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Write an essay on the given TOPIC. Use TWO of the POINTS below to support your answer. Structure: introduction, main body, and conclusion Suggested length: 120-150 words TOPIC Do you think that gas-powered cars will be replaced by electric cars in the near future? 電時の排出 POINTS 走行エネルギーの asse). Environment Convenience #1124-Kat #veg Cost Industry 高速産 ・充電せった コストが高い 産業限られた 短いきが しが ・使用者が買いかえようとは 思わない 2:33. 1 充電スペースの 2015 3. cars will be replaced by electric cars I do not think that gas-powered opinion. in the near future, I have two reasons to support this One reason is that it may be not convenient for people to drive electric cars in these days society. For example, electric cars take more time to charge than gas-powered cars. Moreover, electric cars can run few distance. Onother reason is that electric cars cost a lot of money in the many situation. For example, people who use electric, cars usually sex charging places at the each houses, but they have to pay so much cash to do it, Also, they need to prepare too much money every month to charge electric Propte cash, For these reasons above, I believe that gas-powered cars will be replaced by electric cars in the near future. total: 179 words

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すみません、長文の穴埋めがわからないのでどなたか教えてくれる方がいましたら心強いです！ (1)と(2)がわかりません。

Dear Patron, Thank you for your contribution to the Sunset Maritime Museum. Our efforts to pass on our rich seacoast history to the next generation have been a phenomenal success. We were able to raise more than $60,000 this past year. There are many projects in progress and more planned for the following year. several retired sea captains have been volunteering their time for live 2. storytelling sessions, which have been getting young people interested in boating and fishing. Consequently, we hope to exceed the amount of donations this coming year. An anonymous donor has contributed $20,000 to get the ball --3--.We are delighted about this, as we anticipate remodeling costs of $100,000. We understand that everyone's resources are limited, --a- we ask that you help us spread the word by forwarding this to your family, friends and associates. The Sunset Maritime Museum is a worthy cause. Since the museum reopened, the number of people staying and working in this town after high school, as well as those attending college and coming back here to work in family businesses has increased almost 10%. Help save our local heritage. Your help willbe appreciated for generations to come. SVBd (8) 1. (A) Actually, there were at least a dozen new projects involving seabirds. (B) On the other hand, we didn't finish the report to our shareholders in time. (C) Otherwise, there was no information about the matter that could be shared. 0ubeem.ol opiod (D) Nonetheless, we project we will need further funding to meet operating Costs. 46 00 2. (A) For example, (B) However, (C) Notwithstanding, (D) On the other hand, 3emit ynsm visil of beleva) evsdinrelbbne eus eit GAe 1w () の O0

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Topic Agree or Disagree: Help from the local community is crucial for raising children POINTS → discipline、safety、working parents、privacy 「肯定意見」 Iagree with the statement that help from the local community is crucial for raising children. There are two reasons to support this contention: the promotion in working for parents and the respect of discipline. These days, almost all the companies in Japan are facing the problem which is how they treat their employees who have children. In fact, these people, especially women, have difficulty in working. What the matters worse, many of them are forced to quit their job because of raising children. To deal with this problem, it is necessary for the local community to help parents raise children. Moreover, help from others will lead to promote the rate of women who continued working after childbirth. In other words, thanks to help from the local society, Japanese companies can improve their working environment. In addition to this, children will be sociable and polite if they are taken care of by another person of family. Also, children will realize the importance of cooperation with others. For these reasons, I strongly believe the local society should do more for parents who raise children.

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Reorder the words and phrases to make imperative sentences. Write complete sentences. 59. the children / tell / to hide 60. from one / count / to fifty / then 61. “Here I come!”/ say / very loudly / after counting. 62. find / run / and / the children

ここの問題を教えて頂けるとたすかります。

Reorder the words and phrases to make imperative sentences. Write complete sentences. 59. the children / tell / to hide 60. from one / count / to fifty / then 61. “Here I come!”/ say / very loudly / after counting, 62. find / run / and / the children

英検準1級の英作文の添削をお願いします。見にくいところがあれば言ってください。

Date No. Topic: Agre or disage : Lite in Japan is becoming more strertal I dsagee with the idea that lüfe in Japan is becaming more strest.l. I have two rensons to support my opinion in terms of househald applianes and health Firt, hausehold appliances are becaming more usetul so Our lives will be convenient. for erample, there is an auto cleaner. We do not have to clean aurselves because auo cleaners can clean theicelves. Thanks to them, we can have free time a to rest. 2 Secnd hedty focd is increosing these doys, s0 the nunber of peple have an illnes decrease. If we have an illness, we will not die e medical Technelogy is better than pact. It is goad for us to live Commericanly. becans 3 For these resons, life in Japan is not becoming. more stresstal.

英検準1級の英作文の添削をしていただきたいです。 Points Time management Flexibility Cost Communication

No. Topic: Agree or dingre.' The nmber of peaple who chosse to Work decade Caming remotely will increase in the I agree with the idea that the mumber of peaple who chose to work remotely will increase in the coming decade. I have two resons fo supput my opinicon in terms of tine management and commrunication. Fisst, people can reduce their time of commate Some people Spend a lot al time tor compmute、 t is good for thern to Work reoutely They wauld not have to in the fatune. The nunber of workplace would decrese. ge theic work ploce. Second, it is easy to Communicate each other peaple. Worbers who hove a Computer can talk with ather workers when meeting in persen is very difficat.Working remotly gerson will be very conuerient. For these reasons. I think many people will choose to work remotely in the coming decade.

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