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かい

青だけで書いたのが正しい分構造なんですけど
何がダメですか?右のやつは
SV and SVならぜったい SVの天秤になるのですか

that people themselves must have responsibility for developing and changing the world in
which they live. As people who live together, we cannot escape the thought that the terrible
occurrences that we see in developing countries are essentially our problems. They are our
responsibility.
As thinking creatures, we have the ability to contemplate the lives of others. Our sense
responsibility need not relate only to the distress that our own behavior may have caused;
We often feel a more general responsibility relating to the miseries that we see around us and
that lie within our power to help remedy, and to deny this responsibility would be to miss
something central about our social existence. What is important is not so much having exact
rules about how we ought to behave, as recognizing, when we come to make the choices we
face, that we are human beings, like those who are suffering these miseries.
語句リスト】
1パラグラフ
merit
appreciate
長所, 功績
・・・を正しく評価する
elieve in A
Aの存在を信じる
claim
主張
lowing A
Aの後で
responsibility
責任
counter
・・・に遭遇する
supposed to do
・・・すると思われる
tati
terrible
occurrence
developing country 登展途上国
ひどい
出来事

To that people themselves must have responsibility for developing and changing the world in
which they live. As people who live together, we cannot escape the thought that the terrible
occurrences that we see in developing countries are essentially our problems. They are our
responsibility.
As thinking creatures, we have the ability to contemplate the lives of others. Our sense
of responsibility need not relate only to the distress that our own behavior may have caused;
we often feel a more general responsibility relating to the miseries that we see around us and
that lie within our power to help remedy, and to deny this responsibility would be to miss
something central about our social existence. What is important is not so much having exact
rules about how we ought to behave, as recognizing, when we come to make the choices we
face, that we are human beings, like those who are suffering these miseries.
【語句リスト】
第1パラグラフ
believe in A
merit
appreciate
長所, 功績
・・・を正しく評価する
Aの存在を信じる
claim
主張
following A
Aの後で
responsibility
責任
encounter
・・・に遭遇する
be supposed to do
God Almighty
existence
・・・すると思われる
全能なる神
terrible
Occurrence
ひどい
出来事
developing country
存在
essentially
第2パラグラフ
発展途上国
本質的に