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4 次の Learning foreign languages についての英文を読んで, あなたの考えを, [条件]と [記入上の 注意]に従って40 語以上50語程度の英語で書きなさい。*印のついている語句には, 本文のあとに [注)があります。 (10点) pole icol You have studied English for three years or more. The only foreign language most students in Japan study is English. But in many other countries, high school students learn more than one foreign language. For example, as a second foreign language, many high schoo! students in (Germany) learn French or Spanish, and many students in China learn French, Spanish or Japanese. Some people say that high school students in Japan should learn English and another foreign language. However, others say that they should *focus on studying only English. Which VOn doo! blnd idea do you agree with? 問 *9 【注) focus on~ ·~に集中させる bu no9ue coubg J [条件) 下線部の質問に対するあなたの考えを,その理由が伝わるように書きなさい。 [記入上の注意) の【記入例】にならって, 解答欄の下線 toomoe ape の上に1語ずつ書きなさい。 つot *符号(,.?!など)は語数に含めません。 * 50 語を超える場合は, 解答欄の破線 で示された行におさまるように書きなさい。

英検準一級ライティングです。 添削等お願いしますm(_ _)m points ・construction costs ・effect on local people ・spending by visitors ・the environment

Q, is it a good idea that governments to build tourist sites such as theme parks and museums. A,lagree with the idea that local governments should build tourist sites such as theme parks and museums. This will be an opportunity to save money in order to deal with accidents and keep their population. Firstly, if local governments do not build tourist sites, the government can save a lot of money because construction costs are very expensive. Thus the governments can use the money in order to treat troubles such as epidemics or disasters. Moreover, if the governments construct tourist sites, more and more tourists visit the local regions. Thus, the number of people who want to live there quietly increases. For these reasons, I do not think it necessary that local governments should build tourist sites such as theme parks and museums.

英検準一級ライティングです。 添削等お願いしますm(_ _)m points, ・globalization ・Government policies ・price ・quality

Q, Do you think that Japanese consumers will buy more imported products in the future. A,I do not agree with the idea that Japanese consumers will buy more imported products. This will be an opportunity to save money and to keep products working longer. Firstly, the consumers do not buy imported products, the consumers are able to save money because most imported products are expensive. Thus, the consumers can spend their money doing their favorite things. Moreover, if the consumers buy not imported products but products made in Japan, the consumers can use the products for a long time because imported products are fragile such as the smartphones made in china. Thus, the consumers will not need to buy one again. For these reasons, I don't think Japanese consumers will buy imported products in the future.

英検準一級ライティングです。 添削等お願いしますm(_ _)m

Q, Japanese companies should hire more foreign workers? A,lagree with the idea that Japanese companies should hire more foreign workers. That is because this will be an opportunity to take in creative ideas and boost the abilities of staff of the companies. Firstly, if Japanese companies hire more foreign workers the companies are able to look at things from a point of view. Thus, the companies can create products not only for Japanese people but also for people all over the world. Moreover, if more and more foreign people are becoming members of Japanese companies, Japanese workers more often speak foreign languages. Thus, the people can practice speaking foreign languages and the companies can improve the quality of their staffs. For these reasons, I think it necessary that Japanese companies should hire more foreign workers.

英検準1級ライティングです。 添削、アドバイス等お願いしますm(_ _)m points ・accidents ・crime ・food ・technology

Q, more needs to be done to improve public safety? A,l agree with the idea that we should do a lot to improve public safety. I have two reasons. The First reason is that the number of criminals is increasing in the last few years. That is because these days, polices are so lazy that they tend to overlook the trivial troubles of criminals. Thus, governments should force lazy polices to work harder. The second reason is that more and more car accidents are happening recently. That is because some people who drink or are not attentive drive cars. Thus, we should introduce car services to improve public safety more rapidly. For these reasons, I think it necessary that more needs should do a lot to improve public safety.

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Grade Pre-2 5 ライティング あなたは,外国人の知り合いから以下の QUESTION をされました。 QUESTION について、あなたの意見とその理由を2つ英文で書きなさい。 語数の目安は50語~60語です。 解答は、解答用紙のB面にあるライティング解答欄に書きなさい。なお,解答欄の 外に書かれたものは採点されません。 解答が QUESTION に対応していないと判断された場合は、0点と採点されることが あります。QUESTION をよく読んでから答えてください。 QUESTION Do you think it is a good idea for people to have a car?

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【6】 次の文章を読んで,あとの設問に答えなさい。 We can also get clues from non-living things in nature. One example is Othe honeycomb, or bee's nest. 2( of / is / hexagonal tubes / a honeycomb / composed), which makes it very strong, though there are a lot of empty spaces. The honeycomb structure is ideal for products that need to be both strong and light, such as airplanes and racing cars. Now( 3 )you know a lot ofexamples of *biomimetics," you can understand how great nature is. Every living thing has evolved to live longer and more comfortably in harsh environments. By studying them, we can find clues to help improve our own lives. So, we could say that we are oY surrounded by ④undiscovered treasures in nature.