precise about time and southern areas less. A dinner invitation for seven o'clockin Chicago, which has a strong northern European influence, means that you must arrive at or before that time, while a dinner invitation for seven in New Orleans, which has a strong Italian, Spanish, and French influence, means you should come sometime between 7:15 p.m. and 8o'clock. In Sweden, a 7 p.m. invitation means a7 p.m. arrival time, while in Mexicoa7 p.m. invitation means not before 7:30 or 8 p.m. and a 7 p.m. party invitation might mean "Come around 10 or 11 p.m." Americans who are invited to a Mexican party scheduled for 7 p.m. and who arrive at 8 p.m. might find themselves the first guests of the evening. In Arab countries, in contrast, a dinner invitation might be incredibly flexible; in fact, in some rural areas it might mean, "show up sometime on the invited day" if it is for a celebration. In other words, s you should find out what the local custom of time and invitation involves before you set out for dinner or a party. Latin 下線部(2)とはどういうことか。日本語で具体的に説明しなさい。 bo d 下線部)の意味を、(~(dから1つ選びなさい。 …の観点から b) …の用語で () と同様に ) とは別に 下線部(4) "some general guidelines for wide areas" の内容を70字以内の日本語で説明しな さい。 【10点 5 下線部(5)を和訳しなさい。 【8点 本文の内容と一致するものには○を、一致しないものには×をつけなさい。 3点x3-15点 (a) All people in the USA will arrive on time and wait for the exact time to knock on the door. b Learning local time custom will demonstrate your respect for your host culture and your own international aptitude. (C) People in New Orleans are more precise than people in Chicago in terms of appointed time. いr w In the Arabian countryside, people should appear on time when invited to a party. Its not necessary to learn the local rule about time and invitation before you set out for a party.