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Topic, should campanies be required to
produce goods that are easy to recycle?
Some people say that it is not necessary for
companies be required to produce goods.
- that are easy to recycle. On the other hand,
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< others say not.
I agree with the latter idea and have two
6 reasons why I think so.
First of all, I will explain that from point of
view of pollution.
, Receatry, it is matter that a lot of things
c. which can not recycle increase day by day.
and the place where collect garbage is
a becoming full in Japan.
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Therefore, in order to make the world better,
If it is important to recycle easily.
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Second of all, I will explain that from point
of view of company profits.
To clarify this, if the company use goods.
that are easy to recycle, they can
reduce costs to import a lot of materials.
It will lead to increase Custmer's income.
According to the reasons mentioned above,
Companies should be required to produce
2 goods that are easy to recycle.
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Answer 1

@#$&

Your articles are complete in structure, but there are some grammar mistakes.
1.It is (adj.) for (n.) to (v.).
2.Lead to + N/Ving (“to” is preposition in this phrase)
A point I don’t understand is why recyclable goods can reduce costs to import a lot of materials for companies, or I lack economic knowledge……?