英検のライティング書きました！ 添削はチャッピーにお願いしようかなと思うのですが、チャッピーに採点してもらった際に推定スコアが自分が思うより高すぎたので750点中何点くらいの英作文なのかを教えていただきたいです！ TOPIC: Will artificial intelli... Read More

どのように書けばいいか分かりません

Household Food Waste (45%) Industrial Food Waste -Food Manufacturing Industry (21%) Food Waste Min Japan 6.4 Milion Tona Food Wholesale Business (3%) -Food Retail (10%) (参考) Restaurant Industry (21%) 英語 C Lesson4 より 1. Why do you think so much food is thrown out? Give two reasons. 2. What should each of us do to reduce food loss and waste ? Answer the questions above in 60-80 words. 書き出し→Japan throws out more than 6 million tons of edible food every year. This is the same amount as if every Japanese threw out one bowl of rice every day. これに続くように書くこと(ここからカウント/下線部は印刷されている) 実施日: 学年末考査後最初の授業内に10分で実施します。 評価基準 語数 / 情報の活用 (各教科担当の先生から連絡) 文法・語彙 構成内容の展開 A 60~80語で書いており、且つ 学習した内容を活用しなが 情報や考えを読み手に伝 わるように工夫して書いて いる。 語数の指示に従っていない。 B または学習した内容の活用 や、読み手に伝わるような工 夫がある程度できている。 語数が著しく不足している。 C または必要な情報や考えが 不足していて内容がまとま っていない。 致命的な文法・語法の問いに対する理由2つおよび自分の考え ミスがない。 を述べ、それぞれに対する補足説明等を書 語彙のミスは2つ以いている。 内である。 文法・語法のミスが2 文以内である。 語彙のミスは5つ以する補足説明等を書いている。 内である。 文法・語法のミスが3問いに対する答えが書かれていないか、 1 文以上である。 つしか書いていない。 または補足説明等が 同じフレーズの繰り返しがほとんどない。 問いに対する理由2つおよび自分の考え のうち1つ不足しているが、 それぞれに対 同じフレーズの繰り返しがやや多い。 語彙のミスが6つ以ない。 上である。 同じフレーズの繰り返しが多い。 英語E 教科書 p. 50-51 および英語 C Lesson4 を参考にして、自分の考えを英語で書け るようにしよう。

金沢大学2024英語の英作文の添削をしていただけませんか。見づらかったらすみません。

In my opinion, we should be promote equality and recognition of educational background. Now, stady devide continue to spread further. For example. TV problem I have watched showed a poor boy do in South Africa The boy who working housewort not have time enough to go and money enough to do To the school 26 I proved that there are many childrench would like to go to school. I believe that everyone , but they cannot do should understand those situation in which children suffer from having little money. Moreover, put into we. practice such as donating money and volunteer that we help them to study. Through those experiences, educational background may close to equality 11年

英検準一の英作文です。 添削お願いしたいです。字が汚くて文法なども間違い多いと思うんですがお願いします🙇‍♀️

重要 解答時間 25分 (解答・解説 P.200 ~2011 (3) Write an essay on the given TOPIC. Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer. Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion Suggested length: 120-150 words TOPIC Agree or disagree: Personal finance should be taught in school POINTS Risk of debt Balance of classes Financial responsibility ●Learning at home

英検二級ライティングの採点お願いします。 ТОРІС It is often said that computer games are bad for children. Do you agree with this opinion? 回答 I agree with the... Read More

なぜwhomをthe top five finalistに戻すとこの複合名詞が目的語になるのですか？？

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1〜10までなぜその答えになるか説明お願いしたいです🙇🏻‍♀️答えは丸してあります。

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ComprehensionのAとB両方分からないです。 教えてください🙇‍♀️

A Fermented foods A The special sheet Q. Listen and choose the best match for the pictures above. Part 3 fermentation Harmentéif(a)n/ rapidly rapidli dominant /dá(:)minant/ growth /grou0/ ferment(ed) /forment(id)/ soy (s51/ sauce/s5:s/ pickle(s) /pik(a)l(z)/ cuisine/kwizi:n/ exist /igzist/ collaborating /kǝlæbǝrèitin/ <collaborate naturally /næetf(ǝ)r(ǝ)li/ instead /instéd/ A Fish wrapped in the special sh Kanata introduces a variety of fermented foods in Japan Fermentation is another way to preserve food. A goo microorganism is added to the food. It grows rapid becomes the dominant microorganism present in the food and inhibits the growth of bad microorganisms. As grows, it changes proteins or sugars or both in the food and makes it more delicious. Japanese people eat many fermented foods: soy sauce miso, natto, Japanese pickles. Japanese cuisine could not exist. Without these foods Recently, collaborating with a university, a company in Japan developed a special sheet coated with a good microorganism. When you wrap meat or fish in this sheet, the good microorganism protects the food from bad microorganisms. The food naturally begins to ferment without spoiling, and its taste becomes richer and more delicious. The sheet may also solve the food waste problem. Restaurants that use the sheet can keep extra food longer instead of throwing it away. Hints for Understanding 「もし(今) 〜がなければ」 Without ~ 1.8 Without these foods, Japanese cuisine could not exist. ~がなければ Comprehension A Answer true or false. ・できないだろう (could not + 動詞の原形) 仮定法過去 1. Soy sauce, miso, and natto are Japanese fermented foods. 8 2. The special sheet for keeping food was developed by a company in the USA. 3. If restaurants wrap meat or fish in the special sheet, they will throw away less extra food. B Fill in the blanks. 1. Fermentation process A (① ) microorganism is (2 It grows rapidly and slows the (3 microorganisms. ) to the food. ) of (① ) proteins and (6 ) in the food. The food becomes more (⑦ ➡It (6 2. The special sheet The sheet (① \I/ ) the food from (2 ) microorganisms ) microorganism. because it is coated with a (3 GO Give Your Opinion A: Have you eaten fermented foods recently? B: OK, let me see. I ate ① natto How about you?

コンマ以降が文章になっていて、C以外は確実に接続詞ではないと考え消去法でDを選んだのですが、 解説がどういうことを言っているのかわかりません。

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日本の学校の9月入学の是非について100字程度で述べなさい という英作の問題です 波線を引いたところは表現が不安な箇所です。訂正あればお願いします。字数が足りていないので付け足せるところも教えて欲しいです 見にくくてすみません🙇

4. 将来 さんせい 日本人留学やすい 日本人留学しやすい →高い英語 海外から受け入れやすい能力みにつく →日本の経済 発展かつやく 海外は9月から 海外からも L → 9日入学 日本の犬 優秀な契村増→経ざい 日本の大学レベルアップ 日本人学べる I believe that Japanise school introduce Tapahushould allowse school allow to start September. School in This shift would make for Japanese students to study abload and for students from abrad to Come to Japan. In other country, the, because In other country, most school start in September Japanese school took Therefore more students from abroad. Japanese students would learn English skill to high level and these who may play an important role in Japanese economy and development in the future would be increasing and work for the reason mentioned above. I am Convinced that Japan should allow school to start in September 35 Thi n メジア 問題番号 96