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English Senior High

得点源のために自作のテンプレ使用してます。 空白は気にしないでください!みづらくてごめんなさい。添削お願いします😌

以下の TOPIC について, あなたの意見とその理由を2つ書きなさい。 POINTS は理由を書く際の参考となる観点を示したものです。 ただし, これら以外 の観点から理由を書いてもかまいません。 ●語数の目安は 80語~100語です。 例題 09 とくちょう TOPIC <nI 31れた。 Today, some companies allow their employees to wear casual clothes like jeans or T-shirts. Do you think the number of such companies will increase in the future? POINTS nエうなエ バふのに" Business culture とう思り ● Comfort Fashion (解答 I think that more companies will allow employees to wear clothes like jeans or T-shirts. By doing so, they can make their workers happy. These clothes are more comfortable than dress clothes, so workers will be more relaxed and able to enjoy their work. Second, many companies want to help the environment. If employees are allowed to wear casual clothes, they will be cooler. Because of this, companies Won't have to use air conditioners as much, which will reduce the amount of energy used. So, more companies will allow employees to wear casual clothes to work. (96 語) (2016年度第1回) one (~) after another [the other] 次々と 137 on the contrary それどころか (every) once ina while 時々 筆記 4

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English Senior High

2011年北海道大学の英作文の添削をおねがいします。questionCです。 字数が足りていませんが、それ以外の部分をおねがいします。

Australia, the United States, and urban India. Rend the following passage and answer questions A through C in English. while their wives work outside the home, Stay-at-home dads are also called stay- Stay-at-home dads are married fathers with children who care for their family domestic burden has led some couples to completely reverse their roles. The number of stay-at-home dads is starting to increase in Britain, Canada, 「husband who can do the housework, such as shopping, cooking, and looking alter the children. The widespread expectation that men should share the vin England showed that 75 percent of women in their twenties prefer a 38 on were breadwinners and women were caregivers. Arecent Traditionally, Survey can Many stay-at-home dads take great pleasure in showing affection to their children. Their wives can pursue careers without worrying about teaching family values or paying for child care. Research suggests that children of stay- athome dads often benefit from strong bonds with both parents, whereas the father's role ina stay-at-home mom household is less influential. Although the number of stay-at-home dads is increasing, it remains small Compared to the total number of fathers. In the United States, the government estimates that in 2009 there were 158,000 stay-at-home dads, a mere 0.2 percent of 67.8 million fathers. In Australia, about 1 percent of fathers are stay-at-home dads. In urban India, one estimate suggests 3 percent of fathers stay at home full-time. Some stay-at-home dads suffer from social stigma. Many people, including stay-at-home moms, do not understand why a man would choose to give up his career to care for his family full-time. Being a stay-at-home dad can also be career suicide. Many employers view stay-at-home dads as lacking ambition and commitment. Losing professional skills may prevent stay-at-home dads from returning to the workforce.

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