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I didn't know that there were so many senior citizens who were Mr. Lee: You are still young, so you have a lot of time to think about your future. Are there interesting activities in our city. I can't imagine what our lives will be like when wete Mr. Lee: That's great. People are living longer now, soI think it's important to keep happy | students at the community center in the city. She is very good at calligraphy. She is | I really respect my grandmother. She teaches calligraphy to elementary schoo) | 題あり,放送はすべペて英語で行われます。 放送される内容についての質問にそれぞれ答え」 なさい。No.1~No.5 及び No.7は, 質問に対する答えとして最も適切なものを、A~D |4(After class, Akina, Hayato and Mr. Lee are talking abOUl IM I'm surprised that so many senior citizens in Singapore are still working Akina: Hayato: Me, too. older. any senior citizens you respect, Akina? Akina: glad that she can teach many children. She loves her work very much. and healthy even when we're older. 問7 本文 4の会話の中で, Akina は, 自分の祖母がどのようなことに喜んでいると述べてい ますか。日本語で書きなさい。(4点) 問8 次は,後日の Akina と Mr. Lee の会話です。自然な会話になるように,( )に適切た。 語以上の英語を書きなさい。(4点) Mr. Lee, I went to the English language school Hayato talked about before. 1 learned a lot from the senior citizens working there. Akina: Mr. Lee: I'm sure they know a lot of interesting things we don't know. ( at the English language school ? There are five teachers. Akina: Mr. Lee: I see. When senior citizens are happy and healthy, we can be happy, too. We can learn a lot from senior citizens by talking with them. 5 次の(質問)に対して, [条件]に従い,まとまった内容の文章を5文以上の英文で書きなさ (10点) [質問) What is the best way to learn English for you? (条件) 0 1文目は【質問]に対する答えを,解答欄の①に書きなさい。 く放送を聞いて答える問題台本> ※「チャイム」 これから「放送を聞いて答える問題」を始めます。 なさい。放送中メモを取ってもかまいません。 各問題について革評け 放送されま -0F 2010年

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TOEIC・English Undergraduate

英検に向けて英作文を書きました 添削や「こうしたらもっと良くなる」という点がありましたら、ぜひコメントよろしくお願いします🙇‍♂️ 客観的な意見を取り入れて、今後さらに良い作文を書きたいと思うので、ご協力お願いします

Topic Agree or Disagree: Help from the local community is crucial for raising children POINTS → discipline、safety、working parents、privacy 「肯定意見」 Iagree with the statement that help from the local community is crucial for raising children. There are two reasons to support this contention: the promotion in working for parents and the respect of discipline. These days, almost all the companies in Japan are facing the problem which is how they treat their employees who have children. In fact, these people, especially women, have difficulty in working. What the matters worse, many of them are forced to quit their job because of raising children. To deal with this problem, it is necessary for the local community to help parents raise children. Moreover, help from others will lead to promote the rate of women who continued working after childbirth. In other words, thanks to help from the local society, Japanese companies can improve their working environment. In addition to this, children will be sociable and polite if they are taken care of by another person of family. Also, children will realize the importance of cooperation with others. For these reasons, I strongly believe the local society should do more for parents who raise children.

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