英検二級の英作文を書いてみたので添削お願いします🙇🏻‍♀️ such as が出てきた時の最初の意見主張がこれで大丈夫なのかも教えてください！文法的におかしいところもたくさんあると思うので詳しく説明していただきたいです💦

をよく FA Bi TOPIC od mort Blo These days, many novels are turned into movies. Do you think the number of such movies will increase in the future? POINTS ● Image ● Income • Quality ton ob zob Sd bas ninge

この英文の添削をお願いします🙇

Expressing Post-reading Activity Express your opinions on one of the following questions in more than 50 words. Questions A. Which do you think is better, living with only a few things or with a lot of things? B. Where can you find an example of the "less is more" principle around you? C. Any other ideas? Expressions 【比較する】 Compared to ~,... (~と比べると...) ~ is similar to ... (~は...と類似している) For me, ~ is better. (私にとっては〜のほうがよりよい) 心を整えることができる。 I think living with only a few things is better. There are some benefit from organized. get unnecessary information and reduce our stress. Study work and so on room. First, because we, will not Second, we can concentrate on we can prepare our mind ¥30 compared to live with To live with a lot of lot, things. Moreover, motivation for them increases. Third, can be expected good luck. Someone understand It can "60" these benefit, but they cannot arrange the room member of them. However, I'm a our behavior can change from a small action. We will be happier if we can change

「昨年と比べて100万円から110万円への10％の売り上げの増加」というフレーズなのですが、前置詞を入れろという問題を出されました。last yearの前はcompared withでもいいそうですが、カッコはひとつで２つの前置詞の可能性があるそうです。頭が混乱しています。... Read More

写真の黄色い線の部分の文構造を教えていただきたいです🙇 また、 ①ifは「ーかどうか」で訳していいのか ②thisは何を指しているか ③itは何を指しているか も教えていただきたいです。 よろしくお願いします💦

Phil Hello. This is 6 Minute English from BBC Learning English. I'm Phil. Beth And I'm Beth. Phil So, Beth, we're talking about the best education systems in the world today. You went to school here in Britain. What do you think of the British education system? Do you think it could be the best? Beth I think that it's quite good, there's probably a couple of things that I personally would change about it, but I would say it's quite good, but maybe not the best in the world. Phil Well, in this programme, we're going to be talking about the Pisa rankings. Beth The rankings are based on tests carried out by the OECD, that's an international organisation, every three years. The tests attempt to show which countries are the most effective at teaching maths, science and reading. But is that really possible to measure? Well, here is former BBC education correspondent Sean Coughlan talking to BBC World Service programme 'The Global Story'. Sean Coughlan When they were introduced first of all, that was a very contentious idea, because people said 'how can you possibly compare big countries... how can you compare America to Luxembourg or to, you know, or to parts of China, or whatever?' Phil Sean said that the tests were contentious. If something is contentious, then it is something that people might argue about it's controversial. So, at first, Pisa tests were contentious because not everyone believed it was fair to compare very different countries. Beth Phil, I've got a question for you about them. So, in 2022, Singapore was top of the reading rankings. But which of these countries came second? Was it: a) The USA? b) Ireland? or, c) The UK? Phil I think it might be b) Ireland. Beth OK. Well, we will find out if that's correct at the end of the programme. A common pattern in the Pisa rankings is that the most successful countries tend to be smaller. Talking to BBC World Service programme 'The Global Story', Sean Coughlan tells us that many large countries from Western Europe don't score that highly in the rankings. Sean Coughlan They're being outpaced and outperformed by these fast, upcoming countries - you know, Singapore, or Estonia, or Taiwan, or those sort of places which we don't historically think of as being economic rivals, but I suppose the argument for Pisa tests is, if you want to have a knowledge economy, an economy based on skills, this is how you measure it. Phil We heard that many large European countries are being outpaced by smaller nations. If someone outpaces you, they are going faster than you - at a higher pace.

教えてほしいです

13 次の日本文にあう英文になるように, □(1) 眠気を感じて, 私は草の上に横になった。 に適する語を書きなさい。 □(2) ロンドンで生まれたので、彼女は英語を流暢に話す。 sleepy, I laid myself on the grass. in London, she speaks English fluently. □(3) 彼女は泳げないので、海が好きではない。 to swim, she doesn't like the sea. ike the sea □ (4) 昨年に比べて,今年は冬の訪れが早い。 Winter has come early I love with last year. □(5) 率直に言えば、私は彼の歌はあまり好きではない。 Frankly door food. other food, I don't like his songs very much. it was totally con 4 次の文中の下線部を ( 内の指示にしたがって書きかえなさい。 □(1) As I have never read the book, I can't criticize it. (分詞構文に) Oine plane □ (2) Properly trained, dogs can do some tricks. (副詞節に) thers, I can't criticize it. dogs can do some tricks. □ (3) Since their conversation was in Chinese, I didn't understand a word. (分詞構文に) を用いて) □ (4) Lost in thought, he didn't notice us. (副詞節に) I didn't understand a word. □ (5) She knelt on the floor, and she closed her eyes. (with を用いて) She knelt on the floor, □ (6) Printed in haste, the book had many misprints. (副詞節に) he didn't notice us. the book had many misprints.

英検2級のWritingです。 アドバイス等よろしくお願いします！

●以下のTOPICについて、 あなたの意見とその理由を2つ書きなさい。 ●POINTSは理由を書く際の参考となる観点を示したものです。ただし,これら以外の観点から理由 を書いてもかまいません。 ●語数の目安は80語~100語です。 TOPIC In many Japanese universities, students have to take gym classes. Do you think gym classes are important for university students? POINTS ●Choice ● Health ● Future inatoga ba nonnodo

なぜcompared withはダメなのですか？ 日本語的にいいように思えるのですが

5 The campaign also aims to raise discussion on wider issues [( G ) ] gender and children's books, such as the fact that male characters still exceed female characters by two to one in children's picture books, or the belief, often expressed by publishers, that boys won't read books with girl leads6. These issues are connected to a wider culture of inequality. The (5)

(2)の問題です。 英文自身の意味は理解できたのですが、文法構造を見て訳していこうとするとwithの訳し方に悩みました。 模範解答は｢かつ｣と訳されており、withの文法的意味でこのような訳し方を見たことがありませんでした。 私が単に知らなかったことが原因だとしたら、それは... Read More

X (2) (2)In addition, 19.6% of students reported that, though they knew the dangers, they still used SNS because that is “what everyone does.” In contrast with the students' responses, their parents and teachers were more cautious about the risk associated with SNS use, with teachers slightly more likely to see high risk. 問2 次の日本語を英語に訳しなさい。 B 「時間」とした力が日然である。 語彙・表現 transportation 輸送, 運輸/ suitable 形適している / delivery 名配送/ destination 名目的地 (2) 例 それに加えて, 生徒たちの19.6パーセントがSNS利用の危険性を知って いるが、それでも 「みんながやっていること」 だからという理由でSNSを 利用すると報告していた。 生徒たちの回答とは対照的に、彼らの親や教師た ちは、SNSの利用に伴う危険性をより警戒しており、かつ教師たちの方が 危険性が高いとみなす可能性がわずかに高かった。 解説 be cautious about ~で 「~を警戒している」 の意。 associated with SNS use は the riskを後ろから修飾している。 with teachers slightly more likely は付 帯状況の表現で, teachersを主語としslightly more likely to see を述部とし て訳すと自然な日本語になる。 [語彙・表現 in contrast with ~ ~と対照的に/associated 形関連する/ slightly わ ずかに/ (be) likely to do ~しそう(である)

英語の長文です 文法表現があるところが知りたいです！

UNIT 5 Reading Passage 5 10 15 20 20 25 Listening There is a saying in France that states: "The government could fall, the Louvre¹ could be broken into, or aliens could land on Earth, but if any of these things happened during the Tour de France, no one would notice." The Tour de France is the most famous cycling race in the world. The which is held in July every year, consists of twenty one-day stages, plus several rest days. The course follows a clockwise route around France, and often neighboring countries, including Luxembourg, Belgium, and Italy. The winner is the rider who completes all twenty stages of the race in the shortest overall time. race, The Tour de France first started on July 1, 1903, when sixty cyclists left from in front of The Alarm Clock Café, just outside of Paris, and rode 467 kilometers to Lyon. The first race consisted of six legs, each of which was about 400 kilometers long. At that time, there were no rest days the winner was the rider who finished the race in the shortest total time. The winner of the first Tour de France, Maurice Garin, the most popular cyclist in France at that time, received 2,000 francs (about $350). It took him 94 hours and 33 minutes to ride all 2,428 kilometers of the race, three hours faster than the runner-up.² Over the weeks during which the race was run, the idea of the Tour de France slowly caught on with the people of France. The race has been held every year since that time, except during the years of World Wars I and II.³ The Tour de France has developed several special honors for which racers compete. The highest honor is the "yellow jersey." Henri Desgranges, the founder of the race, introduced the yellow jersey in 1919 to show the leading racer each day of the Tour de France. Each day, the officials who keep track of all of the riders' times compare each rider's total time up to that point. The racer with the lowest overall time wears the yellow jersey during the following day's race. Other honors include the "green jersey," which is given to the best sprinter, and the "polka dot jersey," a white jersey with red dots, for the best rider in the mountains along the route. Over the years of the race, the competitors have gained a reputation for good sportsmanship. For example, if a lead rider falls off his bike, it is common for the following riders to slow down to allow the fallen rider to catch up. Some watchers are surprised by this, but as German rider Jan Ullrich, who came in runner-up in 2002 after waiting for winner Lance Armstrong, says, "Of course I would wait. If I would have won this race by taking advantage of someone's bad luck, then the race was not worth winning." 1 the Louvre a famous museum in Paris 2 runner-up someone who comes second in a race or other competition 3 World Wars I and II 1914-1918 and 1939 - 1945 abent ages

英語の長文です どこに文法表現があるか知りたいです！ よろしくお願いします。

5 UNIT3 Reading Passage 10 15 20 20 25 30 Listening When important events are happening around the world, most people turn to traditional media sources, such as CNN and BBC,¹ for their news. However, during the invasion of Iraq by the United States and its allies in early 2003, a significant number of people followed the war from the point of view of an anonymous² Iraqi citizen who called himself "Salam Pax" (salam means "peace" in Arabic, and pax means "peace" in Latin). Salam Pax wrote a diary about everyday life in Baghdad during the war, and posted it on his web site. Pax's online diary was a kind of web site known as a "blog." Blogs, short for "web-logs," are online diaries usually kept by individuals, but sometimes they are written by companies and other groups of people. They are a rapidly growing type of web site on the Internet. There are estimated to be several hundred thousand blogs on the Internet, and with the popularity of other social media sites, the number of people writing online about their lives continues to grow. may find A blog differs from a traditional web site in several ways. Most importantly, it is updated much more regularly. Many blogs are updated every day, and some are updated several times a day. Also, most blogs use special software or web sites which are specifically aimed at bloggers, so you do not need to be a computer expert to create your own blog. This means that ordinary people who computers difficult to use can easily set up and start writing their own blog. In 2003, the Internet company AOL³ introduced their own blogging service, enabling its 35 million members to quickly and easily start blogging. There are many different kinds of blogs. The most popular type is an online diary of links, where the blog writer surfs the Internet and then posts links to sites or news articles that they find interesting, with a few comments about each one. Other types are personal diaries, where the writer talks about their life and feelings. Sometimes these blogs can be very personal. There is another kind of blogging, called "moblogging," short for "mobile blogging." Mobloggers use cell phones to take photo's, which are posted instantly to the Internet. When the content and images posted online involve news subjects, mobloggers become citizen journalists. In fact, the Korean web site OhMyNews was a well known source for articles from international citizen journalists. However, in 2010, OhMyNews stopped posting new articles. Instead, it is now a blog site where citizen journalists can choose what makes the headlines, or just share ideas about how regular people are changing the news world. Anyone who visits the web site of a big media company can clearly see how the idea of blogging has changed the reporting of news. Quite often, a list of reader comments follow news articles. It seems that the news is becoming less like a report or a lecture, and more like a conversation, where anyone can join in. CNN, BBC Cable News Network, British Broadcasting Corporation anonymous not named; unknown 3 AOL America Online