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[4] Read the instructions and write a well-organized answer in English. (50 points) Virtual reality (VR)* refers to a high-quality simulation of reality created by a computer. Probably the most famous use for VR so far is gaming. But VR has also been used to improve society in various fields such as education, medicine, and engineering. Describe a single specific way that virtual reality can be used to improve society. Explain your idea in detail in about 100 English words. Notes: Virtual reality (VR)*: VR systems use special glasses that completely cover the user's eyes. These glasses show a very realistic picture of a world created by the computer. In addition, the systems can tell when the user moves their head, arms, and sometimes other body parts. So users can control the action by natural movement. Some systems even let users feel like they are touching things. Thus, VR systems can make users feel like they are really in another world. 〔答案〕 I suggest you to simulation with VR. For example, doctors can practice operation. I have the three reasons. First, VR's display is very real. So doctors can do as if real simulation. Second, every one can make simulation software. If you want add patients information to VR and study how to make software, you can make VR software to yourself. Third, medical professors can use VR simulation in lecture. If they do this, Students who want be surgeon in the future will reduce about operation's anxiety. In this way, VR have a lot of possibilities that useful of medical field. For these reasons, I suggest VR simulations.

至急お願いいたします🚨 生物の質問です。 ミトコンドリアの経路についての説明だと思うのですが、電子オーバーフローモデルと電子分布モデルの違いを教えていただきたいです。 また、どういう仕組みなのか、何故このように電子が流れるのかも教えていただきたいです。 UQ poolはユ... Read More

(A) Electron overflow model (considered out-of-date) Alt UQ pool Alternative oxidase inactive. Alt No alternative pathway activity Cytochrome pathway unsaturated Cyt (B) Electron distribution model (reflects current thinking) UQ pool Cyt Alternative pathway active Cytochrome pathway saturated Alt Alternative oxidase active Alt UQ pool Cyt Cyt Figure 14.33 Two models for regulation of electron flow through the alternative oxidase. (A) In the electron overflow model, no appreciable electron transfer through the alternative pathway takes place until electron flow through the cytochrome pathway is at or near satu- ration. This could result from the effects of respirato- ry control, if the rate of mitochondrial ATP produc- tion exceeds its rate of utilization in the cytosol, or from some externally imposed stress, such as low temperature. Under such circumstances, the UQ pool becomes sufficiently reduced to allow electrons to flow through the alternative oxidase, the latter re- quiring that the UQ pool be 40% to 60% reduced to attain significant activity. (B) In the electron distribu- tion model, the alternative and cytochrome path- ways both show significant activity at low levels of UQ pool reduction, and electrons are distributed be- tween the two pathways on the basis of the relative activities of each pathway. The activity of the alter- native oxidase under these circumstances is thought to be regulated by the action of a-keto acids and by reduction/oxidation of the intermolecular disulfide bond, as well as by additional regulatory mecha- nisms not yet characterized.

(3)の解説の □2個 のところが理解できません。なぜ2個なのでしょうか。1つだと思うのですが、分からないので教えて下さい！

4 addition という単語の8文字を1列に並べるとき,次のような並べ方は何通りあるか。 (1) すべての並べ方 (2) 「not」 という連続した3文字が現れるような並べ方 (3) n の方がo より左に現れる並べ方

答えはBです。 後者ははアメリカ英語を学習した人にとってはなじみがある。 従って/言い換えると、両方とも正しい英語である。 変ですか？ CとDがおかしい理由教えてください。

The latter may be more familiar to those The former is common in who have learned American English. Why did this happen? Noah Webster, a textbook author and Great Britain, Canada and Australia. lexicographer, wanted "Americanized" spelling and pronunciation of words, different from those in Great In 1828, he published a two-volume dictionary which greatly helped to make the Americanized Britain. spelling common. The fact of the matter was it was part of American nationalism. After winning political from Great Britain in 1776, Americans became more conscious of developing their own identity as a new In literature, Americans rejected such European criticism nation. Nationalism rose in various fields. The northeastern region produced world-famous American as "Americans have no national literature." Which is more familiar to you, "centre" or "center"? writers I Edgar Allan Poe, a detective story writer and Ralph Waldo Emerson. In addition to these writers, there were also inventors who greatly helped in advancing American industry. Cyrus Hall McCormick, the inventor of the reaper, and Samuel F. S. Morse, the developer of the telegram code, are two such inventors. 間 1 In diplomacy, President James Monroe issued in 1823 the so-called "Monroe Doctrine," a warning to European nations not to interfere with America and the Western Hemisphere. It was the American This policy of isolationism embraced in the doctrine continued as the U.S. intention to be オ diplomatic policy until the end of the century. While challenging European criticism and power, young America tried to be more independent of Europe, not only politically, but economically, culturally and diplomatically. (2) lexicographer: ##*** isolationism: ŽÈ* ア both are correct English. 33 空所 A In addition reaper: 刈り取り機 interfere 干渉する Brajcich and Tanioka (2010) Eye on American Culture (**) ***** ア を満たすのに最も適切なものを、A~Dのうちから1つ選べ。 B However C Therefore D In other words

英検2級のライティングの添削をお願いします🙏 内容、構成、語彙、文法が各4点で16点満点です。 写真は解答にのってたものです。 (TOPIC) Today, many buildings collect rainwater and then use it in variou... Read More

4 I think such buildings will become more common in the future. First, by making use of rainwater, a building owner can reduce the cost of water used from the water supply. For example, rainwater can be used for washing cars and for growing plants in gardens. Second, collecting rainwater can be useful in times of disaster. Due to damage to water pipes, supplies of water are sometimes limited. In such cases, rainwater will help until normal conditions return. Therefore, I think buildings that collect rainwater will become more common in the future. (*上記はあくまでも解答例です。)

who以下の訳が分かりません。 直訳では「その考えは、2 つの言語で学習することは、2 つの語彙、2 つの文法、そしておそらく 2 つの文化的習慣と期待を学ばなければならない生徒」という訳になると思うのですが、以下の問題集の訳のように「~することを生徒に求め」とあります。... Read More

英検２級の英作文です。 アドバイスなどよろしくお願いします🙇‍♀️

TOPIC Some people say that Japan should accept more people from other countries to work in Japan. Do you agree with this opinion? POINTS ■ Aging society ■ Culture ▪ Language

ここはなぜwillを使うのですか？現在形じゃだめなんでしょうか！

文構造と段落要旨 (1.01) 【現状の課題】 仕事を離れてもメールを使う人が多い。 形式主語(後ろの不定詞を指す) It is becoming (more and more) difficult (for workers) [to switch off from work]. S V ますます難しくなりつつある たとえば (For example), many workers answer or write e-mails (on the train <to and from work》), wwwwwwww www. V① V② O A メールに返信したり書いたりする 電車の中で ◆仕事への行き帰りの 昼食時間に 多くの働く人は [A, B, and C の形 when 以下を修飾している (during lunchtime), and (at home after work). (In addition), many people (even) check C S V そして仕事のあとに家で 多くの人々はチェックさえする B しかし 働く人々にとって 真主語 O 選択権を their work e-mail (when they go (on vacation) (to other countries)). O S'V' 仕事のメールを 休暇で出かけるときに 仕事から離れて頭を休めることは (Z.05) 2 【ある解決法の提示】 休暇中に届くメールを削除するシステムがある。 それに加えて (However), this might be changing. A German car manufacturer is giving its workers S V S V O これは変わりつつあるかもしれない あるドイツの自動車メーカーは 社員に与えつつある くつろぐことができるだろう できるだろう ビーチで ほかの国々へ 【形容詞的用法の不定詞 that (接続詞) の省略 the choice 〈not to receive e-mail (when they are on holiday)〉 This will mean [employees 前の名詞を修飾 接 S' V' S V S' ◆メールを受け取らないという これは~を意味する 彼らが休暇中には will be able to relax (on the beach) (instead of dealing with work problems)]. V' C' 仕事の問題を処理する代わりに O 休暇中に 社員が they are の省略 不定詞の to の後ろに副詞が挿入された形 Employees can choose [to (automatically) remove all work e-mail (while on vacation)]. S V O 社員たちは 選ぶことができる 仕事関係のすべてのメールを自動的に削除することを

文法的なミスがないか確認していただきたいです！！

Writing I'I couldn't give my full strength. There are two things that I can do things for improve my writing skill. First, getting used to write my opinion in English. I will write my opinions about one theme every week. Also, I'll ask my teacher to check the opinion. Second, building up my vocabulary. I study hard especially synonym. I didn't mean to use some word many times. Therefore I want to rephrase. In addition, I want to understand nuance of English. Then I'll tell audience my opinion clearly. I took care t

文法的な誤りがないか確認してもらいたいです🙏 授業の振り返りで、speaking分野です。 書きたかったこと(日本語) 私は自分の意見と意見の間に沢山の間を空けないように気をつけました。ですが私にとってその行動は難しいです。私のEnglish skillをあげるためにでき... Read More

I took care to speak which don't make many space between my opinion and my opinion. However. It is difficult for me to do this action. I have two things for improve my English skill. First, I want to build up my vocabulary. I'll check English words which I don't know. these words mean and function. Late In addition. I'll record these words in my notebook. Second, I'll listening to English radio and music. This action relate to become stronger at listening skill.