見辛かったらすみませんが、問2の英作文の添削をしていただきたいです🤲

2015年度 英語 13 They should not have to lose their livelihoods. Secondlv. although I agree 次の英文は、英語のディベートの授業での対話です。この対話を読み,下の問い に答えなさい。 with Keiko that climate change is a serious problem, I think air travel is a much less damaging source of carbon pollution than, for example, burnimg MR. ROBERTS: Good morning, everybody. Today we have the first of our Coal. We should address these more serious causes first. Finally, the most student debates. The topic this morning is air travel, and the argument is. 法 important reason is the issue of freedom. People in a democracy expect the “Domestic air travel in Japan should be discouraged." Keiko will first argue right to travel as they wish. It has made our lives more convenient and in favor of the proposal and Junko will speak against. Over to you, Keiko. created more opportunities for everyone. We should not reduce our quality of life. Thank you for listening. KEIKO: Good morning, everybody. I am going to speak today in favor of the proposal. Limitless air travel inside Japan is a luxury that we can no longer MR. ROBERTS: Thank you to our two speakers. Now, are there any afford. The main reason is that it is extremely damaging to the questions from the audience? environment. The carbon gases produced by aircraft are very high and are a 頭人 proven cause of global warming. Therefore, we should try and reduce air 問1 次の(1)~(5)の文について, 本文の内容と一致するものには○.一致しないも travel as much as possible to protect the environment, not only for Japan but のには×を,それぞれ解答欄に記入しなさい。 also for the whole world. Secondly, air travel is actually unnecessary within the four islands of Japan. Now, while I appreciate that travel to Okinawa is (1) Keiko's main reason for opposing domestic air travel is the damage it a different case, there are efficient train services throughout Japan that are causes to the environment. h fast and environmentally friendly. These make an excellent alternative to air (2) Keiko thinks that air travel is cheap and efficient. flights, so there is really no need to use airplanes in most cases. Finally, (3) Keiko recommends that people travel between Okinawa and mainland there is an economic reason. Air travel is expensive for passengers because Japan by ship. the price of fuel keeps increasing, but airline companies are still struggling (4) Junko thinks that climate change is not an important problem. to make profits. Moreover, regional airports often cannot attract enough (5) Junko thinks that a lot of jobs will be lost if air travel is reduced. customers, and, overall, the industry is not cost-effective, It's time to admit that air travel is too damaging and expensive to be sustainable. Thank you. 問2 次の質問に英語で答えなさい。 Which of the two speakers do you more agree with? Give at least one JUNKO: Thank you, Keiko. I am going to disagree with the proposal for three reason for your answer. (解答欄:13.8cm×4行) reasons. Firstly, I think there is a strong economic case to support flying. Many jobs depend on air travel, not just the pilots and cabin staff, but also people who work in airports or for airlines, or who rely on fast transport.

見辛かったらすみませんが、問2の英作文の添削をしていただきたいです🤲

2015年度 英語 13 They should not have to lose their livelihoods. Secondlv. although I agree 次の英文は、英語のディベートの授業での対話です。この対話を読み,下の問い に答えなさい。 with Keiko that climate change is a serious problem, I think air travel is a much less damaging source of carbon pollution than, for example, burnimg MR. ROBERTS: Good morning, everybody. Today we have the first of our Coal. We should address these more serious causes first. Finally, the most student debates. The topic this morning is air travel, and the argument is. 法 important reason is the issue of freedom. People in a democracy expect the “Domestic air travel in Japan should be discouraged." Keiko will first argue right to travel as they wish. It has made our lives more convenient and in favor of the proposal and Junko will speak against. Over to you, Keiko. created more opportunities for everyone. We should not reduce our quality of life. Thank you for listening. KEIKO: Good morning, everybody. I am going to speak today in favor of the proposal. Limitless air travel inside Japan is a luxury that we can no longer MR. ROBERTS: Thank you to our two speakers. Now, are there any afford. The main reason is that it is extremely damaging to the questions from the audience? environment. The carbon gases produced by aircraft are very high and are a 頭人 proven cause of global warming. Therefore, we should try and reduce air 問1 次の(1)~(5)の文について, 本文の内容と一致するものには○.一致しないも travel as much as possible to protect the environment, not only for Japan but のには×を,それぞれ解答欄に記入しなさい。 also for the whole world. Secondly, air travel is actually unnecessary within the four islands of Japan. Now, while I appreciate that travel to Okinawa is (1) Keiko's main reason for opposing domestic air travel is the damage it a different case, there are efficient train services throughout Japan that are causes to the environment. h fast and environmentally friendly. These make an excellent alternative to air (2) Keiko thinks that air travel is cheap and efficient. flights, so there is really no need to use airplanes in most cases. Finally, (3) Keiko recommends that people travel between Okinawa and mainland there is an economic reason. Air travel is expensive for passengers because Japan by ship. the price of fuel keeps increasing, but airline companies are still struggling (4) Junko thinks that climate change is not an important problem. to make profits. Moreover, regional airports often cannot attract enough (5) Junko thinks that a lot of jobs will be lost if air travel is reduced. customers, and, overall, the industry is not cost-effective, It's time to admit that air travel is too damaging and expensive to be sustainable. Thank you. 問2 次の質問に英語で答えなさい。 Which of the two speakers do you more agree with? Give at least one JUNKO: Thank you, Keiko. I am going to disagree with the proposal for three reason for your answer. (解答欄:13.8cm×4行) reasons. Firstly, I think there is a strong economic case to support flying. Many jobs depend on air travel, not just the pilots and cabin staff, but also people who work in airports or for airlines, or who rely on fast transport.

1️⃣の答えを3つとも教えてください。〇は気にしないでください！！

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画像の(3)の答えがseatedなのですが解説お願いしたいです。

(1) Alice admitted ( (2) I tried ( )a big mistake. [ make ] で合刺意の J an apple pie and it was delicious. [ bake ] ) until the plane has come to a complete stop. [ seat ] bodetsw \no herause of the strong wind. [ hear ] 3) Please remain ( 4) Andy kept ( 91g )about his personal history. [ talk ]

1と3の答えはこれで合っていますか？ また、2の答えがわかりません💦 教えていただけると助かります🙇‍♀️ よろしくお願いします！🙇‍♀️

B ある学校の英語部の活動で、インターナショナル·スポーツ·フェスティバルのボラン ティア募集をすることとなった。次の英文は、校内放送で募集を呼びかけることを計画した 生徒が書いた放送原稿である。この原稿に対する先生のコメントを読み,コメント中の空所 (1 )~ ( 3 ) にそれぞれ最も適当な英語を補え。 We need volunteers to help with International Sports Festival in Japan. No experience is necessary but energetic people who wish to help are best. Familiarity with English or other foreign languages are a plus. You must be at least 16 years of age and be possible to work 8 to 20 hours per week. If you are interested in helping, please don't forget coming to the volunteer meeting this Friday at 7 p.m. at the Main Campus Hall. Teacher: This script is wonderful! I hope a lot of students will apply for this project. But grammatically, you should change three points. Look at the underlined parts. In the first paragraph, the *subject in the third sentence is “familiarity," not “languages,” so the correct *verb form is “(1 )." In the sentence in the second paragraph, the subject is “You," a person, and in this case, you cannot use “possible.” Instead, “ ( 2)” should be used. In the sentence in the third paragraph, you used “don't forget coming,” but we use that to talk about the past. You should use “don't forget ( 3 ) ” instead because you are talking about the future.

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左の写真の四角13番の④の「My father let me use his computer(父は私に彼のコンピュータを使わせてくれました。)」と右の写真の3番の(3)の「My father lets me play the video game.」の文で、「let」に「... Read More

AlI S WUT U3 OTTし 4 What made you sad? ③ The letter made me excited. ⑤ Practicing baseball makes them tired. 13 PROGRAM 3-3 OI made my dog drink milk. ② Taku always makes me laugh. ③I helped my mother cook dinner last evening. ④ My father let me use his computer. 6 Good sleep makes you health 14 ★くり返し PROGRAM 3のまとめ O We call this statue a komainu in Japan. ② What do you call your si 3 Who calls you Kazuyan? ⑤ Talking too much made the girls tired. ⑥ The picture made the chil. O Rei let her dog swim in the pool. 8 Let me know your name, please. ③I didn't help my brother do his homework. - My brother does. ④ The movie made us 15 PROGRAM 4-1 O The boy playing soccer is John. ②I know the girlsdancing over the 3 The woman playing the piano is my teacher. ④I know the boy runn 6I don't know the man talking with Taku. ⑥ The girl standing by the- 6 PROGRAM 4-2 OI bought a book written in English. ② This is the cake made by Emi ③ Is that a car washed by Ken every day? ④ This is the picture taken by n ⑤I visited a temple built about 800 years ago. ⑥ I received a letter wr

「先週したこと」についての英作文です。 文字数はクリアしたんですが、 文法などに間違いがあるかもしれないので もし間違いがあれば教えていただきたいです！ こうした方がいい、などのアドバイスも 貰いたいです、、！！

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長文の下の9番の答えを教えください

measures to encourage tap water use. In Britain, bottles restrict the consumption of bottled water. In the United States, the Conference of Mayors in 2008 voted to take of water are no longer served at government meetings. 4 Around the world, many countries have started to VBWB restrict [ristrikt] consumption [kansámpJen] conference [ká:nfarans] mayor(s) [méior(z)] measure(s) [mézar(z)] 1-サムフェーし コv15しス government 5 [gávarnmont] Clearly, the movement against bottled water is growing. significant significant [signífikant] カンサプンョン B while the consumption of bottled water is a environmental concern in the developed world, the lack of concern [kansá:rn] clean drinking water is a major health problem in the developing world. developingldivelopig) The World Health Organization has 10 billion [biljan] found that over one billion people, mainly in poorer whatsoever [wAtsouévar] supplies [saplaiz] <supply portion [p5:r an] Countries, have no access to safe water whatsoever. 6 In order to improve world water supplies, some companies in the U.S. have started donating a portion of donation(s) [dounéijon(2)) sales from bottled water. Donations and lifestyle changes 15 will not immediately solve these global problems, but they direction [darékfan] are a small step in the right direction. Remember this the next time you think about buying a bottle of water. 9. in the developing worldと対比されている表現を抜き出しなさい。 3. the Conference of Mayors (全米)市長会 3. take measures 対策を講じる 10. the World Health Organization 世界保健機関 (WHO) 12. no access to safe water whatsoever = no access to safe water at all

100 times moreは何と比較しているか教えください

of the hottest environmental issues abroad is bottled 1 When thinking about the environment, the Japanese should take time to reconsider their lifestyles. Today, one bottled [bá:tld] ds Ales os issue(s) [ju:(z)] industry[indastri] water. Not only does the bottled water industry cost tne deal [di:1] planet a great deal in energy and materials, it has beCome a symbol of First World excess. 5 excess [iksés] ironic [airá:nik] wealthy[welli] willing[wilig) 2 It is ironic that, although consumers in wealthy Countries have safe drinking water, they are willing to pay up to 100 times more for bottled water because of clever packaging and attractive names. All the development that o has brought drinkable tap water to everyone in Japan packaging [pékidzig) drinkable [drigkabl] tap [tep] seems somehow wasted. Why people prefer to buy small amounts of water in PET bottles remains a mystery.. 1ル 3 The bottled water industry makes large profits while mystery[místri] profit(s) [prá:fat(s)] refrigerated [rifridsarèitid] shelves [felvz] <shelf consuming, large amounts of energy. Vending machines 15 and refrigerated store shelves run 24 hours a day. PET bottles require costly disposal. Bottled water is an costly [ks:stli disposal [dispóuzl developed (divelapt] ecological [:kalá:dgikl] impact [impackt] example of how industries in developed countries increase consumer choice while ignoring the ecological impact of their actions. dran 20 oftesup 00 01 mov alte obesup boog 9. 100 times moreとは, 何と比較してですか。 ggy 6. *First World 11. *tap water btorio m yd moe 4. Not only does the bottled ~, (but) it has : not onlyが文頭に来た倒置 13. PET [pét] ポリエチレンテレフタレート 18. developed country → develonin