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英検準一級の要約問題です。 添削していただけないでしょうか?🙇‍♀️

英検公式サンプル問題 ⚫ Instructions: Read the article below and summarize it in your own words as far as possible in English. ⚫ Suggested length: 60-70 words Write your summary in the space provided on your answer sheet. Any writing outside the space will not be graded. From the 1980s to the early 2000s, many national museums in Britain were charging their visitors entrance fees. The newly elected government, however, was supportive of the arts. It introduced a landmark policy to provide financial aid to museums so that they would drop their entrance fees. As a result, entrance to many national museums, including the Natural History Museum, became free of charge. Supporters of the policy said that as it would widen access to national museums, it would have significant benefits. People, regardless of their education or income, would have the opportunity to experience the large collections of artworks in museums and learn about the country's cultural history. Although surveys indicated that visitors to national museums that became free increased by an average of 70 percent after the policy's introduction, critics claimed the policy was not completely successful. This increase, they say, mostly consisted of the same people visiting museums many times. Additionally, some independent museums with entrance fees said the policy negatively affected them. Their visitor numbers decreased because people were visiting national museums to avoid paying fees, causing the independent museums to struggle financially.

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English Senior High

英検準一級のライティング問題です。 添削お願いします。字数稼ぎの表現などがあれば教えて下さると嬉しいです!

Should people trust information on the internet ? 120~150 words 思わない。 1.ネットには、うその情報が多く書かれている。 それは私たちを幸せにすることもあるが、不幸せにすることのほうが多い。 すべての情報に信じすぎてしまうと、何を信じたらよいかわからなくなり、 SNSにうかれてしまう。 2、あまり公式でないネットショッピングサービスを使うと、だまされることがある。 レ例えば、普通の時よりも安く売ったり、 高買う お金だけ払って商品が届かない など 気づかずに個人情報を入力してしまうと、その後も被害を受ける 可能性がある。 I think That people shuld not Trst infomation on the Internet, I have two reasons, First, information on the internet is consisted of us unhappy. And, If we lie information and tmstinformation. If we cannot judge such infinatin information makes T Trust all information we do not understand what we believe. So, SNS made us tired、 Second, when we use unofficial online shopping service, we may deceive. For example, we may buy things expensive price than usually price, we but and Pay money we cant get goods. If we do not realize that we put into personal information, we can laffect damage after. For these two reasons, I think that people ought to trust information on the internet, 」 101 118

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