Question

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文法的なミスがないか確認していただきたいです！！

Writing
I'I couldn't give my full strength. There are two things that I
can do things for improve my writing skill. First, getting used
to write my opinion in English. I will write my opinions about
one theme every week. Also, I'll ask my teacher to check the
opinion. Second, building up my vocabulary. I study hard especially
synonym.
I didn't mean to use some word many times.
Therefore I want to rephrase. In addition, I want to understand
nuance of English. Then I'll tell audience my opinion clearly.
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