Question

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※I thinkから読んでいただけると幸いです！

brightens up the town and helps with crime prevention I think so.
I have two reasons. First, they
can finish their homework
a
nice time
on
Samme
quickly. By doing this, they will spend
vacation. Second, they are able to use time effectively. They
will learn many things because They can
lot of time.
get a
Therefore, I believe making study plans for their summer
is amazing.
vacation

QUESTION
Do you think it is good for students to make study plans for their
summer vacations?